[Urban fantasy + reverse penetration + daddy + hilarious + single heroine + double penetration]
The ratings have just been released and will slowly increase! ! !
Lin Yi is a single mother, fearful of being an otaku in society, and has never touched a woman in his life.
On the night when the 1.2 Million customized smart figures arrived, the figures actually came to life - they were snatched away by a sect saint who was going through a period of tribulation.
Saint Su Weimeng lived for three thousand years. She was as cold as ice and could send people flying with one slap. She said that she could only stay for three days before going back. Lin Yi gritted his teeth and waited for three days.
Three days later, Su Weimeng left and the figure returned to its original state.
Lin Yi looked at the quiet figure, hesitated for three seconds, and then made a decision that went against the teachings of his ancestors.
Su Weimeng came again the next day.
Feeling something wrong with his body, he drew his sword and pointed it at Lin Yi: "What did you do?"
"I just admired the figure I bought... Who knew you would come back!"
Nine months later, Su Weimeng gave birth to a child in the world of immortality.
From then on, the tribulation period boss lived a life of being a saint during the day and traveling through time to take care of his children at night. And Lin Yi, from being a spoiled second-generation rich man, became the number one dad in the world of immortality.
"Honey, put down your sword first——"
"Who is your wife?!"
"Then... The child's mother?"
Reader comments
Mainly, the introduction was so shocking that I almost didn't read it. The content is still very good. If you can continue to keep it up, it will feel good in daily life. Come on
It's tacky, the recent updates have obviously gone downhill. I don't know what the author's outline is like. Is he planning to follow the traditional path of cultivating immortals or will he have many children and many blessings?
There is obviously such a curious and attention-grabbing beginning, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with following along. It can almost be said that he is a pioneer author who created this type of novel. Even if it turns into urban romance, then urban immortality, and then enters another world, that's still acceptable.
What has happened now? I suddenly got pregnant after a few chapters, and gave birth to a child after a few chapters. The span is too fast. The heroine is also stupid. She can have no common sense, but she can't be really stupid. Back to the silicone doll and didn't know there was something in the private parts? How is it possible? It's much better to write about breaking the ice in the cold war than suddenly getting pregnant and having both parents appear.
The imagination is good and the content is good. The shortcoming is that it uses AI and it is not adjusted well. Some parts in the middle are very obvious. I am not against the author's use of AI, but I want to use AI assistance instead of using it indiscriminately. Some chapters are too obvious.
I give you five stars for this novel idea.
Let's see what happens next.
The subject matter is quite novel and very imaginative, but there should be less plots about the rich second generation falling in love with the heroine. Writing this is not as good as writing about the reality of the male protagonist appearing as a saint in front of people after practicing (personal opinion).
For me, it is a very good novel. It looks good overall. The author has a good attitude and is very diligent. The word count is accurate. Although AI is used, it seems to have a supporting role overall, so it does not have a big impact.
However, objectively speaking, this novel genre is difficult for most people to accept, so if you want to score higher and have better data, it is actually more difficult. The main thing is, well, for your genre, the author should consider the reader's perspective more, because the reader is not like the author. In this way, he can see the development direction of the entire novel, so he will only read the entire novel from what he sees. This will cause some readers to be unable to read because the impression left is not good. He only sees one side, because he can only see one side and cannot look at the overall outline of your outline.
Very good, I just want to know if the protagonist knew about cultivating immortals before [thinking] [thinking] I feel like the protagonist doesn't understand anything [face covering] [face covering]
I recommend this tonight, because the pace of this novel is not that fast, there are a lot of details, and it is not very procrastinating. He has a good sense of proportion, and there are also characters with relatively strong personalities who can describe the plot. He is not so fast, and he upgrades and upgrades from the beginning, but it is a little dull with a little joy.
Customized figure worth 200,000 yuan, rechargeable, constant temperature, and a thick book
Although it is an AI text, it is pretty good among AI texts.
The subject matter is quite novel, and so far it's quite interesting, but I don't know what the follow-up direction will be, and I'm a bit looking forward to it.
It's okay to relieve boredom
It's okay, it's pretty good-looking
Come on✊Hahahahahahahaha
I want to write a lot, but it's a pity that I'm uneducated. I can only say that the writing is really good.
I read in the comment section that AI was used, and I feel that there are indeed some traces. Many times the name of the master is wrongly typed, and I don't know how to change it [Chigua] [Chigua]
But the overall feeling is okay. The author can be regarded as creating a new idea. I will send some flowers to Lao Deng and hope to continue [Note][Note]
I can keep watching
This subject is very interesting. Do you have any recommendations for this subject? The author is too slow to update.
