I Pretended to Turn Evil in Yokohama, but Everyone Believed Me

After reading a few chapters, I feel that it is okay. It can be seen that the author has a deep understanding of Dazai Osamu. The writing is good and the descriptions of the other characters are well handled. However, I feel that the language expression is a bit cumbersome. It keeps emphasizing how lonely Dazai is without Chuya, and there are a lot of explanations such as "It is... And not...". I feel that this kind of thing is left to the readers themselves. The effect of the product will be better. The switching between the protagonist and Osamu Dazai and the connection of the plot are a bit stiff. There is a section in the middle where everyone knows that if Dazai gets what he wants, it is also a bit deliberate. I feel that it can be optimized. (The above is purely personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it😇) Of course, overall, this is a relatively excellent fanfic. The creativity is very good and the writing is good. I hope I can write better and better in the future.

Give it a good review and give it to yourself (^O^)!

The writing is very good. Dazai, Chuuya, Oda and many others are very vivid and real. The emotions of the characters are well grasped. The plot advancement is not stiff. It is a good fan. I look forward to the follow-up.

It's really beautiful, why is there no one there?

Good looking, I will always follow you

Haokang, two-way salvation

Author, why didn't you see Edogawa Rambo?

Full marks!!! So pretty! The author's writing style is amazing! The writing is very vivid! That feeling between the lines! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!

(≧∇≦)/Delicious! I rarely read fanfics, but this one is really good, and miraculously I read it (~￣▽￣)~

I personally think that the emotions are well expressed