When I Was Sixteen, I Sold Myself

This book is well written, and the writing style is also very good, but the protagonist is a bit too miserable. He was forged and taught all kinds of dregs. It is worse than a slave. He might as well be reincarnated. It feels like the protagonist has been brainwashed and trained to become a perfect domestic slave and heart slave, but it just matches my xp. Hehe, it's pretty good.

The writing is very good, but I felt depressed when I read it. Jiang Ning's status is too low, and he feels domesticated, and there is a bit of Stockholm syndrome. I feel very uncomfortable after reading it. Can it be done in the later stage? It is best to disappear in a normal way, and then the main god is also normal, as if he still exists, just to make him regret it! ! ! ! Can you add another timeline where Jiang Ning chats with other followers and discovers that gods can read minds, and then has Jiang Ning close his heart and gradually turn it into an object? Anyway, I just want to be! ! ! Just to make him regret treating her like this! ! ! ! !

Very well written. At least the protagonist has no regrets. But I feel like I'm not suitable for reading this kind of article. Maybe I prefer the stronger line. Could it be that the line that broke down the family but was stronger was Mu Qiang? At least becoming someone else's subordinate and an object is not in line with what people are now thinking about and what is accepted by the public. Just thinking about it makes me uncomfortable. Maybe this should be regarded as a kind of belief. In fact, I have always wanted to see the protagonist killing everyone. It would be great if there was a side story. ૮꒰ྀི > . < ꒱ྀིა Recommended BGM: Tengu, author Taiyi. The soul is burned, but it only produces hundreds or thousands of years of loneliness!

Personally, I think it's very interesting. It's light and calm when I read it, but I feel a little depressed after reading it. When I read other book reviews, they are not depressing. I just feel a little stuck in my heart. Why? Maybe it was because he watched Jiang Ning learn various things after being burned, making mistakes, being punished, learning again, making mistakes again, being punished again, and then being touched by the master and being allowed to cry by the master. He slowly changed from just learning to learning for the master, a change in mentality. The person has not changed, but the heart has changed, a bit like Stockholm Syndrome. But it is always good, at least in the subjective consciousness of the protagonist, he has no regrets. He exchanged his own life for the lives of his family members, and his family members all lived safely until the end of their lives, but their family members no longer remember him (*꒦ິ⌓꒦ີ). However, his sister became a god because of her meritorious deeds after saving many people. After obtaining the corresponding godhead, she found that her destiny had been tampered with. She found out that she had an older brother, and the brother and sister recognized each other ✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧. In short, this article is very good, five-star support (★≧▽^))★☆

It's good-looking. I really see the changes in Jiang Ning very clearly. After reading the extras interspersed in it, I also wonder what the timeline (?) Would have been like if Jiang Ning had not been picked up by the Lord. Would he be more wanton and free? But it seems that the current timeline is not bad. Jiang Ning's family is all well, he will not have so much pain, and he has found his own way of life, which is pretty good. In fact, it is a bit depressing to watch, maybe because I am not used to the rules in the text. After reading it for a long time, I need to read other texts to adjust it, but overall, it is still quite good-looking.

The life of the little girl was so beautiful that it looked like a menstrual period for a man and a neurosis for a woman, the nemesis of depression and the alarm clock of a vegetative state. She was so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village missed and loved the widow. She was so handsome that tears flowed from the corners of her mouth and flooded the Qiantang River. , So handsome, so beautiful, so beautiful, God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life, makes my world meaningful, I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which makes me realize that God does exist, I am so beautiful that I can't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water. There were all trials at the end, so I didn't have the desire to continue reading. I originally came here for the training/teaching/admonishment part, but now I'm gone.

Oh my god, the main character is as cute as a personal computer, it really hit me, this article hehehe Oh my god, the more I look at it, the more I like it.

What the teacher wrote is great! [Admiration] I think from the owner's perspective, not letting Ning Ning take another path is because it will be more painful, and secondly, it is to avoid hidden dangers (just a personal understanding), and after reading this book, I feel like my heart has calmed down. It is the kind of tranquility that is natural. Come on, teacher, don't stop updating.

