Something Is Wrong with My Huang Ting Jing

The story is excellent and the pace is quite comfortable. The author really wants to write a good story, with vivid characters, Sister Shuanzi's stubbornness, the Su sisters' intelligence, Miss Gu's arrogance, Shan Nu's jade feet (ahem, cross out this sentence)... I hope these good girls will not let them down [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart] The writing style is not much to say, but a few strokes can portray the artistic conception into my mind. In the past, I was used to reading many online articles quickly and opening and closing at large. This book is different. It allows you to slow down, read little by little, and understand the emotions, anger, sorrow, and joy of the characters, and the complexity and diversity of human nature... I hope all book friends will recommend the author. Now that the book has achieved results, we can continue to follow the story, a win-win situation (￣▽￣)[Laughing][Laughing]

It is natural and smooth, the writing is powerful, and the emotions are as gushing as the internal force. It is really a rare masterpiece this year, far comparable to the works of Jin Dynasty and ancient times, and close to "Kunlun" and "Canghai" [Like] [Like] [Like]

I haven't seen such a good-looking novel in a long, long time. The writing is good, I didn't get bored while reading it, the language is smooth and the expressions are concise and clear. The story is good and the characters are unique. Good article, but it suddenly disappeared, which is annoying!

It can be seen that the author writes very carefully and makes people read slowly. The writing is very good, the characters have distinct personalities and are full of flesh and blood. You can see that "the shadow is almost there", and there is a feeling that the story is beginning to unfold. If you can see this, you may feel the sentiment of "never give up, never give up"; or you may want to see the result of hard work from the bottom; or... There are many, but in short, you must have patience and be able to see through. The problem is coming, and the soul has passed through it, so the rhythm of the refreshing article is more suitable. What soul travel gives is the key and possibility of class crossing. Use past experience, experience, and insights to speed up the speed of unlocking the key, and increase the sense of satisfaction that you have never had before, cross class, enjoy grudges, and kill decisively. The little girl "Shuanzi" is written very personally, and her emotions change gradually. A bright spot for now. However, the character of the male protagonist is affectionate and thoughtful, but I don't know how to deal with it in a woman's eyes. The grinding and chirping has the meaning of losing one's soul, while the frivolous treatment loses the character of the male protagonist, and the procrastination makes it uncomfortable for readers to read. The attitude towards women is a very important part of this book. If it is not clear, reduce the number of words. If it is written clearly, it will stir your soul. All kinds of flowers pass by, but the fragrance of flowers may not be obvious. Careful. Not much to say, it is a good book with strong plasticity. I hope the author can keep writing it.

I have read the book for many years. 1St comment. The story is wonderful and the characters are very distinct. The pace is not so draggy. The writing style is a bit literate, but that doesn't stop it from being a good story. The character traits are also well described. Absolutely true review.

1. Zhenbeiguan is very interesting. I can give five stars to this volume alone. The plot is not procrastinating and the characters have distinct personalities. It looks more like a group portrait. It is excellent. 2. There are too many transitional chapters, and they are very bland. I can understand that it may be that completing a volume gives readers a cooling time, but there are not many Zhenbeiguan chapters. There is no need to complete so many transitional chapters. The main plot is pushed a bit slowly, and the writer has too many follow-up arrangements. But overall it looks great, and I like the style very much, but I don't like the transitional chapters. There are too many, and there's nothing wrong with the writing. I'm wondering if this might be the reason why the score isn't high even though it looks great? I looked through the comment section and didn't see a single negative review, so why is the rating not high? I think that's the reason. The writing is very good, but the plot rhythm may be a bit off. After Zhenbeiguan, three female protagonists were introduced directly, and the protagonist's strength did not make any progress. Now it seems that except for the transitional chapters, they are all excellent. Every character's behavior has a reason. There are no unnecessary actions or language. It can be five stars.

The writing is good, the text is very interesting to read, and the rhythm of the plot is also well controlled. Every character who appears is also very memorable and has a clear image. I recommend giving it a read. The author nb must finish it.

The writing style of this book is really good. Now that I have read the updated chapters, the overall quality is good. It has a style similar to Gu Long. However, I personally feel that there are two poisonous points in it, one large and one small. The small one is the plot of the city wall collapse. Although I know it is to advance the plot, it feels too deliberate. Yes, I feel that the purpose of this part is too strong, just to win people's hearts and advance the skills. Secondly, as soon as the first female protagonist left, three ambiguous female characters suddenly appeared. The sense of the protagonist was suddenly lowered. They were all ambiguous, and the protagonist suddenly felt like a bit of a scumbag. However, it is indeed difficult to write articles with multiple female protagonists, and emotional scenes are particularly easy to break down. However, the part about the first female protagonist in this book is quite good. Overall, it's pretty good. I look forward to the author's next book being better.

Very good, I can't describe it well. Many times when I read other novels describing the ancient imperial court, I feel it is quite childish. Although this book feels that the development is too slow, the description is really good, but when should I eat it?

The writing style is very simple and delicate, natural and smooth, the foreshadowing is like a gray line, not abrupt, not pretending to be mysterious, the plot is real and delicate, the characters are full of flesh and blood, the literary skills are comparable to those of the older generation of writers, and the book is strong. After reading Chapter 33, through the simple and unpretentious writing style and through the words and deeds of each vivid character in the article, I feel that I can resonate with the author's three views. Like [like] But why did you suddenly change your style later? Did you hire someone to ghostwrite it? From the 30th chapter onwards, the writing became too feminine. It changed from a deep, heavy, and sweeping historical and social novel to a romantic drama about me and me, immersed in love, love and little thoughts all day long.

