I Am Not Zhao Kuo, Who Can Have No Fault! ! !

As of the time I read it, the score was only 6.5. I personally think it is low. The writing is good, but the perspective is too single. There is almost no characterization of Qin Guo Baiqi. The current logic is logical. The author has a relatively clear concept of mobile warfare, and the protagonist's abilities are more realistic. Except for Chang Ping who leads the army (although he also loses the most), the rest are small teams, which is more in line with his abilities. The plot is compact and highly praised. I would like to give you some suggestions: There are so many famous generals in the Qin Kingdom. Don't just focus on one person to gain records. Don't make a series of flat moves. Make some twists and turns. Then there can be more drama in the Seven Kingdoms Game.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, this is the first time I have read a novel with a wide theme. It is quite novel, the sense of immersion is strong, and the story direction has a sense of reality. The rating of 9.5 Points is reasonable.

In the Battle of Changping, the so-called Bai Qi killed 400,000 Zhao soldiers was a complete fabrication! According to research by historians and archaeological excavations, several corpses were found buried in the Changping Ancient Battlefield, with the most numbering in the thousands. The total adds up to more than 10,000 people. It can be seen that the Qin army did not kill all the more than 400,000 Zhao soldiers. Instead, all the prisoners were tattooed on their faces (called Qianshou) and then sent to build the Great Wall and other projects.

I can only say that there are no major problems with the overall plot, but I want to raise a minor issue. The reason why Qin dares to attack Zhao with confidence is simply because of its alliances with vertical and horizontal alliances and distant and close attacks. If Qin uses most of its troops to attack Zhao and the country is empty, then other countries may also be involved. For example, Qi, which has been developing in an insignificant way, will then be fighting on two fronts.

It's okay. It's quite satisfactory. There's nothing special about it. I'm just a time traveler. I've traveled through all the time. It would be better if I open some cheats to improve the quality. After all, the essence of the novel is a story, not an academic paper... Anyway, I've traveled through time. It's already so outrageous. Then it's quite reasonable to add a system, cheats or other plug-ins. It can increase the excitement of the novel's plot, make it more interesting and exciting.

The Three Yellow Emperors and the Five Emperors established China, and Heluo Yibu Yao Xuanhuang Sui people's fire illuminates the cold winter, and they build a nest to protect themselves from the wind and frost. Shennong planted five grains and a hundred grasses, and the weather and solar terms nourished the livestock. The inheritance of oracle bone and elephant inscriptions is established, and a hundred flowers bloom in all directions Qin Yi slaughtered the six countries with his strong bow, and the six countries burned Xianyang with fire The Han Dynasty relied on the Chu and Qi princes to win, and the princes also buried the Han state. The powerful heroes of the Three Kingdoms are busy fighting for profit, and the Wei and Jin Dynasties are two-legged sheep. In the Southern Dynasties, the clouds cover the sun in the Buddhist temple, and the mist and rain cover the Buddha's light. In the Tang Dynasty, Hu horses were used to expand the territory, while in An Dynasty, the iron hoof of An Dynasty was used to expand the territory. Song Shan, Sandpiper and Clam Weng, benefited, but was finally destroyed by the Mongolian and Yuan Dynasties. Ming used greed to frighten the court, and finally a nest of snakes and rats descended Manchu drove into the clear land in embarrassment, but encountered a foreign enemy mourning the death of his hometown. If thorns are planted in temples, the common people will surely see blood and frost Those who persuade farmers seize millet from the fields, while those who control floods dig embankments and lay stakes If you talk too much about the strong king and the weak bandit, you will definitely appear in the human disguise of wearing a monkey crown. The beacon smoke rises in a foreign land, and the thieves shout to catch the thieves and the tribe will perish At dawn and dusk, ghosts and ghosts abound, and there are no tombs and dead bones scattered all over the neighboring country. There are evil spirits on the left and right, and hundreds of ghosts are rampant in black and white. Those who sow thorns will eventually get pricked in their palms; those who raise evil tigers will be wounded It's not the sword that destroys a family, it's the pillars that cause sores on their own As far as the eye can see, there is no idle land, and tenant farmers, young and old, scale the city wall. The wood disappears and is indifferent, the cold metal sweeps across ruthlessly The loss of faith and virtue is like a jackal, and the soil is stubborn and has no capacity. The clothes are luxurious and dignified, and there is no silkworm farmer. Empty talk about righteousness will lead to betrayal, and people will be slaughtered to show their dignity. Thirty-three liang of serf affairs, the national heritage has turned into chaff Inheritance is almost extinguished, and it is difficult for those without permanent property to learn from good deeds Cowards fantasize and pray for death, human rights have always been fought with blood and tears Meat eaters have no country, and all the family's sorrows arise from the palace walls A little knowledge becomes a standard when he gains power, and his relics are extensive, but the public is defeated The reason why we rise must be the reason why we will perish. Don't change the final chapter because of violence. If the three views are kept in mind, all things will be transformed and strengthened by themselves. The establishment of human rights through coexistence and coexistence, China's Nirvana and its bathing in the rising sun

It's a thrilling and thrilling story, full of twists and turns, and a chance to survive. It's worth reading.

A good historical article unique to Tomato, but not much traffic. The author is also very enthusiastic and has published three books in a row. I don't know why Qi has not appeared. I find it strange, but it is not easy for the author to give 5 stars.

Come and take a look, it's very nice [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking]

The writing is quite good, keep it up, the author greatly [like][like][like]

Not bad, looks very enjoyable

The allusion of talking about war on paper is wrong. The defeat was due to many factors. Zhao Kuo did not surrender or commit suicide, but went forward bravely to complete the battle. In his bones he deserves praise. It's the same in modern times. If you don't succeed, it's a joke, you just did something wrong, and it's something people talk about after dinner. Once you succeed, the narrative is different.

Zhao State is really a great regret for Zhao State

It seems ok so far

Good, good, good, good

It's good that there is no cliche of going to Western Qin to work as a cow or a horse.

Good, good, good, good, good, / true story

The plot is cleverly conceived, but a bit ruthless. Daliang can't save him, so he can just send some food into the city!

It's very well-spoken and the language is such that people want to keep listening. It's very popular!

The sense of immersion is really great, the writing style is strong, and the writing is vigorous, very good!

The author's writing style is very good, his historical knowledge is solid, the characters are rich, and the story plot is full of ups and downs. It is a rare masterpiece.

A very valuable book. Those who understand can benefit a lot. Simple and clear, good luck with your words

The links are ok and fascinating.

Listening to 100,000 words in one breath was very enjoyable. I hope it will be as enjoyable again in the future. Keep it up. The desperate escape in Changping was well written, great!!

This book is beautiful, thank you to the author

I like this style

The writing is very true, a masterpiece

Strong visual sense, immersive

Very good looking very good looking

The novel is well written.