I Accepted the Entry, Ancestor Bai Yueguang!

Haokan, the harmonious harem, and the wives don't have any naughty Shura fields. The shortcoming is that the language logic is confusing in some places, and the author should investigate it carefully. For example, in Chapter 46, I didn't realize whether Yan Xu was the elder brother or Yan Fuzi was the elder brother. Original summary: "I have a brother named Yan Xu." "He is very good to me. Although he is younger than me, he is always like an elder brother, taking care of me and protecting me." (It's not pigeons, what does that mean? You two brothers from the Yan family are just sitting here talking about their own affairs?)

It looks very comfortable, and every step is down to earth. Withdrawing the brothers, the collapse of combat power is so miserable. The bonuses are multiplied and multiplied at every turn. It looks lonely.

The plot is smooth and refreshing, and the golden finger entry system is step-by-step. The male protagonist is supposed to be a true man, he must avenge his revenge, he does not delay in accepting a daughter, and he is pushed back by his grandfather's childhood sweetheart. What kind of fairy tale is this? Love it, love it!

Irregular Book Review Issue 54: Good Grass Evaluation: Advantages: The early writing is very good, the overall content is also very good, there are some exciting points, and the plot is reasonable and not obtrusive. Overall, it is a harem invincible novel worth reading. Disadvantages: Personally speaking, there was a bit of a drama later on with Morgana, and the plot where the protagonist's master broke through felt a bit weird. However, there are no major poisonous points overall. It is absolutely reasonable to give a good grass. It is worth a look.

The novel is well written overall, and there are no major problems. The male protagonist tends to be calm and steady and speaks very little, but his character is still good. Then the male protagonist's system is getting stronger and stronger. The things given in the early stage are relatively weak and will become stronger in the later period. Then I will talk about some problems. The author must deal with the problems between the master and the male protagonist's grandfather later, otherwise the book will be ugly. Came out, and there is another personal reason why I deducted one star from this book. I personally don't like Duo Z Duo Fu very much. First of all, it steals the role of the male and female protagonists, and then it gives the man an extra weakness. It is not a dark kind of story where the male protagonist puts himself as the absolute center and is selfish. Of course, the author will write about it later. I haven't written it yet. What do you think about changing it to Duo Wives and Duo Fu? Why will the child's certain cultivation be passed on to the male protagonist? It's okay to change to a wife, and we can make progress together without being a hindrance. In the later stage, Shenyin will have less worries. What do you think, author? Of course, this is just my personal reason. Overall, this novel is still very well written. I just raise my own questions and some opinions and suggestions.

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The whole book is brilliantly written, and the characters are vivid and flesh-and-blood. The plot in the first hundred chapters is dull and lacks passionate fighting scenes. But after entering the two hundred chapters, the protagonist shows his sharpness and dominates the Eastern Region, and the atmosphere and structure are immediately full. Different from the cliche settings of some online novels where the protagonist reaches the top and talks empty talk without needing the awe of others and continues to get along as usual, in this book the bonds between the characters are gradual and natural, the friendship between family and friends is natural and three-dimensional, and the characters are all lifelike. There are very few deliberately pretentious and slap-in-the-face scenes in the book, and the plot when it comes to settling disputes is neat and tidy, without being procrastinating and filling in water, or stretching out to make up for the word count. Two small suggestions: First, the average daily updates are too few. It only took me ten hours to catch up on the current series. I hope the author will update more. Second, the two female majors, Luo and Shao, are far behind in their cultivation. I look forward to improving their cultivation in the future and narrowing the gap in strength. An overall excellent work, I wish the author smooth creation and steady serialization!

Very good, except for the shortcomings of the protagonist The plot is a bit witty

It's pretty good. There's no nonsense. It's very cautious and sophisticated. The key is that when there are no conflicts, it can write about daily life quite well. There are many girls, and I have had relationships with girls several times by chance. It can be called a soft-hearted family [laughter]

Yes, it's a rare piece of food. Although it's just a secret, the protagonist takes action when it's time to take action. At the same time, there are many female protagonists to make up for the boring daily life.

The plot and pacing are both good. The writing is relatively light, there is not much fighting and killing, and there is little violence, and the interactions between the characters are written in detail. However, in order to arouse emotions, the author used a little too much sensationalism. However, I felt that there were several sensational points that the protagonist could completely solve in a few years, but the author just got stuck and exploded at that time. I hope there will be less sensationalism later on. I can't say whether there will be people who won't watch this thing except for this kind of plot, but there will definitely be disgusting plots.

To be honest, if we accept girls in the harem, we should be more comfortable and there will be no problem. This book is simply unflattering to both ends. I really don't understand why it's written like this and why the heroine always refuses when it comes to me. People who can read this style of book won't like this kind of plot. People who like this kind of plot won't read this book. Do you think it's okay? Generally speaking, there's nothing wrong with it.

I have seen the latest chapter now. The plot may be a bit bland, but there are no obvious poisonous points and you can watch it smoothly. The overall feeling is medium or above average. I personally feel that it is suitable for fattening up. If I keep up with the update, it may become a little boring and plain. But it's already very good, I hope it will keep getting better.

