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The plot is very well written so far, it is natural and lively, not rigid, nor is it artificial and abstract. Although it is a bit logically nonsensical, it is also more enjoyable! But I hope that the subsequent plot will not focus on nonsensical comedy. The main point is the protagonist's alternative cultivation and growth! Well, after all, I still went astray. I kept writing all kinds of fancy ways to cultivate immortality, and kept making noises. The growth plot line did not develop at all. The novel must always have a story narrative. What's the point of writing plots about killing monsters, upgrading and practicing skills all day long?
Such joyful and interesting books are rare. Especially for Naruto, there are no three-generation conspiracy theories or all kinds of dirty and dark plots. The original joyful plots in Naruto's anime and comics are almost invisible in the fandom, and even those that are funny are just jokes. Very good, keep it up.
It's great. Taking Konoha children to play together adds a truly happy childhood to them. Sasuke can do what he likes, Hinata can become more determined, and Naruto can also gain a sincere bond. Very good To be honest, it's quite interesting. Compared with those stories about the protagonist becoming stronger that seem to have a wide variety but are actually the same, this kind of thing suits me better.
It is suspected that this system has no other power except observation ability and projecting a general outline to the protagonist. According to the Hagoromo Chapter, Chakra was taught by the Sage of Six Paths in order to connect people with each other and understand each other, so the essence of Chakra is connection. It is compiled into a mystery through the objective effects of the original ninjutsu in the original world. It allows the protagonist group members to believe a little bit what it says and conforms to the objective laws of the ninja world. It connects the five elements of heaven and earth. The same is true for other things. It connects space and connects souls. The feedback from the members of the Asgard is actually the protagonist who believes that the system has this power, and the members of the Asgard believe in the protagonist, so the connection begins. It is said that only if you can imagine a kind of power, you can master it. To put it another way here, only if you believe in it, you can connect to it. [Sinister smile]
Laugh and cry. This book is amazing. Really awesome. There are big bosses everywhere in 6 now. A pile of junk in 9 minutes. Don't stop. Come on. Nice
The Uchiha will probably not be exterminated now [laughing evilly] Hinata will not be the kind of character who is limited to the Tsukuyomi eldest sister (beat up her old guy [laughing evilly]) and Naruto, then let him have the entire fairy magic and parting gift in one hand, the fairy magic and spiral shuriken in one hand, and a small Rasengan that can be thrown [laughing evilly]. Then Uchiha Sasuke has now begun to believe in cultivating immortals, so he asked Sasuke to get some thunder and fire escapes that can be thrown [sneaky laugh] The protagonist is teaching some space magic, and later changed Sasuke's Mangekyō Sharingan awakening skills. After all, the awakening of Mangekyō Sharingan is related to his will (ಡωಡ) and give Sasuke some space skills for Sasuke's Sharingan [sneaky laugh]
It's a good book. Although some people have commented that the system is useless and it's about cultivating immortals and practicing ninjutsu. I have read the latest 116 chapters. Although it is ninjutsu, I personally think it is because the Qi is not sensed, but the effect stated by the system is at least achieved. I understand it as a low-end version of Cultivation of Immortals, and I look forward to the plot of the Immortal Palace group practicing the Qi Queen. Also, although there are enough words in each chapter, I still feel that one chapter a day is not enough.
It's very high-quality and the ideas are very stable. If this book is completed, it will be a big hit.
