Playing the Dark Skyline of Space City from the Start

Originally, the subject matter was very new, but the routines were very old. Some of the previous parts were too pretentious, such as buying a mobile phone, or the plot in the back where the gangster was used as a "crane tail" to suppress them. These are very old pretentious routines and belong to the routines of the ancient Dragon King novels. And since the core point is the acting, then there should be more content about GTI operators, or even all of them. Why use so much space to write about the protagonist in the real world as a student entering the picture? Isn't this considered extremely poisonous to some people who come here just for the title of the book? There are also some contents that have obviously not been verified, such as "black In "Skyline", Hei is the name of the person, and Skyline is the name of the skin (but the author probably doesn't know this, so I will revise it as soon as someone mentions it in the comment area). It is not "Black Skyline". It is recommended to change it to "Skyline-Luna" or "Luna-Skyline", or "Black-Skyline (name not disclosed)". There is also the background of the aerospace shutdown. It is best to check this if you can check the information, otherwise it will be a joke. Using private settings under the premise of reasonable official settings is very poisonous (if it is not mentioned in advance). If it is not possible, then please blur the areas that you are not clear about. It is better to have more "I don't know" than to talk nonsense. In the end, there are fewer formulas, and if you want to use them, find new ones. Don't write things whose endings can be guessed as soon as they appear. If you read the book, it's only worth two stars, but the author's enthusiasm can make those two stars double.

It's okay, but I wish I could play more. Since the Hafk Soldiers in the latest two chapters have become temporary friendly units, I can write about the interaction between the protagonist and them. After all, they are a saint in front of others. The second is a little suggestion. The short story between Luna and Claire, that is, between the operators, can also be written. I personally think it is quite interesting.

It's pretty cool, but it feels like there's only one operator dispatched at a time, which is a bit inappropriate, right? Why don't you consider adding clones, assault, reconnaissance, treatment, and engineering, I think it would be better.

It's a book with a good subject matter. I got a little inspired after reading it. When the time comes, there will be a book discussing the author. Do you mind if I post some of the plots I thought of?

It's pretty cool. It would be even better if the main character becomes a girl permanently [laughing]

The author writes beautifully

As long as you work hard to finish the book, it won't be too bad later on. It's another good book about Delta. Come on!

The author's original plot is really interesting

Love watching episodes about Luna

Keep it looking good