The Cool-Headed Captain Is a Little Sweet

It's not bad. Although there are some repetitions in the article, it can be seen that the author is very serious in writing. The young couple is sweet and at ease. The case is not long and does not seem tiring. The plot and emotional lines are interspersed and handled well.

In the early stage, Shen was very sweet and took good care of Lu. Lu was often shy and his ears turned red easily. In the later stage, he was also very good at eating meat. He was also very good at eating meat. He was not abusive. I liked it very much.

It feels pretty good, but as I read it so far, there are a lot of repetitive parts. It makes people confused, and it feels like they have entered a loop. There are many places that I thought were the content of previous chapters.

That sounds great, keep up the good work.

It's very good-looking, and the plot at work is also very attractive. It's an ordinary little couple 🥰

Oh my god, it's such a good read, a sweet and ordinary couple💕💕 After reading it, the spots on the corpse have faded💕💕

Good luck to the author!

The emotions of the case are interspersed without being abrupt at all.

Very nice sweet article