[Everyday Life with Supernatural Abilities, True Harem Ending]
One day, Zhang Mufeng suddenly came to his senses and decided to start living alone.
To make his life happier, he planned to order a lifelike doll online for company. He chose discreet shipping and spent 800 yuan on a long-haired, straight-black style.
But when he opened the package, he froze. It wasn’t the black-haired doll he’d ordered. Instead, there was a white-haired figure covered in dirt and blood, looking filthy.
Zhang Mufeng’s first thought was that he’d received a secondhand item.
But when he leaned closer, something seemed off. The craftsmanship was far too lifelike. Its skin was as smooth as a real person’s, and even its expression seemed vivid and animated.
Wait… this isn’t a doll at all. It’s a living person!
After reading more than a dozen chapters, I personally feel that the writing style is a bit like the Japanese lifestyle animation. It is tepid and has a lot of poisonous points, but overall it is okay.
The content is rather out-of-the-box, and the thinking is not very coherent. It feels like I am writing whatever comes to my mind⊙_⊙. However, judging from the content and writing style, it can still get 5 stars (๑> <๑)!
Watch until the end, Lao Zuo can do anything... If you have any opinions, the main thing is to listen to advice 😢
Well, my style feels like that of a newbie who has just started writing... But everyone is working hard! It's already great to decide to post it for everyone to see and stick with it. Work hard! You can start a new book, but can you not have a hasty ending and give the story an explanation? Even if three updates a day become one every three days...
The author has a very good attitude and listens to advice. Little author, I'm back to see you again.
Are you ready for it to be over?
It looks good, I love reading it, I hope the author will update it as soon as possible.
The writing is good, but after the exam, I feel calmer. I don't want to read something that is too "heavy (?)", So I can't give it my full attention.
It's creative, but a bit fantasy.
The writing is good, but I don't know what I'm writing. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I still can't figure out what I want to write. There are a lot of poisonous points and it's not smooth.