Chuan Shu: the System Asked Me to Break up the Male Protagonist

As a reader, I like Shen, but Tangtang is more accustomed to preferring Lu. Shen's character is thick and thick. The positive and negative aspects of his character, obsession and control are all endowed with charm. Perhaps it is because he feels that the author has no intention of including him in Tangtang's life, which makes this difference add a regret and love that only readers can appreciate. Lu, on the other hand, is more inclined to moisturize things silently. From the tenderness, entanglement, indecision, delicate and heavy thoughts that he feels more often, he silently swallows the inner pain he actually experienced, to truly feeling it. The gentleness in his character is a picture that has not yet been painted, and he is not a perfect protagonist. To be honest, when I read the first episode, I always thought of words like Nuojiji, Ruanmianmian, but it highlights Tang's charm! When I saw him more in the second week, it seemed that I finally read the land from the ethereal. The first show seemed to be always filled with tension and gloom, and the author chose to end it abruptly in the melancholy and suffocation. The second show was even more exciting! Many of the limited perspectives in the first game were restored in the second game. To be honest, I have a bit of an anti-BL mentality due to my experiences in recent years. I clicked on this book purely because of the lack of books and the bad intention of seeking novelty, but I really didn't expect to start low and go high! It's very beautiful, and I can feel the author's strong logic, including some very touching characterizations, careful consideration of metaphors, appropriate omissions, and sufficient blank space for the characters in the novel. The author really loves the characters he writes and tries his best to portray each one of them as unique. I couldn't write any more paragraph reviews, so I had to occupy the book reviews. I've read Chapter 54 so far, which is very interesting. Originally I just wanted to comment on Shen's character, but I couldn't help but expand on it... But I wasn't very happy with the writing of the latest chapters of "The Second Anniversary Cape". There was too much embarrassment in the unfolding of the plot, and I felt the same way as Tang. Conflicted, I hope that Shen will be well, but knowing Tang's choice, I'm a little afraid to watch the next development, haha.

In the theme of bending and straightening, I think it is quite interesting. The relationship is a gradual cycle and you will not like it all at once. I hope the author will keep updating. I don't know if he will consider accepting other male supporting characters in the future. I look forward to it₍ᵔ•ᴗ•ᵔ₎

When I first read the first chapter, all I could think about was how good it would be for the heroine and Lu to fall in love! I felt Shen was a bit annoying, but when I watched the second part, I realized Shen's personality charm, which really attracted me, but the author probably only wrote Lu as the male protagonist, which ended up being a pity. It's not that Lu is not good, he is the kind of character who is like a gentle older brother, and Shen is the kind of cool and handsome boy who is like us in the same class. They are all very attractive to me, and I really hope that they are both male protagonists. [Cry][cry]

The author should consider asking for both, please, please, please, please, please [Adoration] [licking the screen] [licking the screen] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [The God of Bird Food] [I'm about to cry]

It's very interesting, especially the plot between the heroine and Lu Huai before the reboot is very attractive, and people can't help but read on. After the restart, there are more stories between the heroine and Shen, and it can be seen that the heroine likes Shen more, and Shen also likes the heroine. Although I know that the heroine's strategy mission is Lu Huai, every time I see the relationship between Shen and the heroine, and then I look at Lu Huai, I can't help crying.

I saw that the author would reply to the comments in the comment area, and I also read the comments you replied. It means that at the end of the week, Lu actually liked the original protagonist, not the female protagonist. But I didn't quite understand why Lu wanted to be with Xu when the original protagonist was there before and then with Shen. He never considered the original protagonist from the beginning to the end. And he knew clearly that the original protagonist actually liked him. After the female protagonist came in, Lu confessed instead. Didn't Lu realize that the female protagonist was not the original protagonist? And those things that made Lu heart moved. Remember what he likes to eat, protect him behind you, and go to the amusement park together to have a carnival and ask him what he wants. Isn't it all done by the heroine? Why does Lu still like the original owner? Where did the real original owner go?

This book is very interesting, but there is one thing that I find very unsatisfactory. That is, as described in the book, Zhou Mulu likes the original heroine, or it can be said that it is a kind of inseparable kind between family affection and love. So in the first week, the novels written by the heroine actually have their own consciousness in this world, and many of them are different from what she wrote. I'm thinking that Zhou Mulu actually knows that she is not the original Gu. He has never wanted to get to know the new her. He just found out that the old her is still there through passive acceptance and tried to awaken her. Erzhoumu Zhonglu also discovered her change. This time he did not passively accept it, but became confused and tried to understand "her". At the same time, under Shen's temptation and constant contact, one can feel that the heroine is exhausted. She begins to doubt herself and imagines that she is a clown. She feels terrible. She takes the initiative to confess to Shen that "she" is living a good life, but in fact, she also tells Shen that she is not "she". Here I am thinking, this is actually very cruel to Lu. I imagine that my childhood or even possible crush suddenly changed to a different person. Although "she and him" in another place are very happy, they are not the current him. Now he has gone into a misunderstanding. He is constantly getting close to the heroine to get used to her leaving, but I feel that he is more separated. In the early stage, he changed from his insistence on her to trying to accept a different "her", which let me know that he is no longer the one who is the target of the week. This makes me keep thinking, will Lu really like this new "her"? I feel that no matter what, there will be a knot in my heart, a thorn that I often think about, and I feel that the sudden departure of someone close to me will eventually become a nightmare that makes a person toss and turn in the middle of the night and cry uncontrollably.