It's not easy to see a novel like this on Tomato. The plot unfolds smoothly and the story unfolds slowly. Each character has his own personality and a story he doesn't want to tell. In the novel, we see vivid people and human nature, without too much exaggeration or exaggeration. At least it's not a narrative like a running account! ! !

A unique style, a unique artistic conception, and the characters gradually become more fleshed out as the storyline develops. It is the first time I comment here because it is the first time I have seen a good book here.

The author's writing style is not bad, the protagonist's character can be summed up in one word as "human", and the characters in it are all vividly written. The title says there are many heroines, and I get along with a lot of women, but none of them eat. The author of ancient martial arts novels with good writing skills like this makes the knife hurt when writing. Personal evaluation is 8.7 Points, five stars. Please support it. If there are any questions later, I will follow up.

The writing is very thick, with a desolate and lingering sadness, and the courage to think for the world. Although the concept is rather abrupt, and the character description is a bit exaggerated, it really portrays a person. It can be seen that the author has put his heart into it and has his own style. In this fast-paced era, it is very rare for a person to break away from low-level desires and no longer emphasize publishing books blindly, but to polish his style carefully. I hope the author will not amplify this rhythm flaw due to time and update issues, and calm down to describe this book as a good one. Recording my feelings in the second volume, compared with the sadness of the war background in the first volume, the emotions in the second volume are more delicate and focus more on the love between children. However, this kind of emotion is not about the love of the sea or the death of the eternal alliance. It lies in the willingness, in the rational consideration for others, in the little touches of tenderness. When the warmth comes, it is natural for both parties.

I read twenty chapters carefully. I won't talk about what happens next. This book is worth reading. It is solid and worth looking forward to. The content is not exaggerated and it develops steadily step by step. I'm looking forward to how the protagonist becomes stronger step by step. I hope the author's writing won't collapse in the future. Come on! Good reviews

Little by little, eloquently told, flesh-and-blood characters are piled up, forming stories one after another, like the flow of a river or the breeze blowing on your face, you will naturally enter into a trance. A rare good book, I love it so much

The writing is very good, but it looks a bit depressing. This book is not like ordinary novels, with a lot of dialogue between characters and descriptions of scenery. It is more like a person slowly narrating, talking about the people and things of these years, and the good and bad of these years. You can't read this book too fast, you have to read it slowly, and you can see things that cannot be seen in books. It is a good book, not just an electronic novel, this book is close to literature.

Very realistic border, blood without tears, brotherhood, homage, thousands of troops dancing with swords, the picture is very strong! ! ! !

Yes, it is the characters that drive the plot, not the plot that drives the characters, and the characters are very three-dimensional. After reading it, I realized that there are multiple female protagonists. I hope the author will pay attention. If there are too many female characters, it will be very confusing. No matter how three-dimensional the description is, it will be tiring. It is recommended not to have too many female characters, two to three will be enough. When a character suddenly joins in for no apparent reason, it feels like a deus ex machina. Even if you add the process and reasons immediately, it will reduce the impression. You can try to use some rumors or gossip to focus on the description, and try not to mention the name of the character when he appears. If he officially debuts, just describe it positively.

The writing of this book is smooth, and the story has ups and downs. It has the spirit of the martial arts of the old generation. It talks about essence, spirit, and spirit. The Tao is to let nature take its course and things will come naturally. The word "righteousness" is hidden in the text. It is a good book. Stay tuned! !

It's very good to read, much better than most of the novels on the list which are just the same novels. The characters are well described and each has his or her own personality. It can be seen that the author is very careful. The most popular novel is Tomato.

The writing style is very sophisticated, the characters are outstanding, and the story is also good. It is on the level of a beacon-fire drama about princes, and it received five-star reviews. Has this 6.7 Rating been hacked? I think even if there is not a 9.5, There is still a score of 9.

I have never reviewed books, but this book really fascinated me. It has that cologne style, and the production is confusing. There is also Wen Ruian's characterization of details. The depiction of every detail is particularly picturesque. It's very capable of allowing you to introduce an environment. A fantasy. Highly recommended to watch. When you listen carefully, you can also calm your mind.

Yes, it's very interesting. There are no poisonous points at present, but the refreshing points are not obvious, so the rating is not high. Old bookworms who are in a book shortage can read it.

The writing is very good, the plot logic is flawless, and the personalities of each character are described very realistically.

This book is very good! There are no ups and downs of the plot, just like a narrative, it is told slowly, which is in line with the development rules of things in ancient times. The characters described are vivid, and the inner activities are used to promote the growth of the characters and the advancement of relationships. The writing is very good, simple and just right. It should be a masterpiece if you keep it up. If discovered by a big director, it may be made into a TV series. Come on⛽

Ya, hahaha, it's so good. I finished reading it in one day. It's too little and it's not enough. When I have money, I must support the author [Sending my heart]

I have read novels for more than 20 years, and this one on Tomato is definitely one of the best! I have read more than 30 chapters, and I don't know what will happen in the future, but the author's writing is very skillful, and each character is very vivid and distinctive. The ups and downs of the story are not big, but the sense of narrative is very strong, which makes people keep reading patiently! I randomly found a book last night and didn't go to bed until almost three o'clock. Don't read if you like invincible cool articles!

The writing is concise and powerful, and every sentence can be implemented to the point. It is definitely a serious work that has been put into writing.

The first part is quite well written, and the combination of borderland, brothers, martial arts, etc. Is fascinating. The second part seems to be okay so far, a bit confusing... Well, I'm looking forward to it