Broken! My Sister's Devilish Mentor Is My Ex-Girlfriend

The writing is okay, but this is the plot. Those who like it think that the male and female protagonists are very delicate, and those who don't like it think it is a bit pointless. The younger sister does not know the relationship between the mentor and her older brother, and will not help her older brother hide his identity. The female protagonist can solve dozens of unresolved issues in dozens of chapters by asking her sister's name. However, the female protagonist asks if ginger should be used in cooking, and asks a lot of circumstantial questions. But this may also have something to do with the heroine's character, but overall it's pretty good.

In fact, I think this is in line with reality. It is not the fast-paced love on the Internet. Because the normal slow-paced love in reality is too rare, people think that the fast-paced love is correct, because not everyone has the courage to face this, and there will always be people who choose to escape.

It's very good-looking, and the male protagonist is also very good. I don't know why I feel that the male protagonist's friend likes the male protagonist. I don't know if it's my imagination, but the male protagonist is really attentive and takes good care of others.

I found a book that is different from Tomato Shuangwen, and it is comfortable to read. Maybe for many people, this book is very slow, but I still enjoyed reading it, as if I was slowly drinking a cup of good tea. As for Su Yan, although he has been evading, I feel that he has already explained why he is evading. In fact, I feel particularly touched. If I think that I will drag my partner down, I will not hesitate to push her to a better future. It is better to cry for a while than to suffer for a lifetime. As for Lu Zhiyi, I think she knows everything, but it remains to be seen, why doesn't she directly confront Su Yan? My favorite Chen Wanqing, the best tool person, I like her no matter what. It's really good. I like it very much. Please give it a thumbs up to the author. Please read more. It's not enough. [Cry][cry][cry]

I'm really touched. The last time I burst into tears was because of Kazama He. The author's writing style is really excellent and delicate. Some people say that Su Yan is a turtle man and cowardly, but I think it's the opposite. He has shouldered the future of a family. He took it from his father and shouldered it without complaint. The inferiority complex is something that every child born in poverty will experience. It's not that Su Yan doesn't understand, he knows very well that he doesn't deserve it. (I think) Director Lu, but he is down-to-earth and capable. He is the eldest son who takes the lead at home, and he is an efficient employee outside. He is also considerate emotionally. Who can really hate such a person? What I see in the text is a flesh-and-blood Su Yan, and I also see a man who firmly chooses himself. I love Director Lu (actually, if there is a side story, I would also like to see the background of Lu Zhiyi, it will satisfy me a lot [shy]). Such a story, if replaced by an ordinary writer, might become one of many casual stories, but Director Lu really moved me with his writing and true feelings, and I also reported it at the beginning. I just wanted to see the psychology of the two people confessing when they met, but the pull between the two people, the intentional leakage of flaws and other details made me feel real and touching countless times. Reunion is never a rush of blood, and the complete story chain of misunderstandings arising and unraveling is more interesting than those love stories. I am not forcing you to read this book. I am just expressing some of my superficial opinions. I just hope that people who like each other will not be forced to separate because of non-emotional issues.

The article is quite good, and the emotions are very delicate. However, the author is really disgusting. He kept making me want to read it, which made me feel uncomfortable... (｀へ´), But I think I still like this kind of thing. I hope the author can update every day [making faces]

This book really touched me and I enjoyed reading it. It reminded me of a sentence on the Internet, "So the meaning of encounter is the part that has been changed. It replaces you and stays with me forever. This is the meaning of encounter."

It's very interesting. I watched it without missing a word all night. The memo conversation between Su Yan and Lu Zhiyi was very interesting, but I'm a little curious about whether Su Yan will explain to Lu why he left and the empty envelope later.

If I asked for his name, the previous paragraph would not exist. It was outrageous. If I wanted to know if it was him, the easiest thing would be to ask for his name first, but I didn't ask. Afraid not, you are searching for a sword in your mind and find traces of the past in the new story. You are afraid that the answer will destroy your persistence. Afraid it is not, so you carefully test and seek the sword from every tiny detail. No more delivering meals or forcibly changing details. As long as you change a little bit, you will become a similar leaf instead of the sword of Kezhou. I feel inferior and fearful, but I pray unknowingly. I am afraid of being discovered but do not change. The reluctance suppressed in the heart, or the hope that shines through the dark and damp low self-esteem. Covered in narrative idealized reality. After all, most of you will not meet Liu Gong. Most of you will only have new stories in the sea of ​​people. It is more about the past that is suddenly remembered and forgotten at a certain moment. I wish you lovers will eventually get married, I wish you don't have to worry about the boat and the sword, and I wish you can meet again in a new story.

