After Becoming an NPC, My Beautiful Wife Came to Me of Her Own Accord

There are still some minor flaws in the scene descriptions and some plot details of the dungeon. Sometimes people and weirdness appear out of nowhere, which can make people a little bit confused. The picture is not enough, the plot logic is inexplicably missing in some places, and the dungeon line is not explained clearly, and occasionally it feels a bit out of context. But overall, this book has great potential. There are quite a lot of cars here [shy]

The subject matter is very good, the content is good, but I can't imagine the picture. It feels like people suddenly appeared. When I was in the restaurant, I thought it was just the two of them in the employee restaurant. It turned out that it was all people and it was weird. There was no picture. In the kindergarten, I thought there were only children, but adults suddenly appeared. I couldn't imagine what the scene was. Can you describe the scene first? We have a good imagination. I hope the author will get better as he writes [laughing]

Hello everyone, I am the author of this book. First of all, I would like to thank you for your opinions and guidance. I am also new to the online literature industry. I am very poor in writing in many places. Thank you for your tolerance. Every little treasure who is willing to read is my precious treasure. Thank you ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა. I am very busy at work and I have no time to revise the previous article. I will pay attention to the questions you raised in future updates. Thank you for your support⊹꙳ ˶˙ᵕ˙˶ ⊹꙳You gave me the strength to persevere

I think the plot of this book is quite novel, but it should be mainly written by the two protagonists as sweet stories. There are some things in the plot that are not right. There are inexplicably fewer people. The plot can be improved appropriately. I feel that both of them are growing up.

The last time I saw such an enemy was Charlie. The plot was a bit bland, and the design of the dungeon was very obvious, such as being good to children, but some players died inexplicably, and the protagonist passed by without doing anything. However, it was updated three times a day, and some chapters were well written. Hope to come on

Beautiful and sweet, I hope you will update it ten times a day [Blow kiss]

It's so good. I sometimes can't read many books. This is the book I've been looking for for so long, and it actually made me read this book now. If there are no big problems in the future, I will definitely keep reading this book! ! ! ! Thank you author, I love you so much

It's very beautiful, very sweet, and the author's writing is very fluent. The reason why I gave 4 stars is my own. In the copy of "The King's Preference", 51 kissed Yi who has no future memory. I can't accept this. I think there is a difference between memory and no memory. 51 Who has memory kissed Yi. This is an act of betrayal to 71 to me. Even if they are one person, I still can't accept it (don't scold me, it's my problem)

It looks good. I hope the author will continue to work hard and update more every day. Jie Jie Jie 51 71 99! ! !

Double cleansing? The author is great [exploration]