I really think this is a very good novel that you can't help but keep following. The author's writing style is very comfortable, and it reads smoothly and naturally without the feeling of a rigid pile of words. The rhythm of the story is well grasped, not procrastinating or rushed, the plot is loose and tight, making it easy to read, and the sense of substitution is particularly strong, making people unable to stop after reading it. What I like most is the characterization in the book. Each character is very real and three-dimensional, not a thin tool character. The growth and changes of the protagonist are very natural. The experiences, mentality and choices along the way are all reasonable and can make people truly feel the growth and transformation of the characters. The supporting characters also have their own personalities and characteristics, as well as their own ideas and persistence, making the whole story more full and warm. The plot logic of the whole story is clear and the structure is complete. The author is very good at foreshadowing the details. The foreshadowing laid in the front will slowly come back later. It can be seen that the writing is very careful. The plot arrangement is reasonable, with both exciting and tense high-energy scenes as well as delicate and warm daily plots. It is relaxed and relaxed, making it particularly comfortable to watch. I would also like to express my special thanks to the author for his hard work. It is really not easy to write a novel. It requires stable updates, repeated polishing of the plot, and careful characterization of the characters. The author spends time and energy to write out the content of each chapter bit by bit. Being able to persist in creating and take every plot seriously is really worthy of respect. I am very grateful to read such a thoughtful work, and I am very grateful to the author for his persistence and dedication. Overall, this is a good book of high quality and worth reading carefully. The plot is engaging and the characters are vivid. It is very therapeutic and enjoyable to read. I will keep following the updates, fully support the author, and look forward to more exciting content in the future!
This is the most imaginative Naruto story I have ever seen. Sure enough, there are thousands of weird things in the world, and persimmons account for most of them.
The first part is easy and funny, but the second part is not so fun. The author can read the book by Sasuke, the thin ice brother. I think that book is very interesting and has a lot of imagination.
It's quite fun, and it will be even more fun if it develops and can make a big splash on the night of genocide and defeat Itachi and Obito. . . You can also bring the Nine Tails with you when the sect-protecting spirit beasts are released... There is no hope if the clan is suddenly wiped out. If we continue to follow the main line of Zabuza, that would be really meaningless. . . .
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The writing is very interesting and beautiful! The protagonist's setting is very new, and he guides his friends to cultivate "immortality" in the Five Elements. Although the second pillar was still tragically exterminated.
You can also watch it, Tomato is pretty good, the rhythm is good, and the secondary development is good. The first few chapters may have been filled in by AI and the writing felt unfamiliar at the beginning, but it obviously disappeared in the later chapters. The upgrade and development flow, Dabai text, and the novice village have just been released. I will wait for updates in the future.
Lezi books are always delightful
I actually finished reading it, I am also a god [laughs][laughs] So happy, haha, don't give up. The refreshing feeling of this book is the inexplicable creation. What you feel is the pleasure of creating this system. The protagonist is deceived, but still shares the results, and there is a happy feeling.
Logic aside, I enjoyed watching it anyway.
When you time travel into a child, your body becomes younger, not your mind becomes childish. If you talk about cultivating an immortal everywhere, you will be sliced into slices sooner or later (Danzo: The root laboratory needs you), and one star will be deducted.
Hahahaha, Nantianmen, Bai Yujing, I saw it, I saw it all, hahahaha, hahahahaha, I am going to become an immortal! ! ! I am truly a Taoist, hahahahahaha Cultivation, cultivation, is to cultivate the fake into the real, hahahahahahaha The cause exists and the effect exists, and the effect is the cause. This is the truth, this is the Tao. Hahahahahahahahahahahaha! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Spoiler alert, the system in this book is actually a subsystem of another system. Well, it is differentiated from that system. It deceives other time travellers, creates its own skills and abilities, and then fools the next one after the host fails or dies, and finally transfers all the collected skills back to the main system.
This book is also called "The Legend of Mortal Ninja's Cultivation of Immortality - Ninja World Chapter" [laughter]
It was a little rough in the early stages, but I feel like the writing is getting better and better in the later stages. Come on, author!
The writing is very beautiful and interesting, the author
WOC, so far, the plot is smooth, the ideas are clear, and there are basically no poisonous points. The only shortcoming is that the update is too slow. It is a rare masterpiece. I personally feel that the current Naruto novel can be rated above 9 points.
It's really super good-looking. It's not a cookie cutter model. The growth of the protagonists is not boring either. The funny content is also very novel. It's fun to watch. Please update it soon [Blow kiss][Flow kiss][Flow kiss]
The subject matter is novel and fascinating, the storyline is gripping, and the characters are lifelike [cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face][cover face]
Very interesting and very funny.
Not bad, quite enjoyable [like]
It's so beautiful, why doesn't anyone see it?