综漫：葬送的辛美尔

Tomato rarely sees good-looking Fulian fanfics. In fact, Simmel is really well written, because he died at the beginning, and he only lives in everyone's memories. But there is no doubt that he is a real leader in the squad. There is no forced he, yes, I have always thought that it is difficult for Xia Youjie's position to have a truly good ending. The most interesting thing is that the author writes the fighting scenes very well, which is rare! ! ! I hope I can stick with it [blowing kiss]

It's beautiful, the writing is very strong, and the quality is more than three times that of what tens of thousands of people are reading. The battle logic is very clear, the relationship between Gojo Satoru and Xia Youjie, and the friendship between the senior high school students. The descriptions are detailed, the characters are not OOC, the entry and position of the protagonist are not awkward, and the dialogue is not a pure drama. The author can add a few tags to the introduction to draw more attention. Is it a manga or something? The first time I clicked in, I thought it was a fan of Fulilian. I didn't expect that it was a curse. I thought the Dasu Nuo in the introduction was just a joke.

Totally a masterpiece. . . It only took me, a person who had never watched Fulilian, to understand Simmel's personality charm in just a few seconds, and I supplemented the seriousness. The details of the battle are described very well, and the plot is smooth and not draggy. Every character is well drawn and not OOC at all. What a great fan work. . . Teacher, I will follow you all my life

It's really, really beautiful. The author must continue to write more, please [crying] Do you only write about this world? Or is it a different world? Will Fulian appear in the later stage? Really want to know

Although there are a lot of animes in the beginning, once you accept this setting, you will find that the writing style is quite mature and the characters have their own characteristics. I suspect that the author is a veteran author who is opening a trumpet to fry fish. It is worth watching.

I'm stuffed. This is what Simmel is like, it's absolutely delicious, it's not OOC, and it teaches you how to be a fan. The development of spells is also top-notch. You know spells better than a one-eyed cat [laughs]

Awesome, such a novel subject, a certain blue-haired brave man, just continue to be narcissistic! Then, will Fulian appear in the follow-up? I'm super looking forward to it. !

It's really good to watch, the emotions are very delicate, the battles are also very passionate, and the jokes (?) Are also very funny. Simmel is so handsome. I really like watching it. I feel so uncomfortable when I can't watch it. I really want to watch more from the author, Negevadasi...

Please watch "The Brave Simmel Wants to Resign" [crying] [crying] This is the most beautiful novel I have ever seen about a character from one world traveling to another world. Simmel's image feels completely non-OCC, and each character in the original work is well portrayed, and it even feels like it can be used as content not mentioned in the original work to enrich the original work. The author's writing style is excellent, taking you from dullness to climax again and again, just like taking a bath in a hot spring. The plot does not completely follow the original work, there is nothing unreasonable at the moment, and the fight scenes are also very exciting. Especially the writing feels like watching a new season of a TV series. It's almost like eating rice rolls without soy sauce and then suddenly adding soy sauce. In my subjective opinion, the quality is 9 points and definitely not good enough.

For classical two-dimensional fans, even the writing and wording are orthodox among orthodoxies, just like Simmel's orthodox commentary on [The Brave Man]. A work that reminds people of Shuke's heyday. "I want to play with my favorite characters, and I want to change all the bad endings." These innocent wishes have long been forgotten. After twenty years, some people are still calling for childhood? No words to express it, only tears

I am a great craftsman who insists on pure hand rubbing in the AI ​​era! The author's sense of life in the article is too strong, and his writing style is also very mature. You can roughly guess the author's age () ... Anyway, boss, you must keep writing! ! !

It's very interesting. It's a very heartwarming daily life. I was very moved when I watched it, because actually when I watched the anime, the bitter summer has always been a point that I felt very sad. In my heart, Xia Youjie was such a gentle person, but he became like that. If Simmel was here, the ending in the original work would not have happened. I am looking forward to the next plot.

