Evolving the Ultimate Creature Starts by Pretending to Be the God of Creation

Giving five stars does not really mean that this book deserves five stars. Chapter 13: Children, my genes are broken and I am going to die, but I want to speed up the time flow of my world (ok, this is understandable, it is indeed a must-do), After setting up the time acceleration, I was really going to die and I had to go back quickly. So guess what I did next? Yes, because of my little curiosity, even though I am about to die and I have no time, I still want to appreciate my masterpiece. Yes, I can still see the specific behaviors of the creatures in a world where time has accelerated more than 6,000 times. After admiring it, I really don't have time. I'm really dying. I really want to go back! ! But don't worry, I want to take two photos for netizens. It's too late to explain, I'm really, really dying! ! But it doesn't matter, I suddenly found that the photos were incomplete, so I have to take a few more Yes, the above is the biggest problem in Chapter 13. The narrative rhythm is broken, people are almost dead, and you are still here laughing and joking, and while laughing and joking, you hurriedly say that you are almost gone. Either you admire it first and then take pictures, and then rush back for treatment if your genes collapse. Either you go back first and then enjoy and take pictures Or maybe this matter is not that urgent and can be controlled, so I have free time. Instead of saying that the situation was urgent, the next moment I watched the animal world for a while and then enjoyed the beautiful scenery, and then took two photos for netizens. If I didn't think they were good enough, I took another two. . .

The interaction with the forum is really great. This is the most attractive part of this book now. I see many ways from here, such as inviting commenting users to "play a role" to play survival, such as providing wild guesses and then the protagonist verifies and replies. Such interactions are very interesting.

Okay, it has a lot of potential, but it's a bit lacking, not enough to be seen.

Personal feeling is good I like chatting with netizens, so it seems very comfortable. In terms of the plot, I don't have any surprises now. I don't know if there will be any official ones in the future. I personally don't like to contact the official ones because it's hard to describe and easy to collapse. But if the author writes it, I will read it too. So far, I like the shape of the protagonist very much. It looks like a whale or a snake. I like snakes, so I give it a good review. I also read the author's reply. The author said that it was about a few million words and was enjoyable to read, so I gave it a good review. But the author, your word count is really very small, only about 100,000. Generally, not many people will click in. This initial word count is really confusing. Even if you are specifically looking for new books to read, you will usually choose books with 150,000 to 200,000 or more. The author can add more words. By the way, the author, you can actually read these chapters separately. The author usually divides each chapter into about 2,000 words. In this situation, I can only say that it is a bit unpleasant to look at. Only a few pictures are a little different for the senses, although it is not a big deal. There is another person who really feels that the writing is quite good. That's what Tomato is good about. I can always find interesting settings in various articles.

It's so good, I can't believe it's a Tomato novel. It's much better than a certain creation story. Except for Breeding and I Am God, it's the first time I've read a good creation novel. There's nothing wrong with the plot. I just hope the author won't be a eunuch [blowing kiss]

It's quite interesting, and it doesn't have any surprises for me at the moment. However, as for the picture that Chuangshi brother posted on the forum, the current Chuangshi brother posted a picture similar to that of a planet, and then the terrain of this planet seemed to have been artificially changed and created. So for netizens on the Internet, from a scientific point of view, it is that the creation brother on the Internet can change the landscape of a planet with great power. In addition, the pictures sent out can be infinitely magnified for observation. If the equipment can carry it, theoretically even the molecular structure can be seen. It has already exceeded the technology of Blue Star. It feels like the official will start to intervene at this time to guide public opinion and so on. Finally, I look forward to the follow-up plot development. The current number of words is a bit short, not enough to read, eh eh eh (sudden illness). In short, if the author insists on updating, I will definitely keep following it. I hope I won't become an eunuch halfway. Come on, the author is great, I am optimistic about you [Like]

Okay, it's very interesting. It's very refreshing to watch the protagonist chatting in the forum and then being analyzed. This kind of pretentiousness shows off the saintliness.

It's a very good book, but I suggest you add more details to it. For example, why Tianya official posts @ under the forum like ordinary netizens, crying and selling miserably. This kind of classic content should be explained more. For example, the protagonist's ID does not exist and cannot be sent privately. The only way for the official to contact the protagonist is @ under the forum. This also explains why such a big thing, the government official There is no direct intervention, because it is impossible for government officials to @ below like forum officials, because no matter what the government officials say, they are endorsing it and telling netizens that the government has recognized its specialness in disguise. This is because the fuss is not big enough, so the government officials can only use other ordinary netizen accounts to make insinuations. This is my imagination of many classic plots in it, otherwise I can't watch [face covering]

Objectively speaking, the author's writing is okay, but the focus is on the world created by the protagonist. What I want to see is the protagonist adjusting himself step by step to become a true ultimate creature, plus showing off on the earth.

