Hogwarts: the Dark Lord and the Witches All Fall

1 This book can be divided into two aspects: combat (forceful) aspect and emotional description aspect. The combat aspect is very well written, the narrative speed is very reasonable, and the details are appropriate, which can fully mobilize the readers' emotions. The emotional description is even better. The action details, advancement speed, effective content content, and interaction between the two parties are all very well written, allowing readers to be perfectly immersed in it. It is an absolute fairy grass level. 2 Since Chapter 43, the description of emotional interactions has become more and more perfunctory, with fewer and fewer details, and the pace of advancement has also begun to slow down. The number of effective emotional interactions that can actually mobilize readers' feelings has decreased. Readers read continuously like "emotionally detached". It is recommended that the author calm down, preferably bring himself deeply into the protagonist, and add more effective interactions that can mobilize readers' emotions. 3 A message to the author: Hello! I don't know your living situation, the author, and I don't know if you, the author, have encountered anything. If you are in a bad mood due to some things and are not in the mood to write a book, then take a good rest. You are the most important thing. Looking forward to what's coming next! Come on! Why does it feel like Hermione is starting to distance herself from the protagonist? Every time, the trio of Harry, Hermione, and Ron meet the protagonist. There is obviously a variable of the protagonist, but the main plot is still the same as the original. How strange!

If there is no one yet, give yourself a five-star_(:з∠)_ Everyone is welcome to give comments, whether they are good or bad, the author will accept them. I am a new author. The questions and opinions you raise are the motivation for the author's progress! [Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript][Working on manuscript]

Nothing to say, five stars support. Books like Harry Potter are either interesting or boring. This is one of the more interesting ones. For now, let's wait and see what happens next. Comment again.

The plot is okay. Although the text is polished by AI, the plot is readable. The problem is that some places do not read smoothly, and some words do not need to exist. For example, xx does not answer the conversation. If this paragraph is removed, the reading will at least be much smoother. Therefore, I only give four stars for this problem. I hope the author will read more after writing, and then make corrections himself.

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Looks good, keep up the good work [laughs]

There are so many bulges that I can have them

I always feel that the protagonist is not a villain, but a coquettish one.

Where did I write about Liu Bei's [Adoration] before?

Come on, come on, I like it very much. Just don't stop updating. As long as you write it in this style, I will definitely read it until the end [Sending my heart]

The details in many parts of the article are well written. It can also be said that it is not details, but delicacy. Come on

It's okay, I'll watch it when I'm bored

Lots, lots, lots, lots of girls, I'll rate it later when there are more plots.

Try to keep the score below 7.0.

Give you a five-star support

It's quite good, the description is very detailed, I hope the author can speed up the update.

Although you haven't updated it yet, I still want to give you five stars. I just hope you will update it when you remember.

It's well written and keeps me reading [heart] There aren't many books like this [love]

The battle scenes are good. The setting of adding Harley as a new character is indeed new.