A Blind Array Genius Will Never Meet a Cold Female Swordsman

The writing is really good in Tomato. There is also a cute and sweet little Jiang Jianxian. The rhythm is well grasped, it doesn't look like a novice writer, please work harder [Punch][Adoration]

This book is good. The desolation written in the first twelve chapters is also very delicious. The reason why I gave it four stars instead of five is because Not enough to eat! ! ! I'm hungry and I don't have enough to eat! ! !

The plot is smooth and attractive, the scene transitions are smooth, the emotional rendering is naturally touching, and the writing is excellent. The recent chapters have given me a great surprise with the description of the emotional progress of the male and female protagonists. They are not like the natural relationship in other novels. Instead, they add the awkwardness and pull in the hearts of teenagers and girls who are just starting to fall in love. It is very confusing between high school students and is affected by each other's every move. The emotional throbbing resonated with me a lot. I recalled the experience I missed in high school due to misunderstandings due to anger and awkwardness. I hope the author can keep updating and give good reviews and support. I also hope that other readers can also give good reviews and support. The score shouldn't be so low, and judging from the plot, it must have a happy ending without a knife. Don't give low scores just because the previous plot is very miserable and think it is a knife. [Thoughts]

The writing style is good, and the writing is not as vulgar as other novels. The description is very delicate and exquisite, and the foreshadowing is very natural. It is rare to see such a breathy, feeling, and synaesthesia novel on this platform. I hope the author can write more words. There are too few good articles like this, not enough to read and not enough to satisfy. I feel like the plot has a bit of twists and turns, and the descriptions are also very delicious. But now I can't think of how to make a comeback

The writing is very good, the emotional changes are very delicate, and a lot of weather changes are used. I personally think it is just right. However, the essay pen can already surpass most works on the market. The disadvantage is that the current chapter is too short. As long as the quality of the subsequent chapters is comparable to the previous ones, it will definitely become popular. The author must keep writing, keep going. I have read 21 chapters so far. I tend to read everything online. I read a few chapters and abandon the book if I can't stand it anymore. But this book makes me very interested in reading it. Personally, I am very optimistic about this book. I think it has the potential to be a masterpiece. A single essay pen, not an essay pen. Typo

It's been a long time since I've read a novel that filled me with such joy. Bingyouzi and Iron Harrier made me happy in the book. The writing style is very recognizable. Compared with most similar works on the market, it has a delicate taste hidden in the roughness of the forest, sea and snowfield. Large sections of dialogue are intertwined with descriptions of the environment, and it is easy to spread out the picture of ice and snow in your mind, as if you are following the character on a personal journey, which is very enjoyable. Of course, there are also many problems in the work. The writing can still be seen as a little immature, and the logic of some characters' actions is far-fetched. There is still room for improvement in what the characters should do, what they should say, and at what points they should be expressed. At the same time, some details have slightly different styles before and after processing. Whether you are training AI assistants or writing your own writing, you need to find a more stable narrative rhythm and have good skills. All in all, all in all, I like [Punch Out] very much and look forward to reading more good content.

So far, so good and bad First of all, the author has done a relatively good job of setting out the environment and handling the details, which is rare in Tomato. But there are still a few poisonous points that I feel are relatively big (spoilers involved) The first one is the part where the heroine accepts the punishment and survives in the end. The reason why she can survive in the end is because of a jade token given by the hero. Why is it poisonous here? It mainly gives people a feeling of collapse in combat power. Because the elder had an anti-virtual cultivation level, he almost failed to defeat the magic weapon made by Nascent Soul, but luckily he defeated it later, so it was not too poisonous, and it could also be connected with the later, whether it was the male protagonist who found out the other person's identity and did not kill him, or the future male protagonist who came to the rescue. The other is the final processing of the Bingling siege. First of all, the desperate atmosphere was really brought to the climax in the previous part. In this situation, I really can't see how to get out of trouble. But what a coincidence, in the end it was the male protagonist from the future who traveled back through time. This is unexpected, and there doesn't seem to be much foreshadowing ahead. It cannot be considered reasonable at all. This kind of feeling is forced, and the protagonist is forced to live. There is no natural feeling, and the subjectivity is too strong. To put it simply, you just don't do what I want you to do. The characters and the plot are vivid.