It was boring to read, and I felt that Jiang Ning was so miserable. Why does he feel that after calcining and training, his thoughts are not his own? It really is Stockholm syndrome, and then he has no status, he just feels like a tool, and he brainwashed himself. He suffered so much after being trained, and he still kneels when he becomes a subordinate god. Can the author write a little more equal atmosphere later? At least Jiang Ning does not have to be so humble and kneel all the time. He has been kneeling for three or four hundred years. He died miserably. Then Order also feels cold and unfeeling. Hey, I can't get Order to love Jiang Ning anyway. It's more of a tool to make Jiang Ning suitable for me and then I like it. I feel that I don't love Jiang Ning before the Calcination, but I like the obedience and solemnity of Jiang Ning after the Calcination. Hey, I can't express it because it feels like it's not love in the traditional sense. No wonder the introduction has quasi-objects. Is that what it means? Jiang Ning is so miserable. Can the author write some scenes where Order is good to Jiang Ning? Although I also know that Order teaches Jiang Ning magic to make him stronger, it is a kind of love. I mean, can he write about the love between young lovers, like the way the Lord of Emotions occasionally gives gifts, and then talks sweetly about love? Although I feel that Order does not match this kind of character, I still want to watch it. I feel that Order's heart is not warm, maybe the character is like this, so I also want to know more about Order's experience, and I want to know about Order's experience before he went to the divine world. I really want to see another world line, where Jiang Ning kills the gods and becomes a god, and then Order and Jiang Ning are attracted to each other. Jiang Ning is willing to surrender to the subject of Order, instead of being forced to surrender after a deal and then brainwashing himself. I feel that I am willing to surrender to this kind of thing. I think it's love rather than brainwashing. When I read the article, I felt that Jiang Ning is very good at brainwashing himself. I was substituted, so I felt so uncomfortable. So I really want to know what Jiang Ning's real thoughts are after Jiang Ning kills him and becomes a god. Will he still willingly surrender to the order? Although the writing is very good, I also like this kind of xp very much, but Jiang Ning is really miserable, miserable, miserable, I feel so uncomfortable when I read it, but it's so good to watch. And what is the name of Order? It seems that his name is not mentioned in the article. I beg the author to write more sweet side stories.

It's very interesting, and the genre is also very novel. I always feel depressed after reading it, and I feel so confused, but I really want to know what's behind it, so I keep reading. Please keep reading, author. I always have a feeling that this book will become popular.

When we first get along, it mainly depicts Jiang Ning's perspective. As he changes himself under day-to-day training, the protagonist is a mysterious background full of majesty. It looks like a model drama, more boring than drinking plain water, and makes people very puzzled. Later, I learned more things, learned spells, and found out that the two protagonists were destined to be married, and Jiang Ning also gradually changed. The logic of this book is also smooth from beginning to end. There is nothing wrong with the author's writing, and I can give a good evaluation. But that's it. The most criticized thing is the harsh but mysterious background of the master. What he thinks and what the purpose of doing things is, Jiang Ning realized by himself when he grew up. But right at the beginning of the story, he can say. I think it was for nothing that Jiang Ning was frightened for many years, although now the two of them feel harmonious with each other and have a certain "sweet" feeling. But the existence of Jiang Ning's stress state also casts a shadow over the sweet feelings. But I fully understand that this is the work of the author's xp, and the author's xp is output like running water! There is no way to give it five stars, so I'll give it four stars. Good work, author.

If it is for readers who like materialization flow, it should be very good. However, it may still need some more perspective-changing descriptions of Gong's response, rather than a completely self-brainwashed sense of perspective. The author's writing is very good, so the feeling of being brainwashed makes me a little suffocated. Seeing the treasured friends gradually disappearing, the description of the kitten that has cut off all ties and completely turned into Gong is really hard to hold on to. I still feel a bit regretful that I cannot finish it. A bookworm of more than ten years praised the writing.

The book is quite good, and the writing style is good, but to be honest, after reading it for a long time, I still feel that the protagonist has a bit of Stockholm Syndrome. Some people may feel bored after reading it. Be careful to avoid lightning, and hope that the protagonist will not be so humble later on.

To be honest, I have no idea about the name of this novel. I just ran out of books to read. I happened to see this one and clicked in. This must be fate. The teacher's writing is light, like a stream, flowing slowly. Ning Zai's character fits my xp very well. The first few dozen chapters of the novel made me feel tight in my chest, a little teary, and sour in my eyes. It got better later on, but I couldn't help but wonder whether Ning Zai's change of mind later was because he or his soul had been burned. The choice made by the breeder of Ning Zai is also quite complicated. There are two choices. If he chooses the original destiny, Ning Zai will have no family. If he chooses to change his destiny, Ning Zai's strength will not be as good as his original destiny line. Ning Zai will definitely choose the 2nd one. I may prefer the 1st one. I hope that all the cubs in my family will be free and have enough strength to protect themselves, rather than being attached to one person and being a canary. Love is a very complicated thing. It is normal to stop loving someone if you say you don't love them. I am a fan of the protagonist's mother (although some of the novels I read have protagonists who are older than me). The rating of this book is a bit low. Tomatoes are too bad not to rate it (cross it out). It only has 90 ratings. It is much better than the new books I have seen. Teacher, please work hard! I made some mistakes in what I said above. I only read Chapter 40 or 50 when I was writing the review. I would like to quote emotions here, you have no heart for order! ! ! Give me back a happy Ning cub, what a mess you have made of the cat! ⑉꒦ິ^꒦ິ⑉꧞, I want to cry. This is my second review, Meow. Your order is okay, but it's just okay! Damn it, I still feel sorry for my cat Ning. Sister Emotion (? This should be a girl, right) is good to Ning Zai and Emotion is good, but Order is harsh to Ning Zai and the order is bad!

