Starfall Lake, Afternoon, There Is an Extra Kelly

There are no exciting big adventures every day (actually there are, but there are fewer of them at the moment, probably because there are fewer chapters now). It is very warm and daily, different from many Genshin Impact fans. The author's writing skills are also good, and the writing is very cute [Blow kiss]

The writing is okay. The content is different from other transformation stories. I found the main character as soon as I transformed. So far, I have only met some characters with little plot. Except for the human-machine. I am looking forward to the follow-up meeting between Keli and Qin. Please give the author a reminder. Don't say anything like "Oh, actually I am Keli's sister" or anything like saying that I am Alice's other daughter. That is really bullshit. Even if it embarrasses the protagonist, or is reborn, it is better than these two.

I'm Rico. From the day I opened my eyes and saw Xingluo Lake, I came to this familiar yet unfamiliar world alone, and my uneasiness has always been hidden in my heart. But this world never let me face it alone - the boss lady would leave me meals and help me wash clothes; Diona would make a nice drink; Ryan would call me foster father in a silly way; Teacher Bennett would get up with a smile even if I fell down... These kindnesses quietly enveloped me like the wind. There are no spectacular adventures in this book, only the story of a small person who was treated tenderly by the world. I hope you who read it will also be moved by these small warmth. May you be happy and may the world treat you gently.

It's a very heartwarming story, like a fairy tale. I usually read it at night and feel warm in my heart. But when I read it again in the morning, I don't have the same artistic conception. To me, it's like a children's bedtime story. After reading it, my heart warms and I fall asleep. It's suitable to read before going to bed (not sure? Not suitable for everyone). I read it all at once, so I don't know how to update it. I'll watch it tomorrow and add comments if appropriate. The content of the daily update is probably a unit story, which is also suitable for the main content. I think the outline is about Rico finding confidence while adapting to the world, and getting to know Mondstadt's partners. I think the author likes dress-up games a bit. The protagonist's clothes represent her attitude towards the world and herself. The clothes will eventually return to the original set and become a complete Rico.

A very good fanfic, the overall pace is relatively slow, and as others have said, it is a very cute book. The characters are three-dimensional, and the description of the original characters is not too obvious OOC. The originality is also quite distinctive. As for the shortcomings, it is that there is a little contact with the original characters. There can be more such plots later. Also, the title of the protagonist is a bit fragmented in the narration and dialogue. I hope they can be unified. I can give it 4-4.5 Stars. If I keep this style, the rating can probably rise to 8.5-9.0 Points. Regarding whether it was written by AI, I don't think so. It may have been polished by AI, but it was definitely written by humans, because AI cannot write such a book [Chigua]

The writing is really good. If AI can write like this, I would have used it a long time ago. Are you afraid that you are being targeted? [Laughing and crying] There are so many trolls, and the score can be around 9.0 No matter what. Come on, hey, just keep updating if you don't ask for anything else.

Generally speaking, daily writing Delicate description, the first 80 chapters describe how the protagonist connects with the world, allowing readers to empathize with it, and then begins the daily life with Keli. It can be seen that the author is full of love for Genshin Impact, Mondstadt, and Keli A very rare daily masterpiece Looking forward to writing about Little Witches

The writing is very good and heartwarming, and the protagonist is very cute. Just don't stop updating The world is well written

A good book that does not hide its flaws. But after all, it is fan fiction, so it is recommended to include more plots that interact with the characters.

Ha ha ha, what a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ★Ah, the legendary writer★ evangelist of words How long will it take for you to update a new chapter and recreate history? Across the ocean of text and data traffic, the process of reading your text is delivered to me in front of my eyes. It always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying. If there is a one in ten thousand chance that you can update ten chapters a day My victory will be certain In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news.

If I am just here for Keli, then I think I can quit. The protagonist will not only become Keli but also become another person with Keli's template. If you are looking for Genshin Impact fan fiction, then this is a work not to be missed. Here you can see a more realistic world described by the author, from food and accommodation, adventurers association, knights to passers-by, from the use of Mora, alchemy props to equipped weapons, every detail makes people feel as if they are really living in Mondstadt. The illustrations of important characters and leaders are also good. The author especially likes to describe Mora's earning, consumption, and adventure experiences. I feel that the author is more suitable for writing "Di Wrong" fans (laughs) [Evaluation time: End of the first volume]

There is no sense of grand ceremony or inexplicable time travel. The main characters are ordinary ordinary people who are inconspicuous. In people's words and deeds, people's lives and various situations in the world are truly written. The protagonist of Soul 30+ is trapped in a minor body and begins his own journey in a world that is both strange and familiar. My body is like duckweed, wandering in a foreign world, helpless and alone. From the very beginning, I have been familiar with and unfamiliar with the world. I have long since left the age of second grade. I am careful with this young body, and every move makes me feel distressed. Then the encounter with the original owner showed the inferiority and cowardice of the weak Yinghuo under the scorching sun. Escape and hiding may not be good, but they are the best ways to protect yourself. He/she is afraid! But, fortunately, this is Mondstadt, the land of freedom led by Barbatos. People's care and tolerance, and the pure kindness of human nature, finally protected the kind and cowardly wanderer. May the wanderer return home. May we share the beauty of the moon thousands of miles apart Let the wind lead you, and listen to the wind sing!

