I Am Here*******

It's very interesting [laughing] As a loyal heroine of Hermione, I think it's very interesting, but I would suggest that the age doesn't need to be that old and can be made younger than 15 years old. Of course, I'm just a suggestion. [Laughing evilly][like] Then there is the idiot duo. In fact, there is no need to shamelessly stick to it. After all, Hermione actually has her own social circle, right? [Eating Melon] But I think the author actually wanted to show that Ron would be like the original when he wrote Ron's conflict? [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] [ Eat melon ] Are you jealous because of the protagonist? But isn't it a little early? After all, Ron's relationship was probably in the 3 or 4 original novels? I don't know what the author said, after all, everyone understands [eating melon] However, I currently feel that the protagonist's B is not pretending enough [smile][smile][smile] Besides, don't you mind if there are too many B's (I am referring to the B who is pretending to be B) Overall, I like it quite a lot, and the setting is also quite interesting [smile][smile][smile] I will give it a 4 points first so that the author will not be proud.

Not bad, very good, but the introduction said that there is a single heroine, but it is too close to Qiu Zhang. I thought it was just a character to increase Hermione's sense of crisis.

The protagonist is 16 and Hermione is 8, so I need to feed some 7 and 62, right?

Personally, I feel pretty good about it, but I think it might be a little weird to combine one person with Harry Potter, but that's okay. (It depends on the future plot. Generally speaking, it is very good. By the way, will the male protagonist's memory confusion be restored in the future?)

The subject matter is good, but I can't read it. The author can improve his writing skills.

The plot is pretty good, with the single heroine Hermione!