I, Qi Tongwei! After Dropping Out, I Entered the Military's Tsinghua

Well written! I always feel weird when watching TV series. Qi Tongwei had a different upbringing experience than him, so it shouldn't have ended like that. Now that I've written him back, let's see what happens next! I hope people will live long and good people will be rewarded!

It's more like the fic of Bingwangwen Fusion. Shuhuang is also pretty good.

Don't be anxious about things that can't be solved today. Because it may still not be solved tomorrow. Look in the mirror more often and you will understand why many things happen. Do you think rich people are happy? You can't even imagine their happiness. The thing I blame myself for is knowing you. These days are confusing and dark. If you survive, there will be another dark day waiting for you. I don't even believe your punctuation marks. Look at your facial features, each has its own characteristics. No one is convinced that anyone has worked hard for so long. If you have some talent, you should have some signs of success. Another day passed. How was your day today? Are your dreams even further away?

There is no long story at the beginning of this novel. It is step by step, starting from school and breaking up with Teacher Liang, then re-reading, and entering college. It feels a bit like suppressing first and then improving, and slowly refines the training plot in the school. Generally speaking, it is okay. The plot needs to be strengthened in the follow-up, but it cannot be written around the school all the time. This will make people a little tired of the text. In addition, it is necessary to strengthen the character creation in various aspects, such as some small tricks of Teacher Liang, the foreshadowing of Hou Zi, and Zhong Xiao's appreciation, etc., To highlight the key points and enrich the colorful plot. This is also a suggestion. It mainly depends on the author's operation.

Although the title of the book is the name of the people, Qi Tongwei is used, but later I saw that Chapter 381 is all about the military camp. Some of the logic in it is a bit too forced to set off the protagonist. The characters in the military camp story should have flesh and blood. This is about to become a super cool article.

A military writer under the guise of a name

It's so beautiful, so interconnected and wonderful.

The protagonist's setting has a kind of out-of-the-box thinking, which is very suitable for the commander. I look forward to it.

Pretty good, outside the box, but not brainless

The content is wonderful and the plot is fascinating, not bad [smile]