The writing style is elegant and soft, the characters are vividly described, full and emotional, not brainless or unsystematic. The emotions are also very delicate. It is a rare masterpiece in Tomato. Recommended by bookworms who have spent thousands of hours. It is non-toxic.

The writing style is so delicate that it almost doesn't look like a high school student. It is so real that you can really feel the emotions of the characters and get yourself involved. The interaction between the male and female protagonists also makes people feel soft. I hope to see more and deeper interactions between the two and richer plot content. Come on!

It's okay. At least it's readable. Some people say it's polished by AI, but at least it's much better than what's written by "humans". To be honest, these low-rated books look much better than some high-rated books.

I read Chapter 44 at noon. It's really good. The writing style is very delicate. The author is still a high school student. To have such writing style, it is really a hero of my generation. Regarding the AI problem, some people say that it is an AI article, and there are indeed some traces of suspected AI, but it is definitely not dead, and even if it is AI, it only has a polishing effect. The author's strength cannot be denied. There are many people who use AI to write articles on the site, and I have written more privately. To be honest, I can't read many of them on the site. In my opinion, they are just mediocre. There are very few that can make me feel that I am at the same level. But if this novel is really AI, the author's level is probably far higher than mine. At present, it seems that the background of this novel is the kind of dark immortal cultivation style derived from dark martial arts. The whole thing is very depressing, painful and dark. At the same time, the author uses a humorous writing style to describe the interaction of the protagonist group, which downplays this depressing and breathless feeling. The transformation is clever and not abrupt, which gives people a good feeling. However, as the background of the writing style is depressive and dark, it is like the rebound of a spring when it is pressed to the extreme. There will definitely be subsequent depressive explosions and tragic epics. This is also a breaking point. I am looking forward to it.

I'm starving, it's so delicious😋, but I can't eat it😦. What will I eat if it doesn't change? [Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates][Please give me more updates] Teacher, not enough food😭😭

I think it's okay. I'll give it five stars. (Readers, do you feel that the AI ​​flavor is too heavy? It's not the overall description, but the description of the environment or action at the end of each paragraph. If you read too much, you will feel a strong DeepSeek feeling.)

When I first started reading, I felt that the pace was a little slow, but when the male and female protagonists met in Chapter 12, all problems were solved. The writing style is quite attractive, and the identity of the author's student is also surprising. In the end, a group of broken souls redeem each other and bring warmth to each other [Like], not bad

The author's writing style is really delicate, and the characters and environment are well described. He is the kind of person who can make up pictures from the words. After reading so many books on Tomato, the author's writing style feels very advanced. Faster and faster, come on! [Like][Like][Like]

Ah, the writing is good. The first volume was too cruel and it made me feel distressed to read it. Fortunately, there is a future line. The second volume hopes to be better for the protagonist group and the group portraits are the best. I want to go further and slowly expand the world view. The characters in the first volume are expanded. From the second volume, the world can be expanded from the story line of the abandoned guest, but don't add too much. It is easy to lose control. Overall, it is a good book with potential!

Yes, not bad. It fits my fantasy of normal love. The style is very similar to female videos, but it is definitely well written.

It's very good to watch, but it's a pity that the front part is a bit too depressing, how miserable the male and female protagonists are [crying][crying][crying]

The plot is smooth and attractive, the scene changes smoothly, and the emotions are rendered naturally. However, it is hard to find people who are impressed by their writing skills and excellent writing skills. Recently, The description of the emotional progress of the male and female protagonists in the chapters also impressed me a lot. Big surprise, nothing is as logical as in other novels - Instead, it adds to the inner feelings of young girls who have just begun to fall in love. Twisting and pulling are very confusing among high school students, because of the Fang's every move stirred up emotions. I hope the young author can persevere Updated, praised and supported, and I hope other readers will also praise and support Hold on, the rating shouldn't be so low, and it depends on the direction of the plot. It will definitely have a happy ending without any knives. Please don't watch the previous plot. I thought it was too bad and gave me a low score [Thinking]

Many places have a strong AI flavor. I hope the author can make as many modifications and ideas as possible and don't let AI describe all the details. First, AI will not bury the pen, causing your work to have no main thread, like one continuous chapter; second, AI will easily go to extremes when describing delicate emotional progress, and it will not describe the kind of mental journey from disgust to love, which is exactly what readers want to see most. I hope this book will get better and better, and I hope the author will succeed in his studies.

