[Urban Fantasy + Reverse Transmigration + Dad Life + Hilarious + One Female Lead + Two-Way Transmigration]
The rating has just been released, so it’ll keep climbing!
Lin Yi was a socially anxious shut-in who’d been single since birth. In two lifetimes, he’d never even touched a woman.
The night his custom-made smart figurine, which had cost him 1.2 million, arrived, it came to life. A sect’s saintess, who had reached the Tribulation Transcendence stage, had possessed it.
The saintess, Su Weimeng, was three thousand years old, cold as ice, and could send a person flying with one slap. She said she could only stay for three days before she had to return, so Lin Yi gritted his teeth and waited on her for those three days.
After three days, Su Weimeng left, and the figurine returned to normal.
Lin Yi stared at the quiet little figurine, hesitated for three seconds, then made a decision that went against his family’s ancestral teachings.
The next day, Su Weimeng came back.
Feeling something was wrong with her body, she pointed her sword at Lin Yi. “What did you do?”
“I just admired the figurine I bought... How was I supposed to know you’d come back?”
Nine months later, Su Weimeng gave birth to a child in the cultivation world.
From then on, the Tribulation Transcendence powerhouse spent her days as a saintess and her nights transmigrating to care for a baby. And Lin Yi went from a rich second-generation slacker to the number-one dad in the cultivation world.
“Wifey, put the sword down first...”
“Who’s your wifey?!”
“Then... the mother of my child?”
Mainly, the introduction was so shocking that I almost didn't read it. The content is still very good. If you can continue to keep it up, it will feel good in daily life. Come on It's tacky, the recent updates have obviously gone downhill. I don't know what the author's outline is like. Is he planning to follow the traditional path of cultivating immortals or will he have many children and many blessings? There is obviously such a curious and attention-grabbing beginning, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with following along. It can almost be said that he is a pioneer author who created this type of novel. Even if it turns into urban romance, then urban immortality, and then enters another world, that's still acceptable. What has happened now? I suddenly got pregnant after a few chapters, and gave birth to a child after a few chapters. The span is too fast. The heroine is also stupid. She can have no common sense, but she can't be really stupid. Back to the silicone doll and didn't know there was something in the private parts? How is it possible? It's much better to write about breaking the ice in the cold war than suddenly getting pregnant and having both parents appear.
The imagination is good and the content is good. The shortcoming is that it uses AI and it is not adjusted well. Some parts in the middle are very obvious. I am not against the author's use of AI, but I want to use AI assistance instead of using it indiscriminately. Some chapters are too obvious.
I give you five stars for this novel idea. Let's see what happens next.
The subject matter is quite novel and very imaginative, but there should be less plots about the rich second generation falling in love with the heroine. Writing this is not as good as writing about the reality of the male protagonist appearing as a saint in front of people after practicing (personal opinion).
For me, it is a very good novel. It looks good overall. The author has a good attitude and is very diligent. The word count is accurate. Although AI is used, it seems to have a supporting role overall, so it does not have a big impact. However, objectively speaking, this novel genre is difficult for most people to accept, so if you want to score higher and have better data, it is actually more difficult. The main thing is, well, for your genre, the author should consider the reader's perspective more, because the reader is not like the author. In this way, he can see the development direction of the entire novel, so he will only read the entire novel from what he sees. This will cause some readers to be unable to read because the impression left is not good. He only sees one side, because he can only see one side and cannot look at the overall outline of your outline.
Very good, I just want to know if the protagonist knew about cultivating immortals before 🤔 🤔 I feel like the protagonist doesn't understand anything 🤦 🤦
I recommend this tonight, because the pace of this novel is not that fast, there are a lot of details, and it is not very procrastinating. He has a good sense of proportion, and there are also characters with relatively strong personalities who can describe the plot. He is not so fast, and he upgrades and upgrades from the beginning, but it is a little dull with a little joy.
Customized figure worth 200,000 yuan, rechargeable, constant temperature, and a thick book
Although it is an AI text, it is pretty good among AI texts.
The subject matter is quite novel, and so far it's quite interesting, but I don't know what the follow-up direction will be, and I'm a bit looking forward to it.