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Overall, it's good. If you accept it all, the abuse of the breakup can be moderate. It doesn't look good if you make it a master and servant. It would be nice if the male protagonist communicates more with the female protagonist and shows his liking for the female protagonist more clearly. After all, there is not much to follow.

I have read the first novel in this series before, and although this one is based on that one, I can predict the plot, characters, etc., And it will be very different from that one, but I can still see that the author put a lot of thought into it. From the current point of view, it is not completely copied, and the character creation is also a bit different. There are some innovations, so it should not be as cruel as that one, and the plot should also have a lot of fun points. Overall, it is good. I hope the author can keep it up and not follow the plot trend of that book completely, and don't end it or cut off the update. Come on [Think] [Explore]

The plot is full of tension, there is no frustration throughout the whole process, and the excitement is intensively output. The characters are vivid, the heroines have their own charms, and the emotions are full of tension. Although some scenes are slightly idealistic, it does not affect the pleasure of reading at all. Overall, the game is fast-paced and packed with exciting features, making it an excellent choice for stress relief. The only shortcoming is that updates are too slow and the experience of catching up is too tedious. [Laughing][laughing] I hope to update 300 in a big day

The plot is well-paced and exciting. The character creation conforms to the logic of Shuangwen. Although some plots are slightly deliberate, the whole process is not frustrating and the reading feels smooth. As a standard urban fantasy novel, it captures readers with intensive emotional conflicts and a sense of counterattack. It is a good choice for decompression and entertainment. The only regret is that the update pace is slow and the reading experience is slightly compromised. I hope you will continue to work hard to update [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Teacher's perspective comments This composition is very vividly written, bringing the characters in life to life on the page. The author is good at capturing the detailed characteristics of the characters, and through delicate descriptions, he makes the characters seem to be standing in front of him. In terms of narrative, the plot is coherent and interesting, which can firmly grasp the reader's attention. However, the language could be more refined, and some sentences are a little wordy. It is recommended that you think more carefully about words and sentences when writing in the future to make the article more concise and powerful. Comments from classmates' perspective Wow, your composition is superb! The characters in real life are portrayed so vividly that I feel like I know these people. The story is very attractive, and I kept enjoying it while watching it. From the word choice to the sentence construction, it is very clever, and I can feel that you have put a lot of thought into it. If you can add some unique viewpoints, the article will be even more outstanding. I look forward to more wonderful compositions from you! Comments from a parent's perspective The overall performance of this essay is quite good, vividly showing the characters in life, which shows that the writing skills are very good. The content is rich and full of life, and it can be seen that the daily observations are very detailed. The sentences are smooth, vivid and highly contagious. The shortcoming is that the end of the article is a bit hasty and does not sublimate the theme well. I hope that when I write in the future, I will put more effort into the ending to give the article a perfect ending.

The writing is very good and it is very comfortable to read. Can there be more? Two updates a day with only 50 chapters is totally not enough. At least it should be updated twice a day after 100 chapters [facepalm] I once read a book written by an author who wrote more than 400 chapters and maintained at least three updates a day [facepalm]

The whole story is smooth and enjoyable. Except for the description of the encounter with Lin Yaoyao, which is a bit too smooth, the rest is still logical.

No more running, it is a cool article that I like to read. This harem can run away, the author knows how to drive! [Cool]

I enjoyed the whole process and read many chapters in one go!

It's really good-looking, and the grasp of the inner drama of the characters is also very delicate. I

It is not just a stallion story, it also adds the career line of the protagonist, making the whole story richer. The text is also very delicate and the plot is smooth. It is a good novel.

All the beginning, all collected, author, you know I feel better!

There was no discomfort or peeing during the whole process. Come on, author, come on

I feel very sorry for Shen Qingning. Even if she broke up with her, Shen Qingning is sorry for the original owner. She has not done any harm to the male lead. On the contrary, the male lead has been unable to treat her and none of her girlfriends and friends around her are good. I laughed to death. She is really a charlatan, especially that cousin. Oh my God, I really know that the male lead has money and will post it. I am speechless. I have no other meaning and I am not opposed to having a harem. I just feel that Shen Qingning is really wronged. It is not worth doing so much [smile][smile]

After watching the comic, I came to read the novel. The opening chapter is very attractive. It's not a bad idea to slam your ex-girlfriend one night and then break up. It's even more fulfilling to win the girlfriend and best friends because they are all talented people. It would be even more awesome if there is no reward ability given by the system to be able to make a fuss after the breakup.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Recommended

Okay, it's a standard cool article, but I'm still a loser and can read 44 photos by myself.

A slap in the face is so satisfying that the sisters in the harem have a perfect match! [Adoration][Adoration] Take a look!

It fits the logic of Shuangwen very well, and the characters are also very intelligent.

The plot is interesting and the story is emotional. I am very satisfied.

Other books get boring after reading a few chapters, but I finished reading this one. I hope the author will keep writing.

It feels very immersive, like it, like it👍

The content is exciting and suits my taste. I will follow it to the end!

It's so good-looking [Adoration], I haven't seen something so exciting in a long time.

The writing is very good! Very interesting too! ! ! ! !

Shuangwen is so beautiful, I love it! !

Love it, the story is great! So cool!

Super cool, well written.

Very beautiful, unique and original

It's so cool, I like cheering up [smile]