Douluo Dalu: My Martial Soul Is the Galactic Spark

It's a very interesting fanfic. The protagonist has a good outlook on life, is strong, and has his own principles. The author's writing style is also very good. The description of the fighting scenes is very handsome, and the emotional lines are very delicate. I almost wanted to cry when I read it 😢

There is nothing to say, the writing is very good, the writing is clear and not procrastinating, and the description of the scenes is not sloppy. It is very good. The protagonist is also very well portrayed. He has positive energy, good outlook on life, hates evil, and has the same innocent heart as the human body in the tokusatsu drama. I also hope that the author will not give up on himself because of ratings and inappropriate remarks. As the drama says, "It is because of perseverance that human beings can shine so brightly."

Come on, author, the protagonist of this book has very upright views. It can be said that he has the most upright views among the Douluo fans I have ever read. The emotional scenes are also very detailed. The idea of ​​connecting Ultraman and Douluo is simply genius. The plot seems to be relatively smooth. In short, come on, author, don't let it end.

The author's writing style is quite good, but the protagonist of this kind of saint character is not suitable for fantasy novels. There is really no need to give a good look to a supporting character like Yu Xiaogang who keeps making faces. I can only accept it because he is also a Ben Ot fan. In addition, although the emotional line is a bit too strong in some places, it is also very good. It temporarily cured my poly-female ptsd.

The Douluo of the Austrian system is actually. I thought it was Aiwen at first, but after reading it a little later, it seems that it is not. However, the original Galaxy Spark can split into sub-bodies like the Dark Spark. Just give the sub-bodies blue crystal sparks to the rabbit for self-defense. It will be interesting when monsters and giant dolls appear later.

The protagonist has three correct views. It can be said to be a good book among Douluo books.

Come on, author, the main character has a positive outlook on life and is very logical. I give it the highest score. It's too easy to block Douluo here, I'm looking forward to the following plot (Can you please not let the protagonist kneel all the time, it will be uncomfortable for the viewers, just let it be a apprenticeship at the beginning, but later the protagonist just arrives late and it feels like the sky is falling and then kneels down, just apologize and salute, it will be uncomfortable for the viewers. I hope to reduce the description of kneeling as much as possible)

I won't stress about the rating, the writing is really good, come on author, it doesn't matter if there are few people now, Tomato push is like this, come on, ensure the quality of the work, there will always be people coming

So far, it's pretty good. I hope that after finishing the first part, I can write the second and third parts of Douluo from scratch. In fact, I am quite satisfied with all the protagonists Dou Yi and Dou Yi on the whole. When I saw that the author wrote Tang San a bit poorly, to be honest, I was a little angry, but when I thought about what Tang San Dou Er did, I felt that it would be best to just write it like this. Of course, this is from the perspective of comics and animation. After reading Dou Er's novel, I thought of what Tang San did in the Legend of Gods comic book, and what Dou Er and Tang San did. If the author plans to write Dou Er in the future, I hope he won't replace Huo Yuhao. From Dou I to Dou III, I think Huo Yuhao is my favorite. Is that from the perspective of comics, animation or novels? If the author hadn't deliberately written Huo Yuhao into such an unclear relationship, Dou Er might have been the masterpiece of Douluo in my mind.

You can turn the unused soul rings into spark dolls [smile] Then you can directly summon the army of soul beasts [note]