An Extra’s Everyday Life in the Story

Although the ambiguous pull between Kusunoki and Gin is very exciting, maybe Kusunoki is not that fragile, but I just can't see Gin treating him like that. It always feels like treating a canary pet. Although it may be amazing that Gin can treat Kusunoki like that, after reading too many other fanfics, I always feel that Kusunoki has been wronged a lot, and it seems to me that Kusunoki controls Gin, and I kind of want to torture Gin. I feel that Kusunoki fell in love with him like this, which is too cheap for Gin. I want Kusunoki to impose on Gin what Gin did to him, and experience the feeling that he can't help himself and his fate is in the hands of others. It would be better if Nanmu really hides it deeply and hasn't fallen in love with gin yet.

It feels like the protagonist is completely controlled by Gin from body to heart, and has also been given a hypnotic mark, ugh.

Give myself a support 😏 ❤️

Delicious rice, a protagonist who has his own thoughts and doesn't just wait for others to dote on him, and the scene where the protagonist and Gin have a slight confrontation made me so happy [please update]

The rice tastes so good. The characters of the male protagonist and Gin well created by the author are simply refreshing. The plot is also super interesting. Come on, come on

I quite like the plot, but the writing style is not bad, just a bit boring. I excerpted a paragraph: [In just a moment, the car stopped steadily inside the hospital. Nan Mu Hanjiang pushed the door open and quickly entered the house. As soon as she crossed the entrance, her eyes suddenly froze. In the cold and empty kitchen area, the man who had always been a cold-blooded killer, wielded the power of darkness, and never had to be exposed to the smoke and smoke, was now wearing a simple black apron and standing in front of the stove, busy in an orderly manner. The warm fireworks lingered around him, diluting the usual harsh and violent atmosphere, and adding a bit of rare homely softness. Nan Mu Hanjiang loosened her fingertips, and the shopping gift bag she was holding almost fell to the ground. Her eyes were filled with complete astonishment and shock. Gin raised his eyes when he heard the sound, and his eyes fell precisely on him. Seeing his flustered and restless look, he frowned imperceptibly and said in a calm tone: "Put your things back in the room, wash your hands and come down to eat."] I have read at least a hundred novels with similar writing style. It feels like the vocabulary is piled up but not delicate. I think the writing style can actually be more condensed. My humble opinion.

As a newcomer, my first article is really eye-catching! There are still a lot of areas that could be polished, but the plot design is very gripping. Although the ending is a little rushed, it is very charming and fits the original work. I feel that the author has great potential and a promising future.

Good-looking, needless to say, desire is the beginning of sinking, and finally ends in the name of love. The plot and character descriptions of this book are very complete. Their love is passionate and silent. It is worth reading.

The writing is very good, and the ambiguous pull between the protagonist and Gin is so fragrant.

It's a very good book, and the character creation is pretty good. The logic of the whole article is very online and worth appreciating. However, because it is the first time for the author to write a book, the writing style in the early stage is relatively average, and the later stage is better. Moreover, the author failed to write in the later stage, and the ending is very rushed, but overall it is still good to read.