Lu Mingfei's Double Crossing into *The Ultimate Squad*

Orphan Lu Mingfei is still wandering in the world

Not bad @ Just take it as an angel. As for the other things in the super god world, except for the unicorn, I can barely add Reina and the dragon clan. I suggest Nuonuo nanny Tuan Hui Liyi.

How to say it? It doesn't feel right. It feels like a fusion of Shai Zai and Lu Mingze. You can set one up and merge their memories and personalities. This change shouldn't be too abrupt. Otherwise, it would be a bit wrong to suddenly become so tough from a person who can expect nothing less.

This is so well written, this is my dear author! You are the monster who should roar at the top of the tomatoes! It's time to rule the world!

When writing fan fiction, at least read the original work. There is nothing wrong with the dragon part, but there are too many loopholes in the super god part. If you don't know, you can also read other super god fan fiction. Moreover, the dual-line plot is a bit confusing, and it seems to have AI tendencies.

Lu Mingfei's character is OOC In fact, there is no need to write about the world of dragons at all Your super-god world is better written than the dragon world. In fact, Nono doesn't need to write it.

Feeling pretty good

The transformation was too abrupt. Lao Lu's character is not like this at all.

Tag it 😅

The previous relationship with Qilin was not well written. I don't think I should write it either. It's better to write as a friend. After all, the age is wrong. But overall it's pretty good.