It's a bit like being depressed and crazy in high school. I learned some things that didn't matter in the early stage in order to serve my master. It's like I learned some things in high school that I can't use except for exams. After I finish, I don't have to think about anything but studying. I don't have to choose and there is no way out, because I don't have the courage and opportunity to choose. In fact, many inappropriate places are subject to the attitude of selective ignorance and default acceptance. The subject matter is very novel, and the writing style is daily and light. It's good to read occasionally.

Oh My God! It's too good for my taste! I really, really like this tune! ! What you wrote is so good! I came from the first place on the recommendation list (I was attracted by the name) and saw that it was still serialized. I took a look at the introduction (I really like it) and thought about keeping it (≦(._.)≧Private Horse Racing). But (here comes the twist), when I was reading another novel, this one was all in my mind (I really wanted to read it), and other novels no longer aroused my desire to read it! ! No matter! Serialization is serialization😡I have fallen into this trap! ! The whole book is light, very calm, and there are not many common conflicts. When I read it, my whole heart calmed down and sank in, as if I was following Jiang Ning in the early stage to learn to walk and sit again... One day passed and another day came (whatever you promised, you will always do it, without regrets). In the later stage, Jiang Ning gradually had different emotions. He would act coquettishly (muddleheadedly), blush, and feel comfortable watching the interaction between the two of them (although it was not enthusiastic, it was unique to the two of them). Later, my sister appeared and she remembered everything. Looking at them makes my heart warm. How come it was all over in just a blink of an eye? Looking forward to the next story! Good looking, like it

Lightly describe the strong emotions, like the sea, calm on the surface, turbulent on the inside, sour, dependent, and satisfying. Just like what the article says, I never regret my choice. I only hope that you will be with me, and I will be in your hands. The dull pain of growing up brews the wine of the years. But I want to stand by your side even more

Yes, yes, it compares to my XP. I have a lot of XP, so whenever I meet something I can accept and like to eat, I must give it a big thumbs up! It's just that the author repeated a lot of descriptions when he was writing. It's a bit tiring to read. Come on, author. I really like the plot setting of this book. There are no crazy supporting characters, no forced misunderstandings and procrastination. The two main plots advance cleanly and smoothly, and the overall story direction is very satisfying. It can be clearly seen that the author has carefully written the XP article, and the character orientation is very clear. This is particularly rare, and the sincerity of creation can be seen. But the shortcomings of the writing style are obvious. The psychological description is repeated a lot, and the same emotion is piled up again and again; the sentence pattern of "it's not... It's..." Is abused, and the whole article is rigid and templated. Jiang Ning's dialogue is very dull, like a mechanical retelling. Things that have been clearly ordered for a long time are repeated and verbose, and the lines between the two are very awkward. The plot is repeatedly filled with water in many places, and the same plot is written over and over again, which leaves a heavy mark on the plot! Tolerance is completely suitable as an If you don't look at the writing and only look at the plot, you should still be able to understand it, so please give it a big boost [blowing kisses]

I feel that Jiang Ning is really suffering. I don't even know if the master has ever loved him... It looks so indifferent, but my heart is so painful and cruel. I feel so sorry for Jiang Ning. Author, are you going to kill me?