I couldn't sleep and read a few chapters. It was quite good, but it may have borrowed part of it from AI. The overall plot was coherent, but a bit draggy and slightly toxic. It may be that the recent AI articles tend to be bland and seem a bit sketchy. The author should have revised them himself. There are not many common problems with other AI articles. You can read

Let's talk about the summary first. Five points is high, but it is indeed a good book that is rarely seen in Qimao. The writing style is relatively delicate, and the description points are also meticulous, but I think Cheng Ye Xiao He Defeat Xiao He. Repeated emphasis will still increase the boredom of readers. It's not that you can't emphasize it, but you don't want to repeat every detail. I think such a large number of details is okay at the beginning, but the more you go on, the more blank space you have to leave. Readers should be able to associate the parts that the author has not written. Overall, it is really good. I finished reading it in two days. The pulling between the man and woman in the front is even better. I don't know why the score is so low.

This book must be supported! This is the type that I benefited from. It's slow-burning, unlike some cool novels where the two chapters are together at the beginning. The author's writing style has a literary youthful flavor, and the writing style is so sophisticated that people can't get tired of it. The description is detailed but not sluggish, and the psychological descriptions of the male and female protagonists are excellent! Reading the comments above, it is said that male readers do not recommend it. I think both male and female readers can try it. It is very beautiful [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua] It's almost time to catch up, so I'll write a follow-up review. I originally wanted to give it four and five stars, but Yang Persimmon doesn't have this option, so I'll round it up to five stars. Let's talk about some of the highlights of this book. It's obvious that the heroine has a disease that makes you think about her when you ask her name. I haven't seen the male and female protagonists in more than 90 scenes, and there are I don't believe this article does not refer to AI. The AI style is really obvious in some places, but the author has obviously processed it with his own hands. Well (⊙_⊙) How can I put it, this book has great potential, the author should work hard and try his best to write in his own color [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

The writing is very real, slow-paced, but very sweet [laughing]. I have read more than 90 chapters before the two officially meet [laughing]. The writing is very good. Finally, I want to make a request that I really want. Can the author list the information in everyone's memo, it is very meaningful [blowing kiss]

The article is really well written. Pulling is right, entanglement is right, and fear of facing is right. I just want to read this nonsense ( The author must insist on updating. Good wine is not afraid of deep alleys, and good writing is not afraid of low ratings. I give five stars because there are only five stars. Come on!

The writing style is very delicate, and the description of the male and female protagonists is very vivid. There are no other problems except for the slow pace. For me, it is a book that I will keep reading. I feel that I have not read enough. The author, please update it more!

This kind of slow-paced article is really written in a delicate way [crying] [crying] [crying] I cried many times while reading it [crying] [crying] The male protagonist also has his own difficulties, and the writing of this article is also very realistic. There is no great joy or sorrow in the article, but the plain and delicate love is really It makes you moved [crying] [crying] The male and female protagonists are both good babies [crying] But to be honest, I feel that the knives in this article are all the kind of broken glass, there is no heart-wrenching knife, just the kind of pain that slowly penetrates into the bone marrow little by little [crying] [crying]

The plot is delicate enough, but I feel that it is not suitable for today's fast-paced novels (only personal feeling) [Chigua] Let's divide it up. Some readers like this kind of writing, slow pace, and emphasis on details. 🍅There are too many interesting articles, and I feel like most of them have developed the same feeling as in the previous dozens of chapters. I'll see if I want to follow up. What the author writes is more like Xizhuang [laughing evilly] The story of stomachache is mostly over. The author must know what the readers want to see now [I understand] I hope there will be no more reversals, (except for forward reversals) [Note] Five-star praise is given, the author greatly cheers [Please update] [Upvote] [Hold] [Hold] [Hold] [Hold] [Hold] [Hold] [Hold] [Hold]

It's super beautiful, the story line is very clear, and the emotional portrayal of the male and female protagonists is very good. It's really sweet. This is what I thought from the bottom of my heart. From the first chapter when the heroine tasted the pork rib soup and knew that he was back, she started to change the iced American style into hot milk. I have been attracted by it. I hope the author can continue to write new books.

