Rent a Tianling Root and Pretend to Be a Genius in the Ancient Immortal World

It can be smooth and nothing feels wrong. What follows is somewhat counter-intuitive. The link between your academic qualifications and your cultivation level is still in the era of AI, so your background will conflict with your plot. How will you handle the multiple deaths later? It feels too weird.

Everything else is pretty good, the writing and plot are perfect It's not five stars, just two issues First, I felt that I was writing it in a hurry. These plots can obviously be polished slowly, but I don't know why I felt like someone was urging me to write it at a crazy pace. From the third level of Qi Refining to the twenty or thirty chapters of killing Zifu by myself, it would be nice to polish it slowly, but it was written too fast. Second, Blue Star says it is about cultivating immortals through technology, but it always feels weird. It feels like there is no law. Cultivation through technology generally has laws, and you cannot act arbitrarily. Even if you act arbitrarily, you have to be at the top. A foundation building, a purple mansion, they regard the law as nothing, and do whatever they want. I am very surprised about that teacher. This crazy world... Is there really a way to save it? Or can it really be written... Because logically speaking, Blue Star executives like you must be all bad. No good person can have this kind of environment, and there is no way to rise. If you deduct one star and use the golden elixir in the early stage of foundation building, you can directly cross the middle, late stage, perfection, Zifu, early Zifu, mid-term, late stage, perfection, golden elixir. How many realms are there? If you don't get killed instantly, it would be unbelievable to fight back and forth with that female golden elixir.

In the open space not far away, a woman wearing a light cyan dress was staggering back. Her chest was dripping with blood, her left arm was twisted at a weird angle, her breath was extremely weak, and she had obviously suffered a fatal injury. Opposite her, a black tiger with a dark body and a strong body was grinning, its sharp claws were stained with blood, and it exuded a fierce aura. Lin Yan's heart beat rapidly. With such a terrifying size and aura, it should be a first-order high-grade monster, corresponding to a late-stage Qi training monk. You are at the 4th level of Qi training. The monsters in the late stage of Qi training are in the foundation building stage. You can't defeat them in the foundation stage. You have defeated them so easily. In other words, a mortal can use this thing to kill someone at the 5th to 6th level of Qi training.

Indeed, this kind of subject matter must exist, but I have never seen many that can write well, and every time I listen to it with the music of I'm Waiting (Original Mix), I feel very happy.

It is a good book that is totally worth reading. It shows the relationship between Dahuang (traditional world of immortality) and Blue Star (modern world of immortality) very well. Unlike many other novels, everything in the ancient world is better than the modern one. Dahuang has abundant aura and resources, and Blue Star is a world of immortality. With advanced technology and complete skills, both worlds have their own pros and cons. The protagonist trades and sells in two places, and it is natural to improve his strength. The grudges can only be resolved in five chapters, and there is no emotional drama about the love between children. The emphasis is on friendship, loyalty and respect for the master. The biggest drawback is that only one chapter is updated every day.

Well written, I like it so much. I praise the author. This book is a real gold mine in the history of foreign persimmons, but it is too little and not enough to read. Author, you are a good baby, promise me, today we will update 20 chapters first, and gradually move towards updating 100 chapters every day, okay [Sending Hearts] This book is a qualitative leap compared to the previous one. It is really well written and the rating should be at least 9. Putting aside the facts, what's wrong with you writing a hundred chapters a day?

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I came across the latest chapter as soon as I caught up. It's overall pretty good. It's a story about traveling between two worlds, pretending to be a genius to obtain resources, and finally becoming a real genius. It's quite interesting. There's nothing too bad about it. It's just why the rating is so low. I didn't want to read it when I first saw the rating. If it hadn't been recommended by my recommendation list several times, and I was really short of books, I wouldn't have clicked in to read it. I think I was put off by the rating. The setting is still interesting and worth reading.

You can take a look at the ancient type of fairy tales about showing saints in front of people without thinking.

A classic cool novel, a little depressing in the early stages, but after the college entrance examination, it was mindless and fun. Readers can just ignore some logical issues on their own, and it is generally reasonable. Moreover, the plot is very compact, and I feel that the author has systematically studied it and is not a novice.

It's not bad. The foundation-building golden elixir is separated by a purple mansion. What's gratifying is that the foundation-building golden elixir kills not the fruit-level golden elixir. The power of the fruit-level golden elixir is still very high!

Okay, it feels good, I can continue to read it, and I will update it! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I have finished reading Chapter 120. There are a lot of complaints in the first dozens of chapters. The conflicts are too stiff and illogical. The writing becomes smoother and more coherent in the following chapters, but there are too few updates. Come on!

Nice and quick update. The two worlds are upgraded, the dual channels of ancient immortality + modern technology are fierce. The opponent is not too brainless and decisive in killing, but the emotional line is a bit weak. I have the desire to pursue it, and overall it's pretty good.

How could it possibly be 5.7? It's too low. There are no flaws so far. The writing is pretty good. There shouldn't be only 20,000 people reading it. If there are more people, I can still get 8.5. It's a trivial thing for 100,000 people to read. The writing of traveling between two worlds is just right, not too much and not too little.

It's a bit unrealistic for modern cultivators to kill people casually

It's super good-looking. The male protagonist doesn't have any ink marks. I hope it will be updated quickly.

Why did you change your name? So that one is okay [thinking]

Yes, the plot is good, the protagonist has a good character, and he kills decisively. It is considered a masterpiece in both worlds.

The subject matter is novel and very interesting.

Not bad, but the word count is too few

How to say it? Well, it's quite pretty.

Not bad, but it's a pity that the updates are too slow and the ratings can't go up.

Take a rough look at the first dozen chapters, and the latter ones are more exciting. The first chapters are terrible, but the latter ones are really good.

Very nice! Like it very much! Very exciting! Come on, author!

It can be written very well. Traveling between two worlds is really interesting, and I like the character of the protagonist very much. I haven't seen a heroine yet, so there should be no heroine. The author will speed up the update [Like]

The plot is rich and very attractive. I have read thousands of novels, but this one is still very well written and makes me want to read it.

Although there are some flaws, but overall it's good, keep up the good work~

It's okay. There are some minor flaws in the middle. I can barely see through it. Many of the supporting characters' IQs are still online.

It's okay, the flaws don't hide the flaws