
Yushou: There Is a Problem with My System, and It's Huge.
御兽:我的系统有问题,还很大
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 910k Words
- Genre
- Urban
- Subgenre
- Urban High Martial Arts
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 6d ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
29.5kReads
6.5Score
3.6kShelves
408Chapters
4.1kListens
279kReads · all time
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Taming the Beast, Old Bookworm, Has a Big Mouth, 9:05 and Above, Don't Show Off Your Strength
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Nice Beast-Control Novel, Please Pray
Does anyone have any good animal-control novels? I beg you.
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I Beg the Male Protagonist to Open a Shop to Cultivate Beasts, Such as Monsters.
It's just like training beasts in the store, not running around and fighting. I used to have a copy, but I can't find it now.
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Relatively speaking, it is quite good, with a simple breeder and a research-oriented protagonist. It is much better than other novels that pretend to be breeders and work as beast masters, and the age group chosen is correct. The breeders in many novels are actually poor students in the third year of high school, which is outrageous. Please write it well, and please train it as a research scholar. After all, trainers and breeders are two different concepts, but you can also have a championship process of valuable events. A breeder who can't fight is not a good trainer [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]
The subject matter is okay, the plot is non-toxic, and the protagonist focuses on scientific research. Although it has a strong AI flavor, it is still quite interesting overall. The AI flavor is too strong and makes it tiring to read.
It's rare to write a book review. Generally speaking, the flaws are not hidden, but there are also many problems, such as being too close to each other and unclear about the cause and effect, and the supporting characters are too stereotyped. Also, the author may not have gone through that university experience, so he is a bit too idealistic about writing papers and publishing them, but this is actually not a bad experience for reading. However, for those who have actually gone through the process, it may feel a bit too serious and exaggerated. Generally speaking, it is a breath of fresh air among beast-control novels. It is much better than most of the first three chapters that focus on hidden evolutionary routes. Moreover, it is indeed rare to write a beast-control novel independently outside the Pokémon framework, and to integrate companionship growth and shining points. It reminds me of the feeling of watching the first half of the scientific beast-control chapters. But to be honest, the author's description of favors and characters is indeed a bit too simple, and it does not make people remember it deeply at first sight. It is really a pity. I hope to continue to maintain the style in the later period, and at the same time expand the contact area, so that readers can have a more concrete experience of the entire world. Seeing thunder in the smallest details will reveal the true story. I really don't want to follow it anymore. Forget about the previous ones. Can you not let readers know the gender at a glance every time a new character is added? What you write is a beast-control novel, not a harem novel. The ones you wrote at the beginning are all introduced as soon as they appear, so I won't say anything about them, but please give some consideration to the weight of gender later. I won't complain about the plot in which the protagonist is not dragged for identity verification or knowledge exchange. But in the current situation, you should not have the protagonist to do this standard area, unless you completely intend to write this novel as an intellectual novel. The normal plot should be based on a few of their standards, and then the protagonist feels it is inappropriate and then slightly changes it. In other words, they made this thing, tried it for a period of time, found that it was still defective, and then the protagonist provided additional opinions. Also, it's been so long, it's time to start. Your audience is beast-controlling lovers. As you said, beast-controlling is based on strength, not purely research value. Not to mention the imposed battle plot, but normal auxiliary research to improve, and then participate in the arms race or secret exploration, combined with the special resources buried in the previous article, it can be smoothly connected. Such rigid writing and research plots will really not attract readers.
It is a pretty good scientific research article on the beast-control style. There is very little combat content, but it is understandable. After all, it can capture the core "scientific research" of its own story. After considering other side "battles", it seems that the emotional line is still shallow after all. The proportion of female characters in this article is not very high. However, since most of the important characters in the story are women, it will appear to be more "diligent". Some male main characters can be added appropriately, or some female sub-plots that do not revolve around the protagonist. The above is just my personal opinion. Please judge for yourself whether it is good or not.
It's quite interesting to watch. The AI flavor is a bit strong, and some of the scientific research is incomprehensible. However, the setting is relatively novel and does not rely entirely on the system. At least it is more interesting than those that follow the routine completely.
There is AI, but it has little impact. The cultivation and research process is relatively reasonable. Some novels of this type directly assess strange beasts that evolve a new route on the spot. I can only say that I understand them all. The questions given are about the research direction and checking for omissions, rather than directly giving the results, which is much better than directly copying the answers. The protagonist now has to consider the realization of research results and the establishment of a training institute, otherwise it will be difficult to do anything.