The characters in this book are the same as the original and even have a grandpa version of the mentality. It's really cute (referring to the dialogue) and the fighting scenes are well written. It's a comprehensive comic with absolutely no highlights. Is this my reward for not looking for new books for two months? It's so good☺️ When reading a book, you really need to read the rating details first, otherwise you will miss the beautiful new book [Blow a kiss] Still got the same review, but suddenly I realized that this was not a comprehensive comic, but only a cursed one.

The writing is great, the plot, settings, and characters are all consistent with the original work. It's rare to see such detailed works. He created a new plot on the premise of conforming to the original work, but the author did it reasonably, and neither the reaction methods of the brainiac nor the inevitable thinking problems of Jie were perfunctory. Great👍🏻, but I have a little doubt. Simmel has a very high combat thinking, but he shouldn't have such a high strategic thinking, right? The tactic of suppressing the brain in the whole process is too strong. However, it can also be understood as the growth of a brave man after defeating the Demon King. Having said this, I feel it makes sense. Is this the great wisdom of an old brave man? [Laughs] Hahaha, come on, author

It's good-looking. I was attracted by Xinmeier. I didn't expect it to be very good-looking. At first, I didn't expect it to be a fanfic of Shuhui (or a comprehensive comic?). I thought the introduction was just a joke. There is also a blue-haired goddess in the front, which is a bit interesting. The writing is good. Although I haven't read the book, I can read it smoothly. The jokes are moderate. Others are not sure about it, but at present, there is nothing OOC about Simmel. Generally speaking, it feels good. However, this book has Simmel as the protagonist, and I am a little curious about whether he will go to other worlds. The ending is a blur. It took me half a month to catch up to the end of this book, and I felt a bit melancholy. It's rare to see such a high-quality book, and it's on Tomato. It has to be interesting, it has to have plot, it has to have fighting, and it has to have imagination. It's really good-looking. Although it's a pity that it doesn't have multiple worlds, it's also delicious to be able to write about one world in depth.

The writing is very strong. It's surprising that Tomato has such a strong writing ability. The characters are restored, the plot is restored, but there is no lack of novelty and details. It's great, but there are too few. Please update it soon.

It's really good-looking, the plot is very smooth, and there is no sign of forcing the plot. The author must have carefully laid out the outline. Secondly, my dialogue skills are also very good. For a time, I thought it was me coming. The words the characters said and the interactions they produced made me feel like "Ah, I watched another episode!" The rest of the advantages have been mentioned in the comment section. Finally, please update the handsome big brother who looks like Xinmel! [Crazy]

Even if you haven't watched Fulien of Burial, you can still feel the charm of Simmel's great hero. The author has a very high understanding of Fu Lian and Fu Lian, especially Fu Lian. Whether it is plot, combat mechanism, or character relationship, the author's accomplishments have surpassed Akumi by a hundred million times. He is the well-deserved king of Fu Lian... Please come and watch it😭😭😭It is a masterpiece that perfectly combines seriousness and liveliness. The variety comic theme is an infinitely broad stage. It is a unique and wonderful experience. A small taste is worth the price. The beef tomato noodles teacher can support you! ! !

It's a very good book. Although at first glance you may think that the two themes are not well integrated, the author controls it very well. Immortal Food, unfortunately, the number of words is too few at the moment, and I am afraid that I will die if I keep reading, so I ask you to read the latest chapter every day even if you want to keep reading.

It has great potential. Both the daily descriptions and the combat descriptions are very good. There will be some flaws in some places, but a story cannot be perfect and it has a good grasp of the characters' personalities. It is worth watching.

Awesome, I will probably remember you for the rest of my life with tomato beef noodles. The writing is very good, except that it is a comprehensive story. There is not much description, but whether it is a battle of wits or a bond of pure love and humor, it has all the elements. Moreover, our uncle Simmel has high damage with his left hand and high values ​​​​with his right hand without OOC. I highly recommend it.

