After Traveling into the Western Fantasy World, I Discovered That I Am the Author

The storytelling feels eloquent and the reading experience is comfortable. Speaking of which, the male protagonist is considered... A creator god or a high-dimensional creature? I hope he can be given some opportunities to become stronger later, rather than just becoming immortal.

The world view is described very clearly in the first few chapters. Although there is no gold finger, the protagonist is not useless because he was born with a traditional Chinese medicine. The plot is not cliché and the emotional description is very delicate. The original male protagonist did not let down his guard and become intimate because the protagonist was good to him. The emotional progress is written very rigorously. The protagonist has nothing at the beginning. It is simply a wilderness survival. How can I say that he has to survive with the character in the novel from scratch? It feels a bit like raising a son haha.

There are not many new books updated. So far, I like the fresh writing style of this book. The articles are not sloppy at all, and the storyline is very vivid. What I have read so far always gives me a sense of solidity in living a good life on my own. I also like the details of the two protagonists getting along with each other when they are not familiar with each other in the first half. In this section, the protagonist from the main perspective did not forcefully communicate with the other protagonist through words. He just silently expressed his intention of not hurting you with his actions. Then after getting along for a long time, the other protagonist voluntarily opened up his heart. It felt very gentle and always reminded me of the word "Long flowing water". In addition, the protagonist's habit of writing down some relevant but rarely used small details is really good. It makes me feel that even in the book, it is like a virtual world is really brought to life ៷>ᴗ<៷ Great article [send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's super beautiful. It really hit me

It's a very good development system, and the relationship between the two protagonists is smooth and flowing. The logic of the whole text is very smooth, and I look forward to further improvement of the world view and other settings. I am very curious about the relationship between Lin Yi and the prophet. In addition, I feel that the world view is very grand, and it should be a relatively long novel. The author is very busy (after all, he is studying medicine), so it doesn't matter if it takes longer. As long as it can be completed, the rating of this book should not be low. If a physical book comes out, I will definitely buy it. (Os: I'm afraid of breaking the update, so I just draw the cake like this)

It's been a long time since I've seen such a slow-paced book. The author's detailed descriptions are as if they were heaven and earth, and there are various descriptions of space. There is always a steady happiness when reading it🥰It's so beautiful. The writing style is also different, there is no rush, it's just slow, very beautiful, five-star praise! ⌯Oᴗo⌯

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There is a faint epic feeling that other western fantasy novels do not have. The narration feels very gentle and very soft😍The author is also very generous in each chapter, which makes my stomach swell. Os: I hope it will be released later, otherwise I will cry while reading. The author and the protagonist are absolutely in love!

Very beautiful! The pace of the story is well controlled, not too fast or too slow, and not verbose, everything is just right. Hey, the two of us feel a sense of happiness when we are together. I hope there will be no knife in the back!

The writing is really awesome, and there are a lot of words in one chapter. After reading only sixteen chapters, I felt like I had read more than fifty chapters. Delicious!

It feels like the world view is quite grand, and the plot line has just begun. It will take hundreds of chapters to finish. It's a book that makes people want to read it. As long as it's not sloppy or unfinished and keeps updating, the rating can reach 9.5. Four stars are given here to encourage the author to continue working hard.

It's pretty good, the writing is good, the plot is good, and the character settings really impressed me. The only bad thing is that some parts of the description appear too many times, such as: "He didn't... Or even... Just..." I saw that it happened quite a few times, and there were other things like this. I don't know if I want to give people a sense of mystery or something. It's not impossible to write like this, but I really recommend that it doesn't appear too many times. That is to say, apart from this point, there are no shortcomings. Overall, the writing is really good, and the number of words in each chapter is also very optimistic. And the content is also very rich and normal. There is no such bloody plot where others see the protagonist being different from others or deliberately ostracizing him because he is not dressed well. All in all, it's good and recommended.

It feels quite novel, the writing is okay, and it's easy to read. The protagonist has almost no force value and belongs to the intellectual side. There are not many plots of killing and upgrading to get treasures. The pace is slow and it prefers various dialogues and mediations and other literary dramas. There are a lot of foreshadowings. The protagonist's personality is very charming at present, but the emotional line with Cassian feels a bit slow. It is not easy to write it well.

The plot is tense and relaxed, and the setting has no flaws. The descriptions are delicate and gentle, especially the description of Lin Yi's appearance, which really has the charm of an oriental classical beauty. I saw that the author's previous books were completed with only a few dozen chapters, so I hope this one will be longer. Come on! Keep it up and I'll follow you! Already following

This article feels very practical and comfortable to read. It has a sense of crisis that flows smoothly in daily life but also has an obvious main line. The content of each chapter is very substantial, which is very beneficial to readers like me who like to watch plots. The summary is very nice and worth reading [Like]

It's very interesting. The important thing is that the protagonist has a brain. Unlike other novels where time travelers know the plot but still keep falling into the enemy's trap. This protagonist has a brain and will use knowing the plot of the novel to prevent himself from falling into a dead end. The two protagonists dote on each other and are very loving.

