[The new book has just been released, please check it out, the rating will increase soon] [Purely hand-made, no AI at all]
[Goddess] [Harem] [Tower Defense] [Survival] [Development] [Unlimited Upgrades] [National Travel]
Everyone travels to a nightmare game, starting in a dormitory, and all equipment depends on picking up.
However, Xu Li obtained a catalog of goddesses. As long as he collects the goddesses, he can obtain their characteristics.
She has the qualities of a rich girl and will never be short of money.
With the qualities of a Valkyrie, she will be invincible from now on
While others are still gathering wood and building the initial gate.
Xu Li has already relied on the goddesses to build a black hole door with the properties of never being damaged and devouring.
When other players are still struggling to build forts to defend against monsters
Xu Li has already built a cosmic super invincible Star Destroyer Cannon with an instant kill mechanism, damage sharing, and a critical hit multiplier of 10,000.
While other players are still working hard to build their own small dormitories
Xu Li's dormitory looks like an ordinary dormitory from the outside, but inside it is a golden house that connects multiple worlds.
Reader comments
Everyone in the world says that Emperor Huangtian is very miserable, but I am not as miserable as I am. I was born in the age of the end of Dharma and grew up in the fields. Not only can I not practice, but I have to work to earn money. My lifespan may not be more than a hundred years. I have been busy for half my life and I still have no partner. I was born in a farming family. When I landed, there were no visions in the sky. I was ordinary in appearance and not smart. Only when he has fallen asleep can he support his family. After a few years of school, he stopped at college. He gave up his pen and joined the army without any great achievements. When he was young, he had ambitions of becoming a great man. He could move bricks in high-rise buildings and set up stalls in the streets. He wandered in foreign lands for several years. He met good people like this and met evil people like tigers. He tasted the sufferings of the world and savored all kinds of tastes. He is now single, with all his wealth gone. Although his life is thinner than paper, his heart hates the sky.
You must stick to tower defense, but don't try to sell yourself on the sheep's head. Don't engage in personal combat power.
Sure enough, this kind of novel is written with the goal of individual transcendence.
Real review⭐
①About the label of "purely hand-rubbed" and the actual writing style
There are obvious traces of AI assistance in reading the beginning (such as a large number of redundant psychological descriptions and fixed sentence loops), which is different from the "purely hand-made" look and feel promised by the label.
(1) There are more psychological descriptions than the main plot - the inner drama of the protagonist or supporting characters, "thinking about", "thinking about", "thinking about", etc.
(2) The first villain at the beginning, Zhao Bo, receives a box lunch in Chapter 21, and a new plot appears in Chapter 30.
② A simple male who pretends to be dead when something happens, and his mental activity can circle the earth three times. Chapter 18: The famous scene of "Thousands of People" - On the surface, it is calm and calm, but in the heart, the essay is full of 8,000 words, but in action, it is like a coward.
The villain used the banner to engage in moral kidnapping, and the protagonist was passively beaten throughout the whole process, not even daring to say a harsh word. The villain took a look: Hey, this is such a soft persimmon! So he stepped on his nose and face, and came up to block the door. It wasn't until he stepped on the girl that he finally stood up.
③The AI writing style is not scary, but the scary thing is that it uses false labels to fool readers; the mediocre character is not scary, but the scary thing is that after so many chapters, the protagonist is still only "a racing horse in his heart, but a calm mouth". If you really want to rub it by hand, please show some temper and rhythm that a real person should have.
It has been updated with the same level, and it feels better than other ghost dormitory games. The protagonist does not show off, is not a dragon king, does what he needs to do, knows his strengths and weaknesses (the first round of the game is in the dormitory, and never goes out). There is no big poisonous point, and the story is semi-invincible. There is no too hot fighting. Basically, he kills instantly when he comes, but he does not burn for the sake of burning, and deliberately creating danger is good, although There is a favorability level, but the male protagonist is hard when he should be hard, and warm when he should be warm. Unlike other stories that have a favorability level and just write about it, it becomes a dog-licking article. I haven't seen any settings for the time being. The setting can add a goddess illustration to see if you are fertile or not in the game. Otherwise, if the male protagonist does not get pregnant seven or eight times a day, it would be outrageous [laughing and crying]
You can still take a look
It can be regarded as one of the better ones in the same genre, but the protagonist is a bit bold in the later stage. He does not hide it, but directly reveals his strength when he has it.
It looks okay from the front. For the tower defense setting, you don't want to have a normal dormitory. Just make the corridor wider and wider.