It's super good-looking, and the author clearly grasps the core of the curse and depicts the hero very well. In the battle description in the article, the characters' combat IQs are extremely high! Five-star praise is sent [sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart][sending heart] Finished spreading flowers! ! ! Author thank you, I'm full [Like][Like][Like]

Simply number one in my mind! I feel that Simmel's character creation is very suitable, so even though I don't know much about him, I went to look up his information. It is very natural and smooth, and the writing style is more comic-like. There are narrations and inner dramas, wonderful picture descriptions, and a large number of memes covering various episodes. The author has a great imagination and the writing is logical, even beyond my imagination. It's fun, heartwarming, passionate and witty. The fighting scenes are also great, the visuals are so strong, it feels like you are reading a comic! I really like this way of writing. The characters all have good endings, and the characters are handled very well, and some characters are given the appearance and abilities they should have. Let me ask you a question, do you think Brainflower can become an ally? How will you deal with the brain flower? How should Xia Youjie solve it? I really got the bonus of the ending, I really don't want it to end! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It's a very good fanfic. It makes my Void Demon turn away. It's a life, but it's not a bad life, it's a life that makes people physically and mentally immersed. I can't help but watch this. I just want to watch this warm daily life and see such a strong person fighting. It's really worth the price. The battles are so exciting, I'm already playing Alzo and the Brave on a loop, the writing and plot are super! Big! Cup!, It's really a hearty reading, author, I will probably never forget you in my life (sentiment)

It's great, for the first volume that's been completed so far. Simmel's character is full-bodied and fits the character. "If it were Simmel, he would definitely do this." This is true no matter who he is. The Curse Chapter has a lot of leisurely daily life that the original work does not have, but it is not abrupt or stiff. Although the author said that he does not know how to write emotional lines, "this is a lie." There is no doubt that the battle is fun, but the timing is confusing, because the time of high-speed battles is often surprisingly short, but the plot is very long, but if you ignore the time, it is very enjoyable to watch. Excellent Fulian fan fiction often lies in grasping the characters rather than the plot. Perhaps because the original work is also a road movie, the highlight is the interaction between people. This reminds me of "Understand Humans!" "Aura", although that one is more deviated from the original character design, it is very interesting. It is so interesting that there are endless novels about three novels, and it can actually reach 180,000 words.

Oh my gosh, this is so beautiful! The author's writing style is very sophisticated, the characters are created very well, and the details of the interactions between the characters are also very warm. Moreover, the author's descriptions of the scenes are like reading comics.

The writing is very good, especially like a comic storyboard; the battles are also very exciting, respecting the settings of the original work, and based on this, a very exquisite battle design is carried out. My favorite is the scene between Yigu vs. Clepsydra [crying]; in addition, the characters are also well grasped, and there is no OOC, especially for the character Xia Youjie, there is no deliberate whitewashing, and only after reasonable plot design is it fully transformed into one's own combat power. I just don't know why the rating is so low. On a tomato level, it feels like it's worth 9.5 Or more. I'll give it a five-star rating first.

(Serious face) As a reader, I really have to sincerely admire the author's writing skills. The author's grasp of the visual sense is very strong, (maybe the author is the ultimate two-dimensional person), giving people the feeling of watching anime. The sense of storyboarding and action are very good. The author himself should have carefully studied the original work and even made his own extension. In short, I read 0 OOC parts. Including the author's own inner description is like a connecting point. Anyone who has watched anime can imagine the expressions and expressions of these characters. Here I would like to mention the combat description, which is my favorite description. When describing the action, it can provide a storyboard for the psychological description. When Xia Youjie and Xin were fighting the curse spirits in the hospital, they were storyboarded before the final round. People who are reading this for the first time may not be comfortable with some of the author's initial separations, but they will find out as they read later (it's so good when I go there)

It's super, super good-looking. The teacher portrays everyone very well. It's not OOC at all, and the writing style is nothing to say. It's been a long time since I've seen such a cursed fanfic that I like. I hope the teacher can stick to it, and I will keep following up! ! !

Let's talk about the conclusion first: full marks The overall writing is so fluent that it doesn't look like a newcomer, the characters fit the original work, and the small ideas are very interesting. The change of fighting perspective and dialogue interweaving are also very good. It is a high-quality product. Disadvantages: The emotional scenes are a bit weak, but since Fulian's original character has such a cold character, it's not a problem. Finally, the amount was too little!