(Western Fantasy + Bianbai + Systemless + Adventure + Combat + Farming)
For some reason, I traveled to a different world of swords and magic.
When she opened her eyes, she found that she had transformed into the extremely powerful female knight Rianna.
Not only that, but he also inherited a knighthood ready to go.
Of course, he was not used to this body and his sudden identity at first, but he still set out on the goblin journey under the king's instructions.
And by mistake, he got involved in the devil's conspiracy...
Wait?
What does it mean that the devil is a beautiful girl? !
Ps: The heroine is relatively tall and has very strong combat power but cannot be said to be invincible. She should be considered half of Feng Aotian (Wu)
Reader comments
After briefly reading Chapter 5, I probably have a preliminary conclusion.
It can be seen that the author should be a newcomer, most likely this is the first book, and this is indeed the case when looking at the author's profile.
In just a few chapters, it can be seen that this book has made a mistake that many novice authors make - it loves to talk about the setting, from the previous kings, the history of the Knights, the main characters of the Knights to the introduction of the mines, the structure of the Knights, the general currency, the division of power in the world view, etc. Stuffed to the brim
Novice writers are always too eager to let readers understand their worldview, but this often backfires. There is a saying in the literary world: "Third-rate authors focus on setting, second-rate authors focus on plot, and first-rate authors focus on emotion."
Of course, we don't need to be so harsh in an online novel, but for an online novel, the three golden chapters at the beginning are important chapters that leave readers behind. Blindly filling in a lot of worldview settings will only make readers feel boring and bland.
When viewed as a novel, this book cannot be called excellent, and when viewed as an online article, it is a bit bland. But from the perspective of a novice writer's first work, this book is passable. There is no serious literary youth. The simple main plot is presented at the beginning, and there is no trace of AI. The fighting is also well written. Overall - not bad.
If this book is just for fun written by the author in his spare time, then you don't need to pay attention to this comment and just feel free to do it. However, with so many settings thrown out at the beginning of the book, it should be a worldview that the author has carefully conceived.
As for a more detailed evaluation... I will taste it later.
Well written, the world view gradually unfolds, quite interesting
The foot description in Chapter 36 was well received [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]
After briefly reading Chapter 5, I probably have a preliminary conclusion. It can be seen that the author should be a newcomer, most likely this is the first book, and this is indeed the case when looking at the author's profile. In just a few chapters, it can be seen that this book has made a mistake that many novice authors make - it loves to talk about the setting, from the previous kings, the history of the Knights, the main characters of the Knights to the introduction of the mines, the structure of the Knights, the general currency, the division of power in the world view, etc. Stuffed to the brim Novice writers are always too eager to let readers understand their worldview, but this often backfires. There is a saying in the literary world: "Third-rate authors focus on setting, second-rate authors focus on plot, and first-rate authors focus on emotion." Of course, we don't need to be so harsh in an online novel, but for an online novel, the three golden chapters at the beginning are important chapters that leave readers behind. Blindly filling in a lot of worldview settings will only make readers feel boring and bland. When viewed as a novel, this book cannot be called excellent, and when viewed as an online article, it is a bit bland. But from the perspective of a novice writer's first work, this book is passable. There is no serious literary youth. The simple main plot is presented at the beginning, and there is no trace of AI. The fighting is also well written. Overall - not bad. If this book is just for fun written by the author in his spare time, then you don't need to pay attention to this comment and just feel free to do it. However, with so many settings thrown out at the beginning of the book, it should be a worldview that the author has carefully conceived. As for a more detailed evaluation... I will taste it later.
Well written, the world view gradually unfolds, quite interesting
The foot description in Chapter 36 was well received [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]