After Being Reborn, I Turned Around and Handed Over My Cheat

The setting is very interesting, the male and female protagonists are also excellent, and the author's writing style is also very good. I like the writing style, and it is a story that is amazing at first glance. Ahem, sorry, the more I like the article, the higher my expectations are, and the more I can criticize... There are two points I don't understand. One is whether the pacing is too urgent? The heroine traveled alone to another world dozens of times in her previous life. The first time she traveled in this life, she almost died. She relied on the male protagonist (who was suspected to be the male protagonist) to save her life. The second time she traveled through the world, the male and female protagonists almost died. They all relied on the backup plan prepared by the male protagonist in advance to save their lives... Is this highlight all on the male protagonist? Even if we first arrange some near-miss worlds and let the heroine bring back valuable things, we can highlight the heroine first, and then upgrade the difficulty to highlight the male protagonist... Why do you think he is a suspected male protagonist? Because the heroine is a bit inexplicable and secretly poking at him. The second point is the coolness. Both the introduction and the beginning of the first chapter emphasize the coolness, but it is not the heroine who is happy, but the country. If the heroine is set to have a strong belief in the country, then it will be very happy to be the heroine. But the heroine's patriotic feelings are similar to those of us ordinary people, and she also has a laid-back character who doesn't like to work. Therefore, the heroine, with a strong sense of class, narrowly escaped death and brought back something valuable to the country... It's a bit refreshing, but it's not obvious.

Good article, excellent writing style, wild imagination, compact structure, and relaxed pace. I like the male protagonist, from image to personality, from skill to demeanor, to daily details, he is almost perfect. In comparison, I prefer the interstellar world

The heroine is very dangerous, but everyone else just goes to other worlds. Although the heroine is very nervous, she seems to care more about other worlds. The heroine wanted to lie down, but then she got angry again. The heroine is a bit like the panda, a national treasure, precious, but without autonomy. We let the panda eat whatever we want, and we can go to other countries if we want it to, like a priceless tool?

The direction of the story should be interesting. The heroine who wants to be a salted fish needs to constantly arm herself and is forced to start a business. She first comes to the world of cultivating immortals to improve her abilities before venturing into other places. It seems to be written in a cp style. After being reborn and handed in, she has been pushed forward, like a tool being studied, traveling, collecting, praising, training, trying, blaming herself, and comforting. Those who create problems comfort those who solve problems. There are words and ethics to standardize the heroine's thoughts. The security captain she is assigned also has the flavor of assigning CP. The heroine's sense of autonomy has been weakened too much. She can't take any time and can't stand up... Sometimes in the description, it feels like the golden finger is here to lift the captain~

Cool article, this is the real cool article, and it's cool with brains. It's so good! Such a beautiful article is still being serialized... I rarely comment on Tomato. This book must be popular. Author, you must write well!

I've reached chapter 151, and I'd like to comment. The author's work is really huge. I originally thought that having only one world of cultivating immortals would be too monotonous, but I didn't expect that the stories of the two subsequent worlds are also very good (I didn't know the follow-up until I saw chapter 151). Each character has a unique personality. Except for the protagonist Pangu Base, everyone else has a distinct personality and the characters are very three-dimensional. Regarding the love line, I think it's pretty good hahahahaha. There's no love story, but the small theater is also inexplicably annoying, but I don't know how the author will deal with it in the future. PS I don't know if it's because I'm listening to the book📖. I seem to have forgotten whether the author described the appearance of the male and female protagonists. The plot was so good that I forgot about it 😘

The early stage is quite interesting, and it involves a lot of subject knowledge. I think the author has put a lot of thought into it. The plot is quite compact, and it is very enjoyable to watch. Sometimes I feel humorous while writing it, haha. In short, the story is about relying on a big tree after rebirth, crossing borders to obtain resources, and improving strength. When I look at the back, I think the heroine looks like a tool to open the door.

The writing is so good, the imagination is great, the story line is very clear and not OOC, the logic is also very good, the story line is very open and not messy. So well written! Please continue to keep up the progress of this update. The more updates you can make, the better!!! 🤔🤔🤔

Very beautiful. I rarely finish reading an update in one sitting. The subject matter is not new, but it is much more innovative than similar themes. It is also very powerful even if you only stay in one plane and country for a short time. The writing is very attractive!

Very good! But can the country be kinder to our heroine? At present, the heroine is completely treated as a tool. Can the heroine be given a mention of force, so that the heroine has a golden finger that can only be used by herself, and has more say? Now the heroine's time travel cheats are considered national. Can you give our heroine some private cheats? The author is great😚😚