Dragon Clan: the Opening Live Broadcast of Lu Mingfei's Life as a Loser

It's probably Tomato's only good-looking Dragon Clan movie. Everyone who sees this is really looking forward to the part about Eri. Don't include personal information. Can't you just write about watching movies? Just write about the Dragon Clan.

Taken together, this book is still readable (it is not a troll, and no money is taken). There are some poisonous points, and a lot of private settings have been added. However, the author has also listened to the advice and scolding, and has changed what he said. Currently, there are no plots such as those with aliens. My suggestion is not to add more. When the time comes, just brush it off. Anyway, it doesn't matter if it is there or not. Then there is the section about Caesar and Nono that was scolded by many people, which has been changed. I really listened to this advice, and I was really scolded. There is no way, there is so much foreshadowing, and the main plot is also the same, and the cover is also like this. Suddenly this happens, many fans will be angry, but it will be changed. At present, it seems that I want to have zero or Lu Hui, or simply no heroine, and the author said that there is no harem (not sure) If you are interested in the subject of dragons, you can read it. If you are very picky, for example, if you have a lot of requirements, you can choose not to read it. As a canopy-type novel, the author is still very good in writing, and it seems that he has tried his best. However, sometimes some details are missed, maybe he has forgotten it? I suggest that when the author is free, he can go back and read the previous chapters and add some details. In addition, the rating of this book is indeed a bit too low. I think it should not be so low. It should be stable at 7 or above. It is probably also because of the incident on July 7. The author should not make this kind of mistake again in the future. I know you will read the comment area, and there should be more production capacity. Don't go to three chapters. It is really not enough.

Don't give up on Yiren Line. Just follow the author's own ideas. There may be quite a few people who keep books, which sometimes affects your judgment. The author's writing is still good. Come on, don't give up your own ideas and don't be deceived by the data.

I feel that the main sky and the auxiliary reality are that the sky is the pure dragon race, but if you can come back to the circle, it's okay if there are aliens (for example, if there are aliens, how do you go to the Three Gorges [laughing]) It doesn't matter if the aliens and dragons are parallel in reality. Without the Three Gorges, it would be too abrupt if Nono suddenly fell in love with Lu Mingfei.

I haven't seen such an interesting derivative novel in a long time. I feel that the author's writing style is very good and the concept is good. However, I think the author can be more detailed in character portrayal. For example, he can reflect the person's personality through his psychological description and appearance description. This is also more interesting. Several of the books I followed have abandoned the book. I hope the author can write more! ! ! ! (~￣▽￣)~

The author added the next sentence to the ending of Long San. Mr. Cesar Gattuso, that change was very hot. Did it burn through your pride? Your proud weasel made you clearly hear all the sounds of the girl's bones being smashed. " "Mr. Chu Zihang, when you and Caesar, who was violently bloody for the third time, joined forces and couldn't defeat Yuan Zhisheng. Do you understand whether you killed Shami or Jormungandr? Of course, no girl will ever lower her head to kiss your face under the sun. "Mr. Lu Mingfei, is Gao Tianyuan's wine good? Has it extinguished your cowardice? She prepared a test paper for you. She will give you full marks no matter what you write, but you missed the test. One hundred and three hundred and twenty flower tickets can't keep you, so you can't keep her even after spending a quarter of your life." [Cool][Cool][Cool]

I strongly urge Mr. Daye to be the heroine. The father-daughter love between Black King and Jörmungandr is so great.

The writing is average, but the author's ability to persist in writing deserves a star. Damn, I shouldn't have read the comments, I can't stand it anymore. It's the same sentence. It's impossible for the author not to know where the poisonous point is, but he just dared to write it like this. It makes people speechless and run away.

It's very interesting. I heard the author say it's not a harem. I believe the relationship between Concubine Ming and other characters will be handled well. Cheers to the author [Like] [Like]

For the first 20 chapters, as long as you know the setting of aliens, just read the first few levels, and then start reading from chapter 21 Just write at the current pace. It's been much better since I wrote less about aliens. There's no other bad job of making aliens comparable to the Dragon King.

I really don't know how the author writes the emotional line [eating melon]

Keep up the good work, hope it doesn't stop updating

It looks quite comfortable, and you don't feel like your brain has been thrown away. It's not bad. I'd like to give you a high score to encourage you.

The author wrote this derivative thing very well. Keep up the hard work! No eunuch

I don't know why I always like to call these protagonists Lao Lu, Lao Chu, Lao Kai, Lao Nuo, Lao Xia, and Lao Ze, just because I want to see them elbow Hersorg. [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying] Author, you need to speed up the progress

It can only be said to be the best book among the Tomato Dragon family of movie watchers.

I just don't want Caesar and Nono to be together. Nono basically doesn't like anyone. The original book said that he and Caesar are together because they pursue a sense of security. Now Caesar can't even control his own destiny. I don't think Enonuo's character will agree to Caesar's proposal.

To be honest, it's really beautiful. I've found a lot of dragon fanfics, including some projections or rebirths. This is the second book that made me feel that it was very consistent and made me want to read it.

It's okay, it's just that it's too difficult to write, and don't write about how strong the alien is, it looks like Ying Xue

The subject matter is okay, but in the early stage, the aliens were a bit too dominant, and some people may abandon the book because of this, but it will be okay after corrections later.

Not bad, but some of the language is incoherent, but I'll update it.

It's good-looking, very good-looking. For me, I won't stop reading unless the book is very interesting to me. Otherwise, I might not read it after reading it for a few minutes.

Very good, very good. It coincides with the kind of exposure plot I had in mind. I like it very much. I hope the author will stick to it.

A very interesting book, worth reading👀

The plot is very novel and interesting. In many places, you can really recognize people and laugh out loud, and it's very Jiangnan style, but can watching movies just be about Dragons?

Interesting dragon fan fiction, looking forward to the follow-up plot

It's very creative and a little different from the other one I read before. That one can be seen by others but not by ordinary people. This can be seen by everyone.

This is one of the better-written books among Dragon Clan's second creations.

It's very good to watch. It told everything I wanted to see. The emotions are described very delicately, especially the plot of Chu Zihang Xiami.

Dude, I was so excited after reading your book. From now on, the remaining lunch boxes will only be sold to college students! ! ! ! This is not you! ! ! Why are there two chapters in one day! !