Mortals Cultivating Immortality, the Strongest Pension System

It's well written. It's exactly what I want in my mind for retirement and cultivation. With a late blooming talent and a systematic pension, you don't need to go out to explore and compete for resources. You can steadily improve your cultivation by finding a place to retreat and cultivate!

Goldfinger is very satisfying. Of course, it has its shortcomings, but it is worth watching.

The pace is relatively fast, but relatively peaceful, and it is okay and quite contradictory. It is fast-paced, peaceful, but quite interesting.

I'm not very good at expressing my love for this book. The author describes it very well and the pacing is just right. Although the protagonist has a pension, the author controls it very well and maintains the protagonist Goudao's character very well. Come on, author

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Suitable for middle-aged and elderly people to watch in their free time

Come on, well written

Go to the room to find a few female characters, raise your heart, be proficient in music, chess, calligraphy and painting, and then look for them when you reach the golden elixir stage.

It's okay, I can't say it's great, but it's acceptable! Be encouraged!

It's pretty good written by a newcomer.

Very well written, keep it up!

Cook the food and watch while eating [cool][cool][cool]

Well written, okay

Very good, why is the score so low?

Although the writing is a bit poor, the new track of pensions is quite interesting. It turns out that novels can be written like this

Why don't you write anymore? Very well written! Don't pay attention to the bad comments! Come on!

It's obvious that it's a new author. How should I put it? The heroine is a bit incomprehensible but still good and doesn't have too many poisonous points. It's already very good for a new author to write like this. Come on, author😊 It is only suitable for new authors and new readers. It can also be read by old bookworms.

The writing is very good and novel. The main character is practicing at the right pace and has many opportunities.

The subject matter is quite fresh, but the writing style and content need to be strengthened.

Why does the author like to explain so much! You are the author and set up whatever content you want! Be bold! Be confident!

For a reader who has been reading for more than ten years, this novel is really well written, I really enjoyed reading it, and the plot is also novel. It's just that the rating seems to have been lowered maliciously.