Come on, author, if you can bear to read it, it's really good and a real potential stock. Both the plot rhythm and the writing style are very comfortable, especially the forum section, which is really amazing (of course I can write more about this as much as possible). The author can write according to his own ideas. Come on [angry] give a 5-star review to support [blowing kiss]

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋

The writing is very good. The fun part of the book is basically the interaction between the protagonist and the forum. I hope that this world can be treated as a game later, and then let the forum players play, and let the forum players survive and evolve, so that the protagonist can select high-quality genes, and there is also a biological class setting. It can also be regarded as a semi-fantasy novel based on the biological class setting. Netizens are happy. The first creation world can be designed as a test game, and then the protagonist devours the creatures created by the player to extract genes, which is called a clear archive. At the same time, the protagonist can give a certain initial boost to the next world according to the creature level on one or both sides of the player. This way it will be like a game, and the player will also have the motivation to evolve.

A rare creation text worth encouraging I'm really out of ideas. The God of Creation has turned into an indigenous competition. I can't stand it at all.

I didn't read the science fiction aspect in detail. More attention was focused on the protagonist chatting with netizens. It's very interesting. The author can try to write more plots in this aspect. This kind of feeling of being a saint in front of people is so right.

The book is good, but the daily life is too detailed. I can't write about it even when I'm eating. I'm looking forward to the follow-up interactions and there are more interactions. But for now, it seems that people are relying on their predecessors and being oppressed to evolve. I really want to see the fourth natural disaster and beat the pig's feet with the natives. You can wear a vest. The good things you made are mine.

The world view is huge, and it should take a long time to write, but there are too many foreshadowings, and I will probably need to lay out more than a dozen chapters. The plot themes are quite novel.

The way it is handled, the way the protagonist is handled and the way he thinks are pretty good, but the chapters are a bit off. And if it's the first one a day, how long will it take? Blast update, 50 updates, okay? ( ˝ ᗢ ˝ ) I'm adding a five-star review. I hope I can write more about the forum. The forum is quite nice. And the author himself is quite active, the author himself.

It's nice to look at, but I remember there was a picture that said the creatures in the small world only have instincts and no intelligence? I was a little watery, so I found something to eat and wrote four chapters.

Come on, author! I feel that many people are like me and come here for the forum. I really want to see the follow-up exchanges between Brother Chuangshi and Sha Diao netizens. For example, if the protagonist finally discovers that there is a sprout of civilization in the cabin, how will he post about it then: "What should I do if I find that there seems to be someone growing up in my house?!"

There are so few π_π. I want to support books, but I will be exhausted. I will work hard to update them. I really hope that one day the author will update one or two hundred chapters so that I can read them all at once (｡- .•)

How would Brother Chuangshi evaluate yourself [laughing evilly]

The writing is very good and it has potential. The author said he would write 4 million words.

In terms of reading experience and plot, the first part looked like a manual, dry and dry. Some of the articles were one paragraph per page, which didn't give me a very good reading experience (after all, I turned pages). It looked dull. There was less plot extracted from a bunch of text, and there was too much foreshadowing, so I couldn't see much of the plot. At present, it is still readable among Tomatoes, there are not many poisonous points, and there are not many articles. Let's see what happens next. As for the protagonist, I hope that he will grow up in the later stages and not have the body of an adult and the mind of a child. There is no problem in the early stage. After all, the protagonist was just a young social animal before his death and was still in an "ignorant" stage. However, it is best for the protagonist's vision, knowledge and thinking to grow later, and not to be passive every time he encounters genetic collapse and related problems. We can also maximize the use of the inheritance that the protagonist has received. It is best to make full use of the knowledge there to expand the protagonist's knowledge reserve and vision. It does not require that the protagonist can understand everything, but at least he can operate the equipment well. Also, don't be like some creation texts. On the surface, they are Gods of creation, but in reality they are just mortals with the authority of God, who only enjoy themselves there. I just don't know whether the protagonist, the Creator God, is positioned as an observer or a direct intervener. If he was a direct intervener, I would run away. I have seen too many Creator Gods end up interfering too much in civilization, and I am really scared of them. After all, I also really like to read the creation text, and I have tasted countless stones here at Tomato, so I hope you won't feed me stones later [laughter] I haven't read much lately, so I can only read yours to pass the time. I hope I can make some progress in the future, if I don't get stuck later. After all, it's not easy for the author to code, so give him four stars to encourage him [Cool]

Come on, the author is great

So how does the protagonist plan to solve the collapse_(•̀ω•́ ‖∠)_

It's great. I love reading this kind of book. This book perfectly hit my point of interest. I highly recommend it [like][like][like] How should I put it? This book gave me a very different feeling, which is not the feeling that these Tomato books can give me. This alone has surpassed most Tomato authors. Come on, author, don't stop updating.

I give you 5 stars, come on

Persistence is victory, author, come on [laughing evilly]

The author is great, please hurry up and learn the relevant knowledge. I have a hunch that this book will be a sacred text if it doesn't collapse.

Personally, I think it's okay, at least it's much better than other cancer creators in Tomato. I always like the whole thing about destroying cancer and it can't be cured.