Dayan Guard: After Signing for Ten Years, I'm Out of the Mountain

To be honest, there is something wrong with the well-written article only having a rating of 5.5, But after reading the updated content, I almost understand. It's not that the article is not good, but that the values conveyed are not in place. Your protagonist received a socialist education, but raised his children with feudalist ideas. No matter how you live, the ideological education before time travel should be subconscious. I only think here I can suggest that if you continue writing like this, you can write about emperors, but the values ​​should be in place or you can directly transform the dynasty in the later period. Otherwise, the score will not be high. Even if you brush the official version, you will not be able to get a high score. In fact, there are many things that violate common sense, but if you have written them systematically, you will not care. But after all, this is not the kind of invincible cultivation of immortals, so you still need to have some logic. (Personal opinion. If you disagree with other people's opinions, you can reply to the debate without personal emotions.) (4 Stars for the article. The worse one is because the values ​​​​are not in place because it is not finished. If the values ​​​​are not in place after writing, then I can only give 3 stars to pass)

There are still some poisonous spots. If there is a Grandmaster of the Nine Levels, the Patriarch will not kill the King of Zhenbei before he dies [face covering]

The main line is clear and there are no symptoms of anencephaly. Good writing style, good literary talent, good systematic writing, 99 copies were on the list, just one point shy of being on the list.

What the protagonist says is superfluous. If you are afraid of this, you are just a coward! [Cover face]

Goodbye, author. I have no choice but to make this decision. I hope I Let's meet again by chance. Because something unexpected happened Love has a greater impact and blow on me, so I want to formally talk to you. Don't. I really miss you guys. It's really nice to get to know you. Happy. I came across your book a few days ago and I feel like it is really a treasure. I have been reading your book for so long, but the joy and joy you bring me It's touching but unforgettable, but there's nothing I can do about it, isn't life like this? Yes, full of helplessness. I hope you can always stick to your original intention like this Keep going and persist until the end. Thank you again for bringing me so much. So happy and touching, angry and sad, thank you for your continued support these days Stay with me. The main reason for leaving this time is because I am sleepy Now, I'm going to bed. I'll come back tomorrow and remember to update.

Yes, it's very nice. There are too few articles. Please write more. It's so stupid. The main character is almost invincible and he still has to hide it. I don't know what the author is thinking.

Beautiful, rare good article, looks very comfortable

Very nice. Thank you for supporting your five-star review.

The structure is clear. I like to read the content. It is relatively rich and relevant to reality. I hope you will continue to work hard. It has a clear structure. I like to read the content. It is relatively rich. It is relevant to reality. I hope you will continue to work hard. It is very beautiful.

It looks pretty cool, please update! They should leave the palace and destroy a group of top warriors!

I've read more than 40 chapters, and I can still read [Chigua] so far.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good

Okay, it's not all because Ai is basically logical and orderly, and the author has his own way, it seems.

At first I just thought it was an ordinary refreshing article, and I was wondering why I was reading it at such a high level. After reading it, I realized that the rhythm is particularly smooth.

I feel like I can write it! It looks very comfortable too!

It's flesh-and-blood, pretty good, and I've worked hard to update it. Worthy of praise.

It does work, it looks good. Those who gave negative reviews were intentional, and the author must have the potential to be a masterpiece. Come on, author

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

Of course everyone read such a beautiful book together [laughing awkwardly] I can't imagine how so many people read this book

The plot of the story is interesting when you read it. The story cycle gradually becomes logically clear.

Not much to say, just two words ~ beautiful! I hope the author will not let me run out of food! ! !

You are really good at hiding. Even if you are invincible in the world, you are still hiding. No bastard in the world can hide you even after a thousand years.

A book that makes people read is a good book

There aren't many books written by Tomato that are so good, so why doesn't it get a score of six?

It looks good, but the update is not as slow as usual. Bad review [Thoughts]

The plot is okay, and some coding behavior is acceptable.

Good. You can read it in one go.

This book is really good. The more I read, the more interesting it becomes.

The plot is compact, the writing is not watery, and there are no silly scenes. It's worth watching.

Good looking. Like to watch and recomend.