The plot is excellent, and although there are some minor mistakes, the flaws are not outweighed. The advantages are obvious, with a strong sense of life and delicate emotional lines... It makes people feel comfortable to read. They all come here to watch the interaction between the male and female protagonists. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

The style is not as sophisticated and neat as the old author's, and is a bit procrastinating. It can be seen that the author is working hard to portray the characters. Since the author is very diligent, he is given five stars for encouragement.

It's rare to find this kind of thing in 🍅. It's pretty good-looking. The writing is okay, but it's not enough.

The author's age is a plus! The writing style is average and the pace is compact. Although the world view is not yet complete, the article has just started and there is still a lot of room for improvement. I hope it's a HE ending [laughing][laughing][laughing]

It feels a bit heavy at the beginning, but many interesting plots will appear unexpectedly in the middle. The supporting characters of Abandoned Living Room are well portrayed, interspersing humorous daily life in the depressive world view, which is a bit like some Japanese comics. Nice!

If you write it yourself, it is definitely possible in Tomato Novels. I often use AI, so I can see a bit of AI flavor. AI likes to use this sentence pattern the most, and the description is very detailed. The full text description accounts for a lot, and it is a bit cumbersome. This is one of the major characteristics of using AI. I can also feel the feeling revealed between the lines, but I can't make a conclusion yet. Let's take another look.

Maybe it's because I have a strong sense of involvement and I got goosebumps watching it. This is a very rare novel [exploration] In my opinion, this is the best among foreign persimmons [like]

The author is very good at describing some daily scenes, but at the beginning, the protagonist team suffered a defeat in Chapter 59. In the end, the protagonist cheated and survived the crisis without any foreshadowing. The text at the beginning of Chapter 60 made me wonder if I had read 200 chapters less. The feeling of fragmentation was too serious and I couldn't stand it anymore. Overall, it was remarkable, so go for the author. Wrong writing, chapter 58 was flat, and chapter 59 started to change the style of painting.

It's nice to watch, but it's not updated enough. I still want to watch it.

I think it's okay. The relationship is all about the flow. I haven't seen any particularly sudden emotional progress so far. It doesn't feel like a traditional male channel. ① The disadvantage is that it's a bit grindy. There will be too many descriptions. There is very little progress in hundreds of chapters. It would be better if it can focus on the main line. I can revise it again if I have the opportunity in the future. ②The male protagonist's blank space, or the male protagonist's monologue, is too much. . . It can be seen that the author wants to lighten the rather sad atmosphere, and there will be inexplicable game words and jokes. Okay, I really don't understand it a bit, and sometimes adding these may make the language very confusing. Sometimes I can't understand a large paragraph of text. What on earth is the male protagonist going to do? Moreover, not everyone understands this meme, so it can only be limited to a small circle. Kobe was also stunned. Well, it can exist, but sometimes there are too many, and it is weird. ③Then it's not the kind of traditional cool novel, it's really a trickle of water, it's not just that the male protagonist starts with a golden finger, it's just a little bit of abuse, okay? ④I am also very confused in these recent chapters. Why did he suddenly come out to look for the heart and start killing people? Was it the male protagonist who finally couldn't hold it in any longer and exploded? Or do you want to create a cool plot? But it feels like the character is a bit broken. I can't stand it either. (The above is just to find out some shortcomings. In fact, many of them are about describing things in this aspect, and the recent plot feels a bit awkward, but overall, I personally think it is quite good, and the emotions are very good. Everyone has their own Hamlet. Maybe I think the problem is not a problem in others' eyes, but I still hope that the author can get better and better. If it fails, you will be finished haha⚈₃⚈꧞)