Let's briefly talk about the male protagonist's cultivation process: at the age of seven and a half, he practiced the first level of Qi - at the age of 13, he built the foundation of heaven - at the age of 18, he went to the nine-turn golden elixir - at the age of 22, he went directly to the third level of Nascent Soul, where he condensed the seven orifices of Nascent Soul - at the age of 26, he passed through the mortal tribulation and became a god. It can be said that it takes the longest time to practice qi to build the foundation, and the breakthroughs become faster and faster later on. This book can also be regarded as a strange book. The faster the progress is, the faster the progress is. It can be seen that the initial stage has not yet exerted its force, the ice soul spirit body has begun to climax, and the later stages of the yin-yang holy body and red dust fairy bloodline are getting bigger and bigger. The original owner was really miserable. He probably only awakened his bloodline after his family died and everyone around him died, and then he gradually embarked on transcendence (becoming a plug-in for the protagonist). He must have been alone along the way, which is exactly the opposite of the protagonist. The protagonist sees one after another, not even sparing the weapon spirit. I boldly guess that the protagonist and the original protagonist are the same person in another world.

Why are the comments section full of gods? The author has said that the underworld is a private establishment, and the ox-headed and horse-faced people are natives of the Nascent Soul stage. Someone asked Doubao in the comment area, and they either said that Minotaur Horsemian was a little guy or that Senior Yuanying didn't respect the foundation-building disciples. He also said that the underworld looks down on the earth, and beats a dog without looking at its owner. They are obviously monks in the Yang world, but they were directly expelled from the Yang world after taking the civil service examination. This kind of person is the most ruthless in confrontation.

The sense of waiting for the annual draw is perfectly created, and the burst after long-term accumulation is super decompressive. It's beautiful. The more I watch it, the more I like it. It's great.

I've read 60 chapters, and it's okay. It's like a book written by the author of Qidian. The author's writing foundation is as solid as the protagonist's cultivation foundation in the book. Sixty chapters have been developed. Although it's not that exciting, fortunately, there are no neurotic dummies or poisonous points. It can be regarded as a book that can be read calmly.

It's hard to see a novel with a good setting for Goldfinger, a logical protagonist's behavior, and no mindless manipulation. A small gift to encourage you.

Not bad, not bad, it's still very stable, and it's not a poisonous text. It's good if it develops steadily like this. The small family is also well described, there is no intrigue, and the protagonist-centered idea is very clear.

I have only read Chapter 11, and I can already give it a very high evaluation. It will definitely be a book of about 9 points in the future. The writing style is very mature, the plot is not blocked, the writing is smooth, and it is very comfortable to read. I highly recommend reading it.

The author has a very good writing attitude. If this kind of person doesn't make money, then no one will. Regardless of the subject matter and plot, the author answers readers' questions in the comment area in a timely manner, and there are few poisonous points. The novel is a standard cool novel. Although the protagonist grows slowly, he is strong from beginning to end, and it is worth reading.

It's a good slow-burn (the kind of slow-burn that qualifies as a masterpiece). It's delicate, interesting, and refreshing. There should be some exciting plots, but I haven't seen them yet. After all, there are so many foreshadowings, and the writing is very good even when the cultivation level is very low. It's just that the introduction is purely in the style of a novice's introduction. I found this masterpiece because I was really out of ideas.

In fact, it is quite a pity. The book is not bad, it is quite good. But what can I say, I'm a little tired of watching this type of movie. Give it five stars! I might come back and check it out later if I run out of books. Of course I'm going back to the starting point, Tomato really doesn't have much to read lately.

What you can see in Tomato is the writing style. It is a kind of article that is slow at the beginning and rarely seen in Tomato. It is a chronic article that is very rare in this era. It gradually settles down and gives a feeling of leap. The entry system feels that white is very powerful when it starts from white. It becomes more and more popular later on. The expansion of world articles is also very good.

It's really cool to watch, a rare genius, it's not a waste of talent, there's no pressure from the classics, only the protagonist's family desperately supports the protagonist, the protagonist's grandfather is comparable to the protagonist, the emotional intelligence is very high, if the talent is not a bit low, otherwise he will make a fortune.

It's very interesting until around chapter 80 There are too many descriptions of a woman's appearance, unnecessary

After reading more than a dozen chapters, I feel it's okay. It's just that there are too many realms of cultivation. Each stage is divided into levels 1-9. It feels too long. Even though the pig's feet can break through quickly, I always feel tired and panicked. If I don't pay attention, I don't know which level it is.

This book is okay. I found that listening to books is really the way to select excellent works from my personal point of view. Overall, it's very life-like and the characters are also very vivid. I don't think there's anything major wrong with it so far. It's pretty good. I'll give it a 4 to help. Come on come on!

The writing is okay, there is no big poisonous point, it is considered very good among Tomatoes.

The overall plot development is coherent, the supporting characters have their own characteristics and behaviors, and the protagonist's grandfather is scheming. At present (I saw the comments he wrote here when he just started to make alchemy) the overall world view is not fully developed, and the relevant subsequent combat capabilities are not very clear.