The Corpse Starts, and If You Want to Return to Normal, You Say I Am an Evil God.

So far, there are no poisonous points, and the plot is relatively logical. But I feel that the portrayal of the heroine is a bit lacking. I hope the author can improve his writing skills, create a three-dimensional and full character image, and tell us a wonderful story. Come on

It's also very good-looking. The main feature of this book is that it develops both sides of the plot between the earth and the blue star. People with blue hearts can travel to the earth, and people from the earth can also travel to blue stars. Even though this book is a cool article, you can see the way the earth controls the travelers in it, such as big data and so on. It's quite real. Blue Star's despair and the complexity of human nature are also expressed. Moreover, the protagonist is a smart and refreshing protagonist who is full of wits. So when you read this book, you don't have to completely throw away your brain. You can read it with confidence. The updates are relatively stable and the writing skills are online. Anyway, there are so many thoughts at the moment. If you feel more deeply after reading this book, you can review it later.

It looks good, the setting is very novel, and the character of the protagonist is also very interesting. However, I can't tell who the heroine is yet. Maybe she is the adopted orphan? Starting from the clone, it's not that attractive anymore. The clone was just a little poisonous point in the first place. The pace of the plot has also slowed down, and the protagonist's abilities aren't that interesting anymore.

We obviously want to adopt orphans and prepare for the adoption of the litter, but why do we suddenly adopt variables that we can't control? [What]

I quite like all the books by this author, but why does the heroine not appear earlier every time the author writes a single one [face covering]

It's quite interesting. It combines the ability to seize a body, travel between two worlds, weirdness and many other interesting elements. The quality of the plot is very good, but the writing style is a bit poor. I hope the author can make more [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates] [please give me more updates]

For the time being, I see the protagonist adopting a spare body, but I am not sure who the heroine is. However, I hope the author can open a separate line for the female protagonist. If it feels inappropriate, it can be released as a spin-off on some holidays.

I can't say that it's a 5-star start. I don't understand why you like the clone and it's independent? If you're too far away, you can't even feel it consciously. I'll deduct 1 star to see what happens next.

The plot is average and creative, but it doesn't work well after the heroine is introduced.

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Yes, although the protagonist's moral values ​​are average, since this is a novel, there is no need to worry about it so much.

Very good, it would be better if the word count could be more.

I personally like it very much, please keep writing. It's just a bit short, I hope it's not too eunuch. I just didn't describe how other people practice. I'm a little curious. Is it simply absorbing the energy around them?

Nice! This is really good

When I watch it, I always have a different sense of instant vision. The protagonist is simply an enhanced version of Su Nuo (child body) from another world.

Why do I see so few people🤨

Wisdom teeth, look good but not hot

Lots of typos, but not bad

Interesting, the new book is supportive.

It's okay, it's okay so far

The protagonist can also seize other people's bodies [Adoration]

A bit poisonous, but overall okay

Looks good, one star will be deducted

I can only say it looks strange and beautiful. [Cover face]

Overall good, but unfortunately I didn't buy the push stream

The author's homepage is no longer visible. . . . No more. . . . Also discontinued. . .

It looks good. Is the heroine the adopted orphan?

I think it's okay. After reading the first five chapters, the slow pace is much better. Also, when will the heroine appear?

It's pretty good but there aren't enough updates [almost crying] [almost crying] [grieved] [grieved] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing] [laughing]

Overall, it's very good, and there aren't any big problems. It still looks good, and the settings are pretty good.