Not bad, it's rated, it should be low score protection
It feels good to my senses. The male protagonist is not a virgin and does not lick dogs. It's ok. Friends who are interested can give it a try.
Just like to see this
Suddenly I can't chase anymore
It looks good, please give me a good review first [laughing evilly]
Can! Lots of female writing! You can take a look!
You can read it when you are bored
I've read one hundred chapters, it's pretty good, but the number of tenants is overtaken by the author.
It's very beautiful, come and see it (I'm not going to lie [rolls eyes])
Everyone in the world says that Emperor Huangtian is very miserable, but I am not as miserable as I am. I was born in the age of the end of Dharma and grew up in the fields. Not only can I not practice, but I have to work to earn money. My lifespan may not be more than a hundred years. I have been busy for half my life and I still have no partner. I was born in a farming family. When I landed, there were no visions in the sky. I was ordinary in appearance and not smart. Only when he has fallen asleep can he support his family. After a few years of school, he stopped at college. He gave up his pen and joined the army without any great achievements. When he was young, he had ambitions of becoming a great man. He could move bricks in high-rise buildings and set up stalls in the streets. He wandered in foreign lands for several years. He met good people like this and met evil people like tigers. He tasted the sufferings of the world and savored all kinds of tastes. He is now single, with all his wealth gone. Although his life is thinner than paper, his heart hates the sky.
You must stick to tower defense, but don't try to sell yourself on the sheep's head. Don't engage in personal combat power. Sure enough, this kind of novel is written with the goal of individual transcendence.
Real review⭐ ①About the label of "purely hand-rubbed" and the actual writing style There are obvious traces of AI assistance in reading the beginning (such as a large number of redundant psychological descriptions and fixed sentence loops), which is different from the "purely hand-made" look and feel promised by the label. (1) There are more psychological descriptions than the main plot - the inner drama of the protagonist or supporting characters, "thinking about", "thinking about", "thinking about", etc. (2) The first villain at the beginning, Zhao Bo, receives a box lunch in Chapter 21, and a new plot appears in Chapter 30. ② A simple male who pretends to be dead when something happens, and his mental activity can circle the earth three times. Chapter 18: The famous scene of "Thousands of People" - On the surface, it is calm and calm, but in the heart, the essay is full of 8,000 words, but in action, it is like a coward. The villain used the banner to engage in moral kidnapping, and the protagonist was passively beaten throughout the whole process, not even daring to say a harsh word. The villain took a look: Hey, this is such a soft persimmon! So he stepped on his nose and face, and came up to block the door. It wasn't until he stepped on the girl that he finally stood up. ③The AI writing style is not scary, but the scary thing is that it uses false labels to fool readers; the mediocre character is not scary, but the scary thing is that after so many chapters, the protagonist is still only "a racing horse in his heart, but a calm mouth". If you really want to rub it by hand, please show some temper and rhythm that a real person should have.
It has been updated with the same level, and it feels better than other ghost dormitory games. The protagonist does not show off, is not a dragon king, does what he needs to do, knows his strengths and weaknesses (the first round of the game is in the dormitory, and never goes out). There is no big poisonous point, and the story is semi-invincible. There is no too hot fighting. Basically, he kills instantly when he comes, but he does not burn for the sake of burning, and deliberately creating danger is good, although There is a favorability level, but the male protagonist is hard when he should be hard, and warm when he should be warm. Unlike other stories that have a favorability level and just write about it, it becomes a dog-licking article. I haven't seen any settings for the time being. The setting can add a goddess illustration to see if you are fertile or not in the game. Otherwise, if the male protagonist does not get pregnant seven or eight times a day, it would be outrageous [laughing and crying]
You can still take a look
It can be regarded as one of the better ones in the same genre, but the protagonist is a bit bold in the later stage. He does not hide it, but directly reveals his strength when he has it.
It looks okay from the front. For the tower defense setting, you don't want to have a normal dormitory. Just make the corridor wider and wider.
Not bad, it's rated, it should be low score protection
It feels good to my senses. The male protagonist is not a virgin and does not lick dogs. It's ok. Friends who are interested can give it a try.
Just like to see this Suddenly I can't chase anymore
It looks good, please give me a good review first [laughing evilly]
Can! Lots of female writing! You can take a look!
You can read it when you are bored
I've read one hundred chapters, it's pretty good, but the number of tenants is overtaken by the author.
It's very beautiful, come and see it (I'm not going to lie [rolls eyes])