I really like Shen in the second episode. What he said made me worried. But what Lu said in the first episode was average. The second episode felt like it was separated from the original plot and became more vivid. But I still like Shen the most.

So interesting! The male protagonist's characterization is really far from reality. He is all an elite. It gave me a very Mary Sue feeling, but the intervention of this system gave me A sense of urgency that if you fail the mission, your life will be ruined Although the characters are created by the heroine, they feel out of control and are not controlled by the author. The world will take the initiative to improve the sense of unknown that the heroine does not know about the setting. The suspense is very interesting and neutralizes the monotony of the guide. Come on, author! You are on the wrong side. Just continue to treat us gentlemen like this. I'm so desperate. Why did Cheng Yaojin show up halfway? No one told me that there are two male protagonists, and no one told me that the second male lead is the first. Xiao Lu, please come back! The love line is like looking at the flower cards, causing liver pain

I really like Shen Linfeng. Please, the author, let her have sex with the heroine. Please [cry][cry][cry]

Although I have only read Chapter 10, this development is so novel! And it's a step-by-step approach that I like, (I've watched it a lot before, and it was love at first sight, OOC, and the sudden personality change, which makes people feel very inconsistent) Although I have only read Chapter 10 now, but after reading the whole thing, the transition feels very natural [hold] (very worth looking forward to!)

The writing is very good, with daily life, dialogue, and a reversal of themes. It is novel, and the characters are great. It is difficult to write no matter how you write it. Shen is very good, and Lu is very good. The cover is crude, but the plot, characters, conflicts, reversals, and writing are all there. It is really delicate. Whether it is the text or the characters, everyone is in tears. Every overthrow of speculation is refreshing. It is expected and reasonable. I really feel sorry for Lu Huai. Lu Huai, does it really not hurt when obsession is gone? Pain will make you cry. Have you shed tears? I think so, because I use myself to save others, and tears are filling my eyes [crying]

The author's writing is great. The original protagonist and Lu Huai in the first round surprised me. The second round revealed the ending of the first round and perfected the female protagonist in the second round. In the second round, I hope the heroine can do as she pleases, because due to the intervention of system tasks, the relationship between Lu and Shen is no longer fair. Keep up the good work, author! ! [Blowing kiss]

It's very interesting to watch, especially the one that goes back to the resurrection point. It's very interesting. The original and current protagonists have different feelings for the male protagonist. It's also well written. I like it [laughs][laughs]

The author writes the delicate emotional changes between characters very profoundly. The language description has a sense of tension, and there is no deliberate description of the scarlet corners of the eyes, the shocking appearance, and there are no particularly clichéd plots. The detailed descriptions are very vivid and the foreshadowing is well filled out. The characters are created very successfully. The heroine is at a loss in a strange environment, helpless, and misses her loved ones; Lu is gentle, reassuring, firm, and successful; Shen is persistent, calculating, and insecure. These are all impressive. There is regret and satisfaction in the end, which makes people burst into tears. As for the result, I didn't want to accept it and felt that this was the only way to get better. There is not a single kiss in the whole book, but it made me see another look of love. This book is like moonlight falling on the hand, so unnoticeable yet impossible to ignore.

The author's design is very clever. Every time I look forward to the plot, there is a small twist. It is very subtle. I hope the author will write more articles and feel the author's delicate emotions. It really touched me. Come on👏

The plot of this book is twists and turns, which is both reasonable and unexpected. The author is very imaginative and likes Tangtang's character very much. I hope the author will continue to work hard and bring surprises to readers [Blow kiss]

To be honest, I feel that every character in this book has a life of his own, and I seem to see them truly through the text. I am very moved by Shen Linfeng's willingness to lock himself up for the heroine [almost crying] [almost crying]

Very interesting story 🥰

The male protagonist knew from the beginning that the female protagonist was not the original one, but he did not deliberately expose it and let everything take its course. The author controlled the characters of all the characters very well.

Very nice and very novel

It's really sad to have the wrong male lead 💔 I feel bad for Xiao Lu

Ah, I have never seen this setting before. It's a battle of wits and courage, unknown. It's so cool. I love suspenseful settings and I feel like I've seen something good. Finally, it's not a mindless and low-intelligence story. It's great to watch.

After watching the ending, Tang chose Shen, but I preferred Lu Huai [crying] [crying]

Woohoo, it's really beautiful! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks great, please support the author [adoration][adoration][adoration]

Very nice, I like it

To be honest, I have never been able to tell who the male protagonist of this novel is. I feel that the ending is a bit unsatisfactory. I hope the author can write a side story.

Crab author, you have solved the knot in my heart.