After Rebirth as a Cultivator, I Became Longjing's Invincible Crown Prince

This is a rebirth-type urban immortality novel. It begins with the male protagonist Huangfuye being reborn three thousand years ago to make up for the regrets of the past, retravel the past, and meet people from the past again. The killings in the whole game are decisive and have no Madonna, no templates, and no ink. The plot continues to be exciting and exciting. I hope everyone will support it!

I caught up with the latest chapter in one go, and my suggestion is: reduce the part where passers-by ridicule and then show off as a saint. Such a plot should not appear on the young man of the aristocratic family. Even if he is a dandy, it does not reflect the influence of the aristocratic family. It is too boring to watch pretending to be a pig, eating a tiger and getting slapped in the face, which affects the perception. Overall, it's pretty good, with no bad points. You can write more passionate and crushing plots later on, so that you don't get ridiculed all the time and establish the character of the protagonist as a master cultivator.

A very nice and refreshing article about rebirth and cultivating immortality! The male protagonist is reborn, reverses the past, makes up for his regrets, and reunites with his old friends. The overall plot is compact and not watery, the characters are distinct and decisive, there are no cliche and cliche templates, and the setting is novel and creative. The writing is smooth and catchy, and the story is full of tension. I can't get enough of chapter after chapter. It's a strong benefit!

Coming from Brother Ye's previous book, I feel that this one is even more exciting❤️ This is a refreshing article about urban immortality with a super cool pace! The reborn Huangfu Ye, a great master of the Desolate God Realm, returned to his days as a playboy with three thousand years of cultivation. He changed his absurd past life, protected his sister, pampered his wife, and used the power of immortal martial arts to crush all dissatisfaction. The killing is decisive and not frustrating, the whole process of beating the rich and defeating the villain is high-energy, and the multiple heroine settings also have their own charms. The tension is full from the beginning, and it is very enjoyable to watch!

The writing is pretty good and the plot rhythm is okay, [like]

It's pretty (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ It's pretty good among the fairy tales

After reading it for a long time, I would like to say that my personal evaluation is that it is a rare good and refreshing novel among rebirth novels that is not full of ink or flat. The main plot is relatively obscure and tends to be daily refreshing novels with full of emotions. Although the character of some female protagonists is a bit controversial among readers, I personally feel that there is no problem. There are only two chapters in one day. What I felt when I followed it that day was that the main plot was not progressing very fast. When I re-read it, it was very smooth. I can only say, can it be three chapters?

I'll give it five stars first. I think the writing is okay (or if it doesn't work, I'll reduce it one star at a time?) [Thinking] As someone who listens to a book, I ate too much and fell asleep for half an hour. When I woke up and continued listening, I felt fine [Thinking]

T0 level cool article [send heart] [send heart] author, please give me a boost

From the author's last book, it can be seen that the progress has been great, the plot is faster and the pace is more exciting. I support it and hope to work hard.