The Blind Array Genius Won't Meet a Cool, Aloof Sword Fairy

The writing is really good in Tomato. There is also a cute and sweet little Jiang Jianxian. The rhythm is well grasped, it doesn't look like a novice writer, please work harder [Punch]🥰

This book is good. The desolation written in the first twelve chapters is also very delicious. The reason why I gave it four stars instead of five is because Not enough to eat!!! I'm hungry and I don't have enough to eat!!!

The plot is smooth and attractive, the scene transitions are smooth, the emotional rendering is naturally touching, and the writing is excellent. The recent chapters have given me a great surprise with the description of the emotional progress of the male and female protagonists. They are not like the natural relationship in other novels. Instead, they add the awkwardness and pull in the hearts of teenagers and girls who are just starting to fall in love. It is very confusing between high school students and is affected by each other's every move. The emotional throbbing resonated with me a lot. I recalled the experience I missed in high school due to misunderstandings due to anger and awkwardness. I hope the author can keep updating and give good reviews and support. I also hope that other readers can also give good reviews and support. The score shouldn't be so low, and judging from the plot, it must have a happy ending without a knife. Don't give low scores just because the previous plot is very miserable and think it is a knife. [Thoughts]

The writing style is good, and the writing is not as vulgar as other novels. The description is very delicate and exquisite, and the foreshadowing is very natural. It is rare to see such a breathy, feeling, and synaesthesia novel on this platform. I hope the author can write more words. There are too few good articles like this, not enough to read and not enough to satisfy. I feel like the plot has a bit of twists and turns, and the descriptions are also very delicious. But now I can't think of how to make a comeback

The writing is very good, the emotional changes are very delicate, and a lot of weather changes are used. I personally think it is just right. However, the essay pen can already surpass most works on the market. The disadvantage is that the current chapter is too short. As long as the quality of the subsequent chapters is comparable to the previous ones, it will definitely become popular. The author must keep writing, keep going. I have read 21 chapters so far. I tend to read everything online. I read a few chapters and abandon the book if I can't stand it anymore. But this book makes me very interested in reading it. Personally, I am very optimistic about this book. I think it has the potential to be a masterpiece. A single essay pen, not an essay pen. Typo

It's been a long time since I've read a novel that filled me with such joy. Bingyouzi and Iron Harrier made me happy in the book. The writing style is very recognizable. Compared with most similar works on the market, it has a delicate taste hidden in the roughness of the forest, sea and snowfield. Large sections of dialogue are intertwined with descriptions of the environment, and it is easy to spread out the picture of ice and snow in your mind, as if you are following the character on a personal journey, which is very enjoyable. Of course, there are also many problems in the work. The writing can still be seen as a little immature, and the logic of some characters' actions is far-fetched. There is still room for improvement in what the characters should do, what they should say, and at what points they should be expressed. At the same time, some details have slightly different styles before and after processing. Whether you are training AI assistants or writing your own writing, you need to find a more stable narrative rhythm and have good skills. All in all, all in all, I like [Punch Out] very much and look forward to reading more good content.

I think it's okay. I'll give it five stars. (Readers, do you feel that the AI ​​flavor is too heavy? It's not the overall description, but the description of the environment or action at the end of each paragraph. If you read too much, you will feel a strong DeepSeek feeling.)

So far, so good and bad First of all, the author has done a relatively good job of setting out the environment and handling the details, which is rare in Tomato. But there are still a few poisonous points that I feel are relatively big (spoilers involved) The first one is the part where the heroine accepts the punishment and survives in the end. The reason why she can survive in the end is because of a jade token given by the hero. Why is it poisonous here? It mainly gives people a feeling of collapse in combat power. Because the elder had an anti-virtual cultivation level, he almost failed to defeat the magic weapon made by Nascent Soul, but luckily he defeated it later, so it was not too poisonous, and it could also be connected with the later, whether it was the male protagonist who found out the other person's identity and did not kill him, or the future male protagonist who came to the rescue. The other is the final processing of the Bingling siege. First of all, the desperate atmosphere was really brought to the climax in the previous part. In this situation, I really can't see how to get out of trouble. But what a coincidence, in the end it was the male protagonist from the future who traveled back through time. This is unexpected, and there doesn't seem to be much foreshadowing ahead. It cannot be considered reasonable at all. This kind of feeling is forced, and the protagonist is forced to live. There is no natural feeling, and the subjectivity is too strong. To put it simply, you just don't do what I want you to do. The characters and the plot are vivid.

The writing style is elegant and soft, the characters are vividly described, full and emotional, not brainless or unsystematic. The emotions are also very delicate. It is a rare masterpiece in Tomato. Recommended by bookworms who have spent thousands of hours. It is non-toxic.

I read Chapter 44 at noon. It's really good. The writing style is very delicate. The author is still a high school student. To have such writing style, it is really a hero of my generation. Regarding the AI problem, some people say that it is an AI article, and there are indeed some traces of suspected AI, but it is definitely not dead, and even if it is AI, it only has a polishing effect. The author's strength cannot be denied. There are many people who use AI to write articles on the site, and I have written more privately. To be honest, I can't read many of them on the site. In my opinion, they are just mediocre. There are very few that can make me feel that I am at the same level. But if this novel is really AI, the author's level is probably far higher than mine. At present, it seems that the background of this novel is the kind of dark immortal cultivation style derived from dark martial arts. The whole thing is very depressing, painful and dark. At the same time, the author uses a humorous writing style to describe the interaction of the protagonist group, which downplays this depressing and breathless feeling. The transformation is clever and not abrupt, which gives people a good feeling. However, as the background of the writing style is depressive and dark, it is like the rebound of a spring when it is pressed to the extreme. There will definitely be subsequent depressive explosions and tragic epics. This is also a breaking point. I am looking forward to it.