Luffy, whose private thoughts have become delicate and sensitive, will find Uta abandoned. Will detect Ace's identity. I have come to understand that the navy is full of filth and pirates are not necessarily bad people. I want to live freely and walk on a path I have never imagined.
Reader comments
It's not bad, the rhythm is tight, the characters are vivid, and the relationship between the protagonist and Uta is very natural, it's easy to laugh at, it's okay. As the grandson of a navy admiral, it is normal and logical to give priority to entering the navy. It is also natural to encounter bad pirates during an internship mission and realize that not all pirates are good people like Shanks.
Later, as mentioned in the introduction, I realize that there are also evil people in the navy, and then I can guess that I am going to be a pirate. After all, I am a fellow pirate.
But after all, he is the protagonist or a fan, so why not go his own way? For example, travelers, adventurers, etc...
After all, thief is a kind of person who does not engage in production. It is a negative and derogatory word throughout the world. It is an adjective specifically invented to describe those who steal other people's money.
As for the One Piece anime, the good guys (hunting for treasure, catching/killing pirates with bounties, and hanging a black flag with a skull) also think they are pirates, making it seem like there are only three types of people on the sea, navy, businessmen, and pirates. This blurs the boundaries of the definition of thief, and even the protagonist is a pirate. It seems that pirate is a word that represents freedom, bravery, and fearlessness. Of course, this is the case in anime.
Finally, after all, I also have to work, so I will give priority to listening to books, which is okay. But when I have free time, it is difficult to read. There are various quotation marks that are not added, and there are some disorder or errors in word order. Ah, let me tell you, I haven't actually watched a few episodes of One Piece...
How can I put it, the characters of Luffy and others are restored very well, the plot becomes faster due to the improvement of strength, and it is most likely written with AI assistance, but it is enough to use AI well, but it is too slow to follow the new ones.
Very beautiful, come on!
@Author If Luffy is not the Pirate King, will he still be the plot of One Piece?
It's very interesting. I hope the author can update it twice a day.
I think it's the best pirate fanfic, I hope you won't stop updating it.
The theme is okay, but there are still problems. For example, the punctuation marks are not typed correctly, and some are not even typed, which affects the reading experience for me. There are also typos. I hope the author can correct them.
It looks good. The author will be China Oda from now on.
Luffy and Uta's childhood sweethearts are the most delicious. By the way, is the author pure love?
The daily routine written with the heroine is very good. I will watch the advertisement every day to reward you. Don't stop updating [crying] [crying]
Not bad, not bad, it will be popular
It's very touching.
So far so good
Not bad, not bad, really good ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧
The writing is good, but he will still have to become a pirate in the future. After Robin is captured, won't he still have to declare war on the World Government? The Chambord Islands still have to fight the Celestial Dragons, so he will still become a pirate in the future.
The writing is very good. I can be your Luffy. It would be great if he really has such a high emotional intelligence. The various original plots are also very exciting.
It looks good. Luffy doesn't choose his camp right away. There is a process of choosing, and the change is reasonable.
It's really interesting, more reasonable than Hara Kei Luffy going to sea
Very well written, stick with it, the author is great
It's not bad, the rhythm is tight, the characters are vivid, and the relationship between the protagonist and Uta is very natural, it's easy to laugh at, it's okay. As the grandson of a navy admiral, it is normal and logical to give priority to entering the navy. It is also natural to encounter bad pirates during an internship mission and realize that not all pirates are good people like Shanks. Later, as mentioned in the introduction, I realize that there are also evil people in the navy, and then I can guess that I am going to be a pirate. After all, I am a fellow pirate. But after all, he is the protagonist or a fan, so why not go his own way? For example, travelers, adventurers, etc... After all, thief is a kind of person who does not engage in production. It is a negative and derogatory word throughout the world. It is an adjective specifically invented to describe those who steal other people's money. As for the One Piece anime, the good guys (hunting for treasure, catching/killing pirates with bounties, and hanging a black flag with a skull) also think they are pirates, making it seem like there are only three types of people on the sea, navy, businessmen, and pirates. This blurs the boundaries of the definition of thief, and even the protagonist is a pirate. It seems that pirate is a word that represents freedom, bravery, and fearlessness. Of course, this is the case in anime. Finally, after all, I also have to work, so I will give priority to listening to books, which is okay. But when I have free time, it is difficult to read. There are various quotation marks that are not added, and there are some disorder or errors in word order. Ah, let me tell you, I haven't actually watched a few episodes of One Piece...
How can I put it, the characters of Luffy and others are restored very well, the plot becomes faster due to the improvement of strength, and it is most likely written with AI assistance, but it is enough to use AI well, but it is too slow to follow the new ones.
Very beautiful, come on! @Author If Luffy is not the Pirate King, will he still be the plot of One Piece?
It's very interesting. I hope the author can update it twice a day.
I think it's the best pirate fanfic, I hope you won't stop updating it.
The theme is okay, but there are still problems. For example, the punctuation marks are not typed correctly, and some are not even typed, which affects the reading experience for me. There are also typos. I hope the author can correct them.
It looks good. The author will be China Oda from now on. Luffy and Uta's childhood sweethearts are the most delicious. By the way, is the author pure love?
The daily routine written with the heroine is very good. I will watch the advertisement every day to reward you. Don't stop updating [crying] [crying]
Not bad, not bad, it will be popular
It's very touching.
So far so good
Not bad, not bad, really good ദ്ദി˶ｰ̀֊ｰ́ )✧
The writing is good, but he will still have to become a pirate in the future. After Robin is captured, won't he still have to declare war on the World Government? The Chambord Islands still have to fight the Celestial Dragons, so he will still become a pirate in the future.
The writing is very good. I can be your Luffy. It would be great if he really has such a high emotional intelligence. The various original plots are also very exciting.
It looks good. Luffy doesn't choose his camp right away. There is a process of choosing, and the change is reasonable.
It's really interesting, more reasonable than Hara Kei Luffy going to sea
Very well written, stick with it, the author is great