After Becoming a Disciple of Fulian, Naruto Just Wanted to Travel Around the Ninja World

It's tied. The setting of this book is very interesting. Naruto's world view is very different from that of Fulian. This may also be due to the different types of works. Naruto's world is full of bitterness and hatred, and every character feels very tired. Although there are demons in Fulian's world, the overall style of the road movie still favors free exploration of the world. The original Naruto was born in the world of Naruto, and his life has always been driven by all kinds of love and hatred, so I hope that in this fan work, Naruto can live more freely in the world of Fulian and have more opportunities and time to see how big this world is.

The writing is really good. I feel that the loneliness and helplessness that Naruto had when he was a child has been gradually cured by the people in Fulian's world, and the two worlds are seamlessly connected without any sense of dissonance. However, Naruto is currently more dependent on the magic of Frilian's world. On the contrary, his growth in ninjutsu is relatively slow. This may be because Naruto in the original ninja world had too short a time to grow up. He became the savior at the age of 17, so he can only spend more time learning and growing up on learning magic with Frilian.

The writing is very delicate. And I also like this worldview very much... Fulian's teaching of magic to Naruto is really magical. It's also good to let Naruto feel love one step ahead. Yeah, I'm running out of words. Anyway, it is a very good book. I beg the author not to write a book with a female protagonist. . .

It's very well written, and the plot doesn't drag on. Naruto can leave as soon as he wants, and can travel between the ninja world and the world of Frilian. If he can't defeat the ninja, he will go to the world of Frilian to learn magic. It's so yin, I like it [laughs evilly]. This is the first Naruto fanfic I can read (I haven't watched the anime). I hope the author will not stop updating [Love] [Sending Hearts]

The protagonist Naruto, according to the current plot, the first tens of thousands of words are mainly about Naruto's growth and strength. In the follow-up, Fulian World will most likely follow him to the Golden Land. On the Hokage's side, because the protagonist wants to find information about Obito, it inadvertently intensifies the conflict between Uchiha and Konoha. There is a high probability that he will not follow the ship, and it also leaves a foreshadowing for escaping from Konoha. All in all, there is no heroine, no following the ship, no overwhelming combat power, no conspiracy theories, no protection of Konoha, and the plot is not procrastinating. These advantages outweigh most of the shortcomings.

It's very good-looking, although some places are a bit weird, but overall it's very good-looking. Naruto, who is not limited to the distorted view of ninjas, is really sunny, and will become a good person like Simmel, but in the Naruto world, he looks like Fulian? Or is it the same as her human teacher?

The grass jelly, which is rare in Tomato, is worth seeing. The author definitely put his heart into it when writing it. The plot is not blunt, and the emotions are well laid out. However, I feel that the plot behind it may not be easy to follow. Because in the ninja world, except for Obito, there is almost nothing that can affect the protagonist's return to the ninja world. Looking forward to the follow-up!

Five stars, a solid five stars. It is better written than the Naruto of Eggplant 99, and it is also the most difficult Aboriginal Naruto. The main thing is not to take pressure. Although the final word count may be less than that of the pull story, I can clearly say that the Aboriginal Naruto is more beautiful than the time-travel Naruto of 99.9, And it is also better written than the Naruto of 90.

The writing is quite good, and the plot is quite to my liking. Since it is an anime fanfic, I don't care about the original plot. I can change it to whatever it is, as long as the initial plot development is logical and the setting does not conflict with the original work. It can also be seen in the article that the author has found a lot of original settings and things, which are interesting, and the plot is also very well written, without deliberately doing anything. The characterization of the characters is also very good, and it is also a smooth guide. You can understand it and it is good-looking:)

The writing is delicate and the plot is cleverly conceived. Instead of following the original plot, he created a new plot of his own. Not stiff but natural and interesting. Naruto's loneliness and powerlessness were cured by Haita and others, and he became a strong, gentle, brave and rational person. It has improved very quickly compared to the original work, and the plot is reasonable, there is no harem, and it has a very good travel feeling. It's that feeling of freedom, no longer having to face disgusting conspiracies, just being a traveling ninja as a magician. It feels a bit like The Burial of Florian to me, a rare good book.

The dissatisfaction point is that there is almost no development in the emotional scenes, because Naruto is too strong. At first, I thought Frilian World would be with 🍆, but after a long time, I felt that Frilian World was more like a trap, allowing Naruto time to develop and learn magic. But I feel like it's a pity that it has only developed to this extent. Others are fine

It's pretty cool. If you think Uchiha is very poisonous, it's a very normal thing. After all, the bigger the circle, the more gods and people there are (Konoha Village). The smaller the circle, the more godly people there are (Uchiha). This makes sense, right? [Sneaky laugh] [OK]

Not bad, not bad so far

Very strange inspiration.

Uzumaki Naruto Chakra·Ninjutsu Magic·Magic Nine Tails Ninja World Fulian Magical World Florian Hightower Phelan Houtalk Uzumaki Phosphorus Uchiha Light

Yes, it's quite interesting, and I don't see any conspiracy theories.

Absolutely amazing, I love watching this new subject matter, it's worth a million monthly salary Naruto was really influenced a lot, and he really learned the sense of relaxation from the people in Frilian's world.

It's pretty good. It's rare to find novels on Tomato that can immerse me in the story. Hope it can be updated.

I really want to see Naruto learn how to reincarnate in the filthy earth. Frilian said that the plan has changed. She will no longer look for Xinmel. Let Xinmel come to me [laughing evilly]

When will Uchiha Itachi, the Third Generation, and Danzo be reduced to ashes [smile], will these three die? I'll run away if I don't die

You can later build a magic empire and destroy the entire ninja world system. And chakra is always restrained by Da Jianmu.

If it were the brave Simmel, he would definitely give it 5 stars!

I read it in one night, very good, peace should not be borne, take revenge, Naruto

As of now, it's like a fairy grass. I really recommend everyone to check it out and remind you to update it by the way.

It looks really good. I recommend it.

This book is great. The writing is excellent. It is different from the verbal essays written by Tomato. It feels like reading a novel in other software. The quality has improved. I feel that the author is also very careful and will add details at the end of the book.

It's okay. I'll give you five stars first.

It seems good so far, but the sense of separation between the two worlds is a bit strong, or the update is too slow [please update]

A bit bland but good, no OOC either Especially when I write about Mi Shuimen The last sentence tells Minato that he has learned his special skills

Good looking, very good