The Summer Breeze Brushes the Boy's Face

Are they also the soldiers of cowards? That must be supported!

It's really good👍I personally feel that the writing is smoother and more delicate than "The Coward". It's very comfortable to read. The protagonist's decline is just right. The emotional line is complex and distinct. It's very good. It is a potential good book with five stars. Come on, author! When I read around chapter 70, I was actually a little disappointed. Although there were a lot of problems with the details, the main line was relatively clear, the emotional line was being promoted steadily, and the writing was in place. Until Confession, I didn't understand why a lot of writing was spent on insignificant supporting characters. The main plot dragged very slowly and took a sharp turn. If it were to enrich Lin Shu's characters, there would be no need to describe so much to slow down the plot. Comparing it to the novel "Coward" of the same type, although there is a plot like a drama that slows down the main line, it is divorced from the main line. If you don't read it, it will have no impact on the perception of the story. The author's writing method of increasing Lin Shu's life experience and advancing the emotional line at the same time is okay, but don't make the plot too long. You can try a short single story or multiple consecutive stories. I went and wrote so many book reviews at once. My words were a bit radical, but I really wanted this book to get better and better. I have read four or five novels of the same type, and this is the only one I have seen that has the feel of "The Coward" and has its own style. I hope the author will get better and better ❤️

It's pretty good, but I don't know who the heroine is yet.

The description and plot advancement are very good, but I personally think that some of the sudden literary language in it affects the reading experience, but overall it is still very good😄😄

The writing is quite good, but some chapters are too literary. The description is okay. This book is originally written as a memoir, but it is too long, such as 31 chapters. It can be made shorter. That chapter does express the emotion of youth, but the unpleasant chapter can be saved because the male protagonist sleeps in class💤... Later on, there are some problems with the handling of the characters. There is too little interaction between Chen and the male protagonist. Books of the same type, such as cowards and ordinary people, are much better handled. I hope the author can continue to work hard and not stop updating! I hope I will be with Qingmei. Just reading the description in Chapter 73, I feel like Qingmei wins. (This is also my first time writing such a long chapter review. If you have any questions, just point them out. Don't scold me.) I was reading on two devices because I was in school. I don't know why the reading time didn't add up, but it was at least 25 hours.

I've only read more than 20 chapters. Overall... It's great! I've never had anything like this before. I was mostly in love in college, so it feels very strange to see this. But does the author have a female protagonist in this book? What does it mean to write "Regret" in the novel's introduction? [Pouts]

To borrow the words of the author, everyone should love boldly and hate boldly. Don't worry about it. It's the first time for everyone, so there's not much to worry about. But you should still say some gentle words to the person you like, and be submissive, because you can't tell whether she will be your destiny. In summer, a season that carries the meaning of separation, I hope we can all be by each other's side.

The cover is really nice and the writing is pretty good. As long as you don't do it, the supervisor will keep pursuing you.

After reading a few chapters, I personally feel that it is quite good. It describes the youthful feeling of a middle school boy, but there are a few points that I am not satisfied with: 1. The acquaintance between Lin Shu and Chen Yao is not well laid out. It feels like they just said a few words and made a few looks. 2. As a childhood sweetheart, Xu Muying saw Lin Shu talking to Chen Yao, whom she did not know, and asked Lin Shu if he liked Chen Yao, which was a bit baffling. 3. When reading the review, I saw the author saying "I can't describe it" in the comment area when replying to the question "be or he, who is the heroine?" Isn't this the outline?

This wave, this wave, I stand on Qingmei