The writing is quite good. The development story is really delicious. This kind of western fantasy world view setting really impressed me. The author writes the plot very smoothly and handles the details very well. The relationship between the two protagonists also progresses very naturally.

It's rare to find a development-oriented book. [Laughing] [Laughing] I was immediately attracted by the introduction. Later I found that the plot felt quite smooth, and the description and logic were okay. Good-looking [shy] [shy] Who knows the joy of cultivating a line? [Shy][shy]

It's awesome. It's very beautiful and has no flaws at all. I just don't know why the popularity is not very high. Maybe it's not enough times. Really, I was in a very serious book shortage state at first, mainly because I read too much and was very picky. As a result, this book by the author directly solved my urgent need. It's so good. I can't wait for the update!

Super invincible and beautiful! I've been craving for fantasy articles for a long time, but I haven't been able to find one that suits my taste. I almost came in to read it today, but I immediately fell in love with it. Hehehe, it's so good~ os: The rating of this article was much lower than I expected, and I almost missed it because of it. Just thinking about this makes my heart hurt. I feel like I almost lost 100 million [full], but I believe that its rating will rise sooner or later! Okay, okay, I'm going to continue watching. Hehehehehehehe Already tied [crying] It's so good to watch, I'm really looking forward to the content that follows~

Very nice! ! It's the kind of writing that's written in a long and flowing way. The setting is quite interesting. I feel that the writing style is very good and it's enjoyable to read! The characters are three-dimensional and the plot moves very smoothly, making people unable to resist reading. It's a very interesting book~

The writing is perfect, the plot setting and logic are OK, and there is nothing wrong with it objectively. But from my personal preference, the shortcoming is that the male protagonist is very good, but has no strength, and the protagonist and supporting roles are all slow and weak. Anyway, I personally hate this kind of thing in life. It makes me always have a sense of inadequacy. I really want to see the male protagonist give those people rules. I have a few big dicks with people who force others to do things they don't want to do in the way of hospitality, and then shout out loudly "I am a barbarian", naming the plot of the Elf Ball, where a group of fools try this and that, but the male protagonist does not mess with them, and shows off his power like a peacock in heat. Of course, what I'm talking about is my personal opinion. I'll put my finger on it here. I think this article is good. The writing, plot and emotional lines are very clear. Rough people like me may find it a bit cumbersome, but maybe you can read it, so you can try it.

It's very beautiful. From what I've seen so far, it seems to have a slower pace and a warm and healing feel. The pace of the first few chapters may be very slow, and impatient friends may not be able to adapt to it, but I believe that after passing the first few chapters, although the subsequent plots are also slower, they are very interesting. The author's writing is very delicate and really great!

It's very interesting, and the setting is very interesting. Both the protagonists poked my personal ⅹp. It's worth following up on their future relationship. However, the recent updates are not stable, which is understandable, but don't stop updating. Without spoiling the premise, this book has a good pace and good writing. I personally think it is very detailed, but there are new clues buried later. How should I say? Looking forward to continued updates! Come on, author.

The writing is very delicate and gives me a sense of a long flowing water. I really like the scenery and characters in it. Almost all the people who have appeared so far are good people. The old man is a stubborn old man who will sneak away and doesn't want others to see through his sadness. He also fills the gap in his brother's heart to a certain extent. And miss, and our little daisy-like Lina, who is hot and beautiful, and our elf. The ethereal and empty feeling at the beginning is gone. He is raised very well by his brother, and he likes such a gentle and watery character. The article is really beautiful, the author is great, please work hard. Come on, author, this article will definitely become a hit!

It's really beautiful. The author is very good at describing scenery and metaphors. I think the emotional line is also very good, with a hint of detail. A bit heartwarming, and eh. As for Lin Yi, he is a more rational person. I think if he gets along with the protagonist, he will be very harmonious. I think it is very good. It can be seen that the author really put a lot of effort into writing this article. It's that kind of change of scenery, and the description of the characters is very good. It's worth watching.

Great writing! The writing is smooth and the pictures are full of meaning. You can read it happily and can't stop. It's really a fairy-written article! My wife's writing style is delicate and nuanced, and her emotions are very strong. The few strokes are just right in terms of worldview structure and detailed description. 😚It's so pretty! So much love

I couldn't sleep at night, so I just listened to it and it refreshed my mind. Your writing is so good! The writing, plot and description are all immersive. I can't read much of Western themes, but this one really surprised me. I must keep writing it. It's so rare that I can't bear to read it [crying]

There is a light feeling to the author's writing, which I quite like. There is nothing embarrassing, everything is so natural🥰I like the author's writing style Dear author, please come on and don't stop updating.

The subject matter of this book is very new and the description is just right, which is great for novice writers! Looking forward to big updates! Come on!