[Campus Daily | Youth Campus | Ultimate Revenge | Japanese Suspense] The day I transferred to another school, monitor Saya Yumeko smiled and held my hand and said she would be my best friend.
No one cares about this dilapidated village that is about to sink into the artificial lake. After all, in a few months, everything here will be submerged and no one will remember it. I endured the graffiti in the textbooks, the dirty shoes in the trash can, and the ice and snow stuffed into my mouth, thinking that if I endured it, I could leave with my family.
Until the fire burned down my home. The parents were burned to ashes, and the sister lay in the hospital and never woke up. Only then did I see clearly what kind of twisted evil spirits were hiding under the smiling faces of these people. The gentle princess is the madman who treats me as prey. The silent photographer is a bystander waiting to see my transformation. The mad dog who pleases my lackey is willing to burn down my house just to survive.
Later, rumors began to spread in the village that there was a woman in a red coat who was a murderous ghost. The people who bullied me disappeared one by one. Some say she is crazy, others say she is a curse. No one knows, she just wants to seek justice for her dead family members.
The day the snow stopped, she disappeared. That spring, the dam filled up with water and the entire Shirase Village sank to the bottom of the lake. Only the edelweiss on the edge of the cliff blooms every year, like the tombstone she did not erect.
Reader comments
The overall writing style is quite good, but many descriptions are repetitive. For example, the description of the word "death" engraved on the table is repeated five or six times throughout the article. It is all about that sentence. It feels weird to read [Thoughts]
After reading the first few chapters, I was reminded of the spring of triangle grass.
The writing is okay, and the overall tone of the novel is on track. The plot arrangement needs to be improved. It's too bland. The plot is too bland. I didn't feel the emotion and plot progression that revenge should bring. I can only be calm. When I was bullied, I was calm and didn't speak.
The emotional aspect may be the author's deliberate arrangement, and the plot can indeed be improved.
After reading it, I looked at the author and said that there is indeed a shadow of the spring of Triangle Grass, but it is a pity that I did not see the blood and madness in the original work.
Tsubaki, I cried [cry] [cry] [cry], it's so beautiful
The overall writing style is quite good, but many descriptions are repetitive. For example, the description of the word "death" engraved on the table is repeated five or six times throughout the article. It is all about that sentence. It feels weird to read [Thoughts]
After reading the first few chapters, I was reminded of the spring of triangle grass. The writing is okay, and the overall tone of the novel is on track. The plot arrangement needs to be improved. It's too bland. The plot is too bland. I didn't feel the emotion and plot progression that revenge should bring. I can only be calm. When I was bullied, I was calm and didn't speak. The emotional aspect may be the author's deliberate arrangement, and the plot can indeed be improved. After reading it, I looked at the author and said that there is indeed a shadow of the spring of Triangle Grass, but it is a pity that I did not see the blood and madness in the original work.
Tsubaki, I cried [cry] [cry] [cry], it's so beautiful
Interesting, good-looking [sending heart]