This novel seems familiar, as if I had read it somewhere earlier.
Although it's a bit strange, it's also interesting
It's a good read, the author keeps it up
Oh hahahahaha
Good looking, good luck to the author
Not bad, worth a look
It's so beautiful, looking forward to the update [laughs]
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The writing is very good, there is no poisonous point, and the male and female protagonists are developing steadily.
The content is novel and interesting
Good-looking, novel plot, not bad
I thought he was the little imperial uncle. Damn it, why are you so serious? I've obviously worked so hard to maintain my account, but I still haven't developed it yet? [Pouts]
Mainly, the introduction was so shocking that I almost didn't read it. The content is still very good. If you can continue to keep it up, it will feel good in daily life. Come on It's tacky, the recent updates have obviously gone downhill. I don't know what the author's outline is like. Is he planning to follow the traditional path of cultivating immortals or will he have many children and many blessings? There is obviously such a curious and attention-grabbing beginning, and there is absolutely nothing wrong with following along. It can almost be said that he is a pioneer author who created this type of novel. Even if it turns into urban romance, then urban immortality, and then enters another world, that's still acceptable. What has happened now? I suddenly got pregnant after a few chapters, and gave birth to a child after a few chapters. The span is too fast. The heroine is also stupid. She can have no common sense, but she can't be really stupid. Back to the silicone doll and didn't know there was something in the private parts? How is it possible? It's much better to write about breaking the ice in the cold war than suddenly getting pregnant and having both parents appear.
The imagination is good and the content is good. The shortcoming is that it uses AI and it is not adjusted well. Some parts in the middle are very obvious. I am not against the author's use of AI, but I want to use AI assistance instead of using it indiscriminately. Some chapters are too obvious.
I give you five stars for this novel idea. Let's see what happens next.
The subject matter is quite novel and very imaginative, but there should be less plots about the rich second generation falling in love with the heroine. Writing this is not as good as writing about the reality of the male protagonist appearing as a saint in front of people after practicing (personal opinion).
For me, it is a very good novel. It looks good overall. The author has a good attitude and is very diligent. The word count is accurate. Although AI is used, it seems to have a supporting role overall, so it does not have a big impact. However, objectively speaking, this novel genre is difficult for most people to accept, so if you want to score higher and have better data, it is actually more difficult. The main thing is, well, for your genre, the author should consider the reader's perspective more, because the reader is not like the author. In this way, he can see the development direction of the entire novel, so he will only read the entire novel from what he sees. This will cause some readers to be unable to read because the impression left is not good. He only sees one side, because he can only see one side and cannot look at the overall outline of your outline.
Very good, I just want to know if the protagonist knew about cultivating immortals before [thinking] [thinking] I feel like the protagonist doesn't understand anything [face covering] [face covering]
I recommend this tonight, because the pace of this novel is not that fast, there are a lot of details, and it is not very procrastinating. He has a good sense of proportion, and there are also characters with relatively strong personalities who can describe the plot. He is not so fast, and he upgrades and upgrades from the beginning, but it is a little dull with a little joy.
Customized figure worth 200,000 yuan, rechargeable, constant temperature, and a thick book
Although it is an AI text, it is pretty good among AI texts.
The subject matter is quite novel, and so far it's quite interesting, but I don't know what the follow-up direction will be, and I'm a bit looking forward to it.
It's okay to relieve boredom
It's okay, it's pretty good-looking
Come on✊Hahahahahahahaha
I want to write a lot, but it's a pity that I'm uneducated. I can only say that the writing is really good.
I read in the comment section that AI was used, and I feel that there are indeed some traces. Many times the name of the master is wrongly typed, and I don't know how to change it [Chigua] [Chigua] But the overall feeling is okay. The author can be regarded as creating a new idea. I will send some flowers to Lao Deng and hope to continue [Note][Note]
I can keep watching
This subject is very interesting. Do you have any recommendations for this subject? The author is too slow to update.
This novel seems familiar, as if I had read it somewhere earlier.
Although it's a bit strange, it's also interesting
It's a good read, the author keeps it up
Oh hahahahaha
Good looking, good luck to the author
Not bad, worth a look
It's so beautiful, looking forward to the update [laughs]
Good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book good book
The writing is very good, there is no poisonous point, and the male and female protagonists are developing steadily.
The content is novel and interesting
Good-looking, novel plot, not bad
I thought he was the little imperial uncle. Damn it, why are you so serious? I've obviously worked so hard to maintain my account, but I still haven't developed it yet? [Pouts]
Not bad👍will come again