It is a very rigorously written research article. The descriptions of various data are very good, and the interaction with the heroine or female supporting character is also very good. It's the kind of mediocre, but very interesting. Although the score is not high, if you write more and get more people to evaluate it, it will probably get very good results. This is a very good research article on beast control.
It's a pretty good research article. It's systematic but not overwhelming. The system is a bit of a trick, and it's different from ordinary beast-control articles. In some places, the author's writing style is a bit gentle and has the flavor of a light novel. I quite like this feeling. The realization of each of the protagonist's theories includes experiments, thinking, hiding, and cool points. The only problem is that the combat power is still not clear enough, including the combat power of the system, but since there are no battle scenes now, we will wait. In summary, this is a pretty good beast-control novel in Tomato. It's an eye-catcher and worth reading.
It looks good. It is not a brainless pure system flow. The design of the researcher is very good. Please add more!
During the day, I do molecular biology and metabolic research, and at night I read novels and watch you do research. Suddenly I felt a little pressure on my heart and I threw [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]
A very good book. Anyway, I have read 45 chapters so far and they are all very interesting.
It's a good start. Instead of directly becoming the strongest Pokémon in the world of beast control, it's quite interesting to do research on beast control by comparing the system.
This book truly deserves five stars. As a researcher, cross-validate and correct misconceptions about the system and the world. Unfortunately, the subject matter is not very flattering, so the rating is low. After all, people who like this book should be among those who want to learn to be a master of literature. Pokémon should be more of a hobby to cultivate and challenge.
The plot is okay, and I like Professor Xiao very much in terms of character design. Many of the first 240 chapters of this book are about daily life and the research process of the protagonist, which is quite good. There is no direct way to crack something, but to take your time.
Okay, it's pretty good-looking Too many repetitive plots
It's pretty good. It's a research novel. There are some errors in the system. The protagonist doesn't use the system mindlessly. He also does his own research and uses the system data as a reference!
My head hurts a bit when I read it. Did the author use AI to polish it? The writing has a little AI flavor. Overall, it's okay. I really like this subject matter.
The writing is very good. First of all, it is about research. It is not that the protagonist comes up with a new thing and then a lot of people come up to praise it. (I have read a Pokémon article before. The protagonist uses the Pokémon knowledge from the previous life to directly come up with the results. There is no process at all. The thesis and proof process are written by others, and then there are a lot of them. People come up to praise the researcher), and then the stitching is good, not only the single-stitched Pokémon, but also Locke, Cell, Digimon, etc., And now there is a game called Kabuki's Journey to the West that I have never heard of. There are so many elements sewn together that it is difficult to write, but if you can write it, it will definitely look better than a single-stitched Pokémon. After all, a single-stitched Pokémon is an assembly line novel.
Although the writing style is Ai, it is not bad. It is assisted by the system, but the system is not the truth and can make mistakes.
Author, please change his description. I feel that the taste of AI is a bit strong AI is very biased towards using, this is not..., But something... Hey, I saw much better after reading for a while
In fact, I was very emotional after reading this book. Who among those who like Ibrahimovic has never imagined the evolution of Ibrahimovic with all attributes and dual attributes? I've even thought about being bound to transform into a super giant stack. The key is that the author wrote it out, and he wrote it very well and carefully. I just want to plead here, hoping to have a perfect dream [Sending Hearts]
Come on, author! It is strongly recommended that the adaption field of the first Digimon be chosen between Iron Empire and Deep Sea Savior~Create the protagonist's own four-legged version of Seadramon 2.0~
This is a very, very good novel about studying the beast-bending style. I think the main thing now is for the author to write it slowly, and just finish it well and don't overwhelm it.
In fact, the writing is quite good, but it is indeed too academic so far, which makes it seem very niche. I think most readers just read novels and do not want to do real research.
Very beautiful, very beautiful
Reading this article reminds me of the days when I was writing my thesis.
I've finished reading it, nice. Are you asleep, author? I haven't updated yet.
Yes, a rare research article on beast control
At this stage, it is really rare to get a five-star rating for scientific research on beast control.
The score is low. Although the writing is indeed a bit poor, the score could be higher, around 8.