The writing is very good. This daily life is ordinary but interesting. This is Ryan. I always want to chop him when I see him. I feel like there is a pig around the cabbage.

I am currently at chapter 38. The author's setting is that a 30-year-old uncle time travels to become an older Keli. There is no big problem in reading this article. It is good to read. However, the protagonist written by the author is quite suspicious and does not believe in the gold content of the Free City. He is always afraid of being exposed and not free enough. I feel that there is no need to be afraid at all. After all, the God of Wind must know that failure to stop is acquiescence, and Alice is watching the fun and does not mind it. After all, it is not a fight for the body, just multiple daughters. The author was stabbed in the back a few times, and the new character Rinaia, because she was not a human, felt that she was an alien since she was a child, so she used a hat to cover herself, and finally gradually revealed her own story. Now the author Rico is also not an ordinary human, and she feels that she is an alien, and she also uses a hat to cover herself. In the subsequent plots, she gradually accepts herself [ Eat Melon ] [ Eat Melon ]

It's a very good book. The main character in the front has boring thoughts like a working man, and the text description also loses its color. When he finds himself and regains his childlike innocence, the whole article is polished a lot. You can clearly see its changes and intentions.

A faint daily life, a timid soul, full of kindness and warmth, releasing his original color little by little, an ordinary original god, learning and growing little by little, looking forward to her true encounter with Keli.

According to the currency system set by the author, our traveler completes 4 commissions every day and gets rough stones, experience books, fine forging ores, and 5 gold molars, which is still in line with the status of a great adventurer. It should have been run through AI.

This daily article is so good [crying][crying][crying][crying], I want to elbow my elbow on the concrete floor on the 21st floor and go into Genshin Impact [crying][crying]

The author's writing is very real and realistic. In fact, for many people, time travel means they either died halfway or died inexplicably. Mondstadt also wrote it very well. There are not only users of the God's Eye in Mondstadt, but also many ordinary people who fight to stay alive. Of course, the special chapter is very interesting.

The big characters are very well written, and I really like reading them. In the future, have you considered letting Rico and the travelers go through many plots together? I think it would be better to have plots. Also, can there be a plot in the future that uses descriptions of food and taste to perform torture? I think this is very interesting.

The author's grasp of the rhythm of the plot and the character of the characters is really good. The growth of each character and the warming of the relationship between each other can be seen with the naked eye. The author didn't really raise a Keli. The description of Keli is really cute in my heart. Each paragraph is sparse and ordinary but supports each other. The plot direction is always beyond my expectation, but it still makes sense when I think about it carefully. All in all, the author uses the framework of Genshin Impact to truly write his own story. This is the kind of fanfic I like to read [laughs]

Keli is very cute, the story is very warm, the writing style is also very good and delicate, and the psychological activities of the protagonist are well described. It made me smile like an aunt, haha. I won't comment on the specific content this time, and I won't spoil any spoilers. See comments on Chapter 103

The writing is very gentle, and compared to a pure fanfic, it is more like writing a piece of luck using a familiar worldview. This kind of writing may not be acceptable to everyone, right? But I love it.

(How come I've finished reading it without realizing it!? Can you give me a few more chapters? I'll do anything, please!) The plot is very warm and daily, and everyone is a good person. I like this very much. The reality is so cruel, why is it still like this on the Internet? Rico, Keli are both cute [adoration][adoration][adoration]

I haven't seen such comfortable writing in a long time, especially the novels under the IP of Genshin Impact. The author writes very well. He doesn't use fancy words or a lot of psychological descriptions, but uses a lot of environmental descriptions and detailed descriptions. Each NPC has its own role, and each NPC has its own role. The writing is quite good, including the portrayal of the protagonist. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very solid, and he has come out with his own style. It is very comfortable to watch. There are no big twists and turns in the story, just some very warm and comfortable fragments of daily life. Anyway, I really like it, and I feel like I have been healed! I am not working at the moment and have little income, but I still want to send some small gifts to the author to express my encouragement. I hope the author will continue writing and never end it. I am looking forward to some of the plot stories in the future. Good luck to the author! [Love][love][love] Unknowingly, I have read Chapter 100. Then, I have never come across this kind of article before, and some of the comments said that it was written by AI. The AI smell is very strong, and I am advised to quit, but I think it is okay, and the plot outline is good. I think the author should control the advancement of the plot with some special chapters, and then like A large number of environments describe these daily life, all of which are rendered by AI. The author also polished it after the completion. I think I read it quite comfortably and didn't feel anything was wrong. I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I think the writing is pretty good. I'll give it five hearts. I'll leave it as it is. If you don't like this one, there's AI. It may be disappointing, but I think as long as you don't look at it with colored glasses, it's still a good article!

So far, it looks like a warm daily article

Flaws are not hidden, I hope such a gentle story can have a happy ending

@Ellic I hope that everyone can call each other Li Ke and Li Ke in the same way. Although I know they are the same person, they are a bit too friendly for a book listener. The story is very good. Keep it up (*˘˘*).｡*♡[Like][Like][Like]

The writing is okay. I don't feel it is like an AI article. It's just that the volume is a bit small. Please update it. The overall score is about 7 to 8.5, Which is relatively good among the fans. But just looking at this is not enough. Let's see what the author writes in the future!

Very comfortable and warm. Everyone is very kind. When I came back from the night shift and read this novel, I felt like my whole body was healed.