He Was Arrested by the Sanwu Heroine and Then Went Home with Her

The character design of the heroine is super good (the os three pink-haired loli yandere is really hard to resist [love]) There are still settings in the main line and it looks good, but the update is a bit slow [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Can the heroine of a western fantasy theme have a good worldview and good writing skills? I've already read Eggplant and I don't insist on it. The only big problem at the moment is that the author is slow and infrequent [smile] When will I update twice a day and give five stars?

I will basically give it five stars. Let me explain first. I think this book may collapse in the future direction (a bit boring, maybe, too little sugar. There is no sticky feeling) If the heroine is more clingy and the writing is better, it would be better if the subsequent plot is a bit suppressed and the love is suppressed. I feel that many times, the male and female protagonists are not pushing the flames, but the plot seems to be driven by something, just like the fate of this book, push. Two additional points First, the heroine is not a three-no in the traditional sense, but a kind of dependence, a little yandere (in the early stage, it was almost a three-no, but the writing was too little and not deep enough) Second, I have finished reading it. It took me more than two days to read all the content. I should have the right to speak, right?

The heroine has a good character, the male protagonist is also good, and the world view is good. All in all, this book is very interesting. I hope the author will not finish the book badly and don't abandon the book halfway, otherwise I will collapse. So I will give you a five-star review to encourage and encourage the author. If you see it, please reply! !

It's not long since I've been watching it, and I'm about to go to bed, so I'll leave a review. It can be seen that the author has put great effort into the plot. At least 1/3 of the outline is already there. There is no problem with the logic of the story as a whole. The story overall is very smooth. 1. Have a set background. 2. There are basically no conventional poison points. 3. It can be seen that a lot of thought was put into the character setting. 4. There should be more hand-typing parts, at least I don't see any trace of using AI. At most, AI is used to check for typos. What follows are a few shortcomings 1. A bit too bland. It may be due to my weak writing skills. Although it is not boring to read, it is a bit dull. 2. The fighting scenes are relatively average. But considering that the drama here is well written, it can be said to be rare. It's not a big shortcoming either. Above()

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The first five chapters are a bit confusing. To be honest, you can only know that the protagonist has traveled through time and it is a fantasy world, but some of the more basic settings are not integrated. But meeting is fate. I give it four stars and we will see the changes later. The second review can only give it three and a half stars. The emotional description is not very delicate and the writing feels a bit deliberate. I think it's just average.

The author's writing was great, but it was a pity that he was locked up in a stable by Tetsuo's ruthless iron hand and was whipped to death from behind. He was resurrected and came out of Mario's green pipe, and was knocked to the head by Ak after jumping with a gun.

Five stars for the heroine, she is so to my liking. They say horrible things without expression and squeeze you out, but they can still act coquettishly afterwards [laughter] [laughter] They are also very controlling, but I feel like they haven't shown any dangerous control so far [laughter], so it's nice to watch [laugh]

I stayed up until past one o'clock in the morning to read all the updated chapters of this novel. The plots are interlocking and the characters are particularly vivid. It was so to my liking that I couldn't help but leave a message in the author's comment area immediately to urge updates. I look forward to seeing the subsequent plot development as soon as possible.

Not bad, it's very sweet after we get together, the content is rich, it's pretty good, come on ^ω^

I really like this element setting. It's a single heroine in a Western fantasy about love and battle. The character of the heroine is also quite good. The world view setting and plot writing are also good.

New author? The writing still needs polishing, so give me four stars to encourage you.

Good health, love health, good health, the author hurry up and give me the code👿👿👿

I think it's pretty cool. Why are there so few people? [Think]

It's very well written, why are so few people commenting?

The only drawback is that there is too little sugar, but I still encourage it.

If it looks good, please support it.

It looks good. Please support the author with five-star praise and update soon!

So far it's pretty good, with a gentle rhythm and some minor flaws, but overall it's at the mid-to-upper level. Let's see how it goes in the future.

Okay, I want to see the follow-up

The plot has ups and downs and is very interesting.

It's my type

Give a rating, author, please give it a try

[Laughing] Don't become too strong, male lead

I want to watch the battle and enjoy it [staring]

Sanwu loli is correct

I like this emotional line

It feels okay, come on

It's not poisonous. It's the highest rating.