Most of my book reviews contain spoilers, and they are not as detailed as others. This is how I always review them. I thought about it for a long time before posting this review. I didn't watch the later trials because they were too long, and I didn't watch the extras either. When I read this book, I feel very complicated. Jiang Ning is really powerful. He feels tired and secretly scolds the order at night, but he also says that he chose it, so he doesn't blame the order. He accepts it quickly and is relatively calm. I think the complicated thing is that I feel sorry for him, feel that it is very difficult for him, and feel that it is unfair to him (I can't say it is unfair, just a general feeling), but I want to continue watching. I also thought about it later, this is indeed his own choice. Compared with the previous life, although his strength has declined, But his parents, brother and sister are still alive, which is what he hopes. In his previous life, he walked through mountains of corpses and seas of blood, and thus became powerful enough to enter the world of gods. He is not much weaker than Order. And because of a destiny marriage, he fell in love with Order at the first sight when he went to the world of gods, and the endings in the next two lives were not good. Jiang Ning would be happy because of Order touching his head, but he felt a little depressed and... (I can't tell what he felt). And Order was obviously not good to him in the early stage, but when I thought about it later, I felt that there was nothing wrong. Although Order knew that he was destined to be married when he saw him, because he was the master and had a high status, he did not fall in love at first sight. He just made a deal, so training and punishment later were normal, because he had no love or feelings for Jiang Ning, and was just a servant. The "status difference" is obvious here After Jiang Ning became a subordinate god, he no longer knelt down or called the Master of Order, and Order also apologized. When I read this article, I had very complicated thoughts. I had the desire to read on, but I felt uncomfortable at the same time. Many people may not be able to accept or read it. I often wonder whether Li Jie still loves Jiang Ning. Maybe I am too short-sighted and cannot see the essence. I still don't know yet. I forgot to mention that these are just my thoughts. I admit that I have only been talking about one point. Some people may be a little bit dissuaded. I apologize. Comparing this life with the previous life, I can't say, there are good and bad things. At least I have a sister by my side, my parents and brother are also alive, and my sister has done the work she wants to do in this life. Jiang Ning exchanged himself for the lives of 4 people. I'm a bit of a protagonist, and I don't know if it's worth it. I have always wanted to say: Order, I can be considered from God's perspective, but I still can't understand you.

The author's writing is very good, and the vision unfolds from Ning Ning's perspective. When Ning Ning was about to die, he made a deal with the God of Order. Order changed the fate of his family members who died one after another. The price was that his existence was completely erased. He left with Order. The logic of the process is very good, but the author gave too little sugar. I still like it to be sweeter. They are all very good people and did not ignore cruelty such as abuse. The relationship between them transcends master and servant, transcends love. It is a feeling of oneness and bond between each other.

It makes me feel a little uncomfortable when I see it, it hurts a lot, but sometimes it feels warm and reassuring. Facing those unknown things, Jiang Ning is no longer afraid, but I am. There is an indescribable emotion that surrounds me all the time. Looking at the remaining chapters, I can't bear to read anymore, I don't dare to read anymore, but it's even worse if I don't read it. It's a bit like the constant rain, moist. It's tied, and now it doesn't hurt anymore, because I know that the master has taught him the skills and allowed him to stand on his own, leaving only the feeling of peace of mind, as if he was wrapped in a light gaze, accompanying him everywhere no matter where he goes, so I began to envy him again for having a master, for having those opportunities, and for having a spiritual support. I like it very much and hope to continue it for a long time.

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For the first time, I hope the ending of this article is be. It really doesn't deserve to be.

I think the whole article may be drawn in line. But the author can describe it just right, just like a landscape ink painting. If the color is light, it will look plain, and if the color is thick, it will look coquettish. If the tip of the pen is heavy, it will be thick, but if the tip of the pen is light, it will not be able to hold it up. The proportion of mountains and rivers is also just right. If there are too many mountains, it will feel oppressive, but if there are too many water, it will be strange. The shape of the mountain is just right, not very rugged, not very flat. The water looks still, but he painted it with a sense of movement, and the scenery on the shore is just right. Even the things dotted on the painting are just right, anything less is not enough, and anything more is ugly. For example, a row of migrating geese is painted at the junction of mountains and rivers. The geese cover the imperfections of the mountains and reflect the clarity of the water. Some landscapes are also repeated, but the repetition is appropriate. For example, two willow trees beside a stream are almost identical, but when placed beside a winding stream, you can feel the difference. This feeling is not what the naked eye tells you, it is the heart and perception. Can you feel that feeling? It's this painting that looks like everything is ordinary, even inconspicuous. But when combined together, you can feel the painter's superb control, that is, everything is just right, and everything has the right shade. A kind of simplicity, purity and tranquility that returns to nature. [Send heart] [Send heart] [Send heart] I really like it, come on, author!

I felt so bad when I read it. I thought it was a sweet story at first, but it turned out to be a sad story. I felt so bad when I saw it earlier. It feels like Jiang Ning has been tamed by order. But it's really pretty. [Cry][cry][cry]

There is no broth in such an interesting article. Alas, the protagonist does not kiss when he is sleeping. I am really curious about what he is doing when he is sleeping. When the protagonist scolds the master for being a pervert, it really piques my curiosity.

It belongs to the category of sour literature. Although the three views are not correct, it hit my xp hard. The writing can arouse emotions and the imagination is very rich. It is different from most worldviews and is unconventional. Great support for the author!

Very cute, the main character looks like a mini-human machine

It actually makes me a little angry after reading it for so long. After so many chapters, Jiang Ning is still wearing the same white clothes and can't attack at all. If I had started Miracle Nuannuan a long time ago [punch out] [punch out] [punch out]