The Sea of Sand: Hey! Don't You Dare Mutate!

It's a relatively novel setting in the fanfic, so I'll give it 5 points. The plot is also relatively conventional, and the writing is rare and good. The only uncomfortable part is when the heroine wants to kill a prisoner, the narration from the male protagonist's perspective keeps emphasizing that the heroine is not a good person (a compliment). Do you want to write a three-dimensional version of the heroine? It's quite fragmented. Compared to the male protagonists, the female protagonist has always been a white character. However, I like to write about the female protagonist who is actually gray, but there is no plot at all. It only writes about the female protagonist's cold expression. It would be great if there is a reversal later. And I beg the author not to arrange a plot where the heroine gets raped by a rubbish, and she doesn't kill her herself, but relies on the hero to save her.

What a novel setting, great writing, such exciting pulls, and delicious rice. It's really good to watch. Please update it. I will give you the animal shape of a donkey. I love you😊

Already tied, I can only say that the author's xp is very impressive and his imagination is great. Not a sweet pet, not a heroine. I feel like this book is entirely for the author's xp, but the heroine is really charming and tough 🥺 The relationship between the female protagonist and the male protagonists is a bit like that of a sentinel and a guide. There is great physical attraction, but there is not much sincerity... The female protagonist is indeed quite miserable. The favorability level of this book also rises very slowly. The current highest is 60😅 for my brother. And I haven't mentioned the favorability level for a long time. Is it because the heroine has regained her sight? However, the author said that although it is slow but steady, maybe the gold content of each point of favorability is also higher? Looking forward to the follow-up, I hope the female protagonist will stay awake, treat the male protagonists as tools, and not be tempted by them! Especially Pingxie Heihua, these four treated the heroine as a tool and went too far😅. I will follow up on who the heroine is really with in the end 🙂 , especially these four 😠😠😠. If it were possible to take ten thousand steps back, Li Cu, Chen Pi, Wang Can could do it, but these four would definitely not do it🚫

It's so good that I finished it in one go. The female protagonist doesn't have a golden finger, but she is very brave. In order to regain his sight, he can mediate among four people with eight hundred scheming minds. There's just no fat mother on the show. I want to see the young cows gather together and interact with each other.

It's beautiful [please ask for more updates] The female protagonist is very smart, and the interaction with the male protagonists every step of the way is so delicious! I just hope that the author can give the heroine some golden fingers so that she can have some resistance when facing danger.

It feels like it was written by AI and then polished. There are many contradictions in the settings. I forgot about the previous settings after writing it. I saw that the heroine's character and personality are very suspended in the back. But if you don't care about writing and logic, this setting is actually quite delicious.

It's so beautiful! The stolen fanfics I found on Tomato either have good writing but either have two male protagonists or the female protagonist is very crazy and pretentious (don't comment on my personal opinion), or they have good settings but naive writing or smell of AI. So far it's really good! The stolen pen fanfics found on Tomato are either good in writing but either have male or female protagonists who are crazy and pretentious (please don't comment on my personal opinion), or the setting is good but the writing is childish or smells like AI. So far, the only real writing and content found on Tomato that I like are "Stealing Pen: Broken Pens of Yucun" (original work, very good-looking) and this one

The heroine is very smart and has a strong heart. She always knows her purpose. There are no surprises so far. Every pair of cps of the heroine is very interesting. The setting is very special, which naturally rationalizes the heroine's abilities. The author has a strong narrative ability. I hope the author can keep this pace. I hope that the follow-up will not abuse the heroine too much. I hope the heroine becomes stronger. I hope the heroine always keeps a clear head in the process of gaining the favor of the protagonist group. It is a tonic to abuse the girl. Wow.

The setting is quite novel, but the part where the boy turns into a scorpion and the heroine is really hard to accept 😂😂😂

Very nice fanfic! Follow up every night, be sure not to give up. Wu Xie's Snake Sculpture is really astringent🥹, the ambiguity is well written, and the psychological description is also very good. Looking forward to the next plot! I want to see the contrast between getting along well with each other, and then will there be a crematorium for chasing my wife? Looking forward to it❤️