I really enjoyed this novel, but some may find it slow. Why did the heroine not recognize the hero for so long? Here I would like to give my own understanding. The female protagonist has been looking for the male protagonist for 3 years and has met all kinds of people. It is not surprising that someone can satisfy a few things, but it is not him yet. The author then gave a male partner who was not afraid of rejection and was willing to learn these conditions. But the heroine still refused, because what matters is not the conditions, but you (the hero). Temperature is not important, 52-53℃ is common, but love is not common. I left you, but my body has not forgotten you, and I still retain the habit of cooking. I think it's pretty good, so I urge you to update more.

The senses are good at the moment, but after reading around chapter 40, I wonder why they broke up and stopped seeing each other. That reason is a bit too far-fetched, and I can make up for it later. And the plot is indeed novel, but don't extend the timeline too long, otherwise the appeal will gradually decrease no matter how you conceive the plot later. At present, the small details of the two of them not meeting each other are quite full, but if you want to go to more than 100 chapters, the subsequent plots must be more attractive than the previous ones, or the book will be finished soon. It feels really good, so I'll review it. I've read so many books, and this is the first time I've reviewed it so seriously. Come on, author.

The pace is slow, but it is true. It is a story about a strong woman. It is written very delicately. The male protagonist had a bit of low self-esteem in the early stage because of his money, family and social status. Everything else is okay. Generally speaking, if you can accept the slow pace, you can give it a try.

I reviewed this book a few days ago, and the five-star review is enough to show how much I love this book. But also recently, after reading the content about "Mindong Yuan" in the book, I always felt that there was something wrong with the setting of this content, and I would like to express my views in detail. Disclaimer in advance: I fully respect the freedom of literary creation, and I can also resolve conflicts in the plot of a novel. But I think it is very unrealistic to portray an employee of a provincial design institute as someone who retaliates because of a failed bid. This kind of behavior and character is almost impossible to appear in reality. The reason why I say this is because most provincial design institutes belong to public institutions, and they have legal channels for dissent and appeals. This kind of retaliation will not only bear extremely high legal risks, but will also directly ruin one's career. The risks are extremely high and extremely rare in the industry. Normal people will never take such a risk for a failed bid. Because of this, the setting of this plot in the book seems to me to be divorced from reality and lacks rigor. It is suggested that the author consider revising the relevant content and give the industry and practitioners due respect.

Not bad, it looks a little uncomfortable from the front

The image of the male protagonist, who has low self-esteem to the core, is deeply portrayed. His emotions collide in contradictions, desire and cowardice are entangled. On one side, he is a master's tutor, and on the other side he is a native student. The gap is like the difference between clouds and mud. In this situation, retreat is inevitable. Lu Mingfei couldn't be with his senior sister because of his low self-esteem. He was a coward from Long Yi to Long Sanxia. But I can't stand it anymore, I remembered something that resonated with me and the hero, so goodbye

The writing style is relatively delicate, but the plot content is indeed more challenging to the audience. The nearly one hundred chapters are indeed lengthy, but after accepting it, the impression is still very good. It is more suitable for my personal radio waves. Please support it.

I read it in one go, very different from the books on Western Persimmon This is not a cool novel. The plot and writing style are very good. Reading this book is like drinking tea, not just drinking it in one gulp, but savoring it slowly...

I like this kind of pace very much because it is very slow and slow enough to give me time to think about their psychology and emotions. The author is quite good, especially in terms of character creation. Compared with various CEO articles, I like this kind of more "mediocre" character identity more. Personally speaking, there are few writing styles in Tomato that can compare with this. But whether the protagonist is too conflicted in the early stage, and whether the conflicting psychology is lengthy, it can easily give people a very awkward feeling, a bit unrealistic, and not quite like a normal male's way of dealing with it. The low score is probably due to this. Ideal and reality have to be separated after all, it depends on how to choose. But a special story must be special. I don't think there is any big problem. Five stars!

The male protagonist does indeed keep pulling, which is not a good look. However, the author's writing style is so delicate and his literary talent is so good, it shouldn't be more than five points.

I am convinced that the author's secret love is unforgettable The character setting has been blurred by a single obsession. The female protagonist has become plump from the beginning and has become flat. On the positive side, the male protagonist is seriously ill, but on the negative side, it drags on and forcibly prolongs the plot. The younger sister is the author's tool.

The title can be changed, the writing can express the feeling of inferiority and depression, there are details but some people still can't understand it, it can be simplified and the emotions can be added to it, it can be more detailed, the protagonist is energetic, but the supporting characters are a little less energetic, so you can write less, but some parts are indispensable, come on, author