Evolving into the Ultimate Lifeform, Starting by Pretending to Be the Creator

Giving five stars does not really mean that this book deserves five stars. Chapter 13: Children, my genes are broken and I am going to die, but I want to speed up the time flow of my world (ok, this is understandable, it is indeed a must-do), After setting up the time acceleration, I was really going to die and I had to go back quickly. So guess what I did next? Yes, because of my little curiosity, even though I am about to die and I have no time, I still want to appreciate my masterpiece. Yes, I can still see the specific behaviors of the creatures in a world where time has accelerated more than 6,000 times. After admiring it, I really don't have time. I'm dying. I really want to go back!! But don't worry, I want to take two photos for netizens. It's too late to explain, I'm really, really dying!! But it doesn't matter, I suddenly found that the photos were incomplete, so I have to take a few more Yes, the above is the biggest problem in Chapter 13. The narrative rhythm is broken, people are almost dead, and you are still here laughing and joking, and while laughing and joking, you hurriedly say that you are almost gone. Either you admire it first and then take pictures, and then rush back for treatment if your genes collapse. Either you go back first and then enjoy and take pictures Or maybe this matter is not that urgent and can be controlled, so I have free time. Instead of saying that the situation was urgent, the next moment I watched the animal world for a while and then enjoyed the beautiful scenery, and then took two photos for netizens. If I didn't think they were good enough, I took another two. . .

The interaction with the forum is really great. This is the most attractive part of this book now. I see many ways from here, such as inviting commenting users to "play a role" to play survival, such as providing wild guesses and then the protagonist verifies and replies. Such interactions are very interesting.

It's so good, I can't believe it's a Tomato novel. It's much better than a certain creation story. Except for Breeding and I Am God, it's the first time I've read a good creation novel. There's nothing wrong with the plot. I just hope the author won't be a eunuch 😘

Personal feeling is good I like chatting with netizens, so it seems very comfortable. In terms of the plot, I don't have any surprises now. I don't know if there will be something official in the future. I personally don't like to contact the official because it is difficult to describe and easy to collapse. But if the author writes it, I will also read it. So far, I like the shape of the protagonist very much. It looks like a whale or a snake. I like snakes, so I give it a good review. I also read the author's reply. The author said that it was about a few million words and was enjoyable to read, so I gave it a good review. But the author, your word count is really very small, only about 100,000. Generally, not many people will click in. This initial word count is really confusing. Even if you are specifically looking for new books to read, you will usually choose books with 150,000 to 200,000 or more. The author can add more words. By the way, the author, you can actually read these chapters separately. The author usually divides each chapter into about 2,000 words. In this situation, I can only say that it is a bit unpleasant to look at. Only a few pictures are a little different for the senses, although it is not a big deal. There is another person who really feels that the writing is quite good. Tomato is good at this. I can always find interesting settings in various articles.

Okay, it has a lot of potential, but it's a bit lacking, not enough to be seen.

Okay, it's very interesting. It's very refreshing to watch the protagonist chatting in the forum and then being analyzed. This kind of pretentiousness shows off the saintliness.

It's quite interesting, and it doesn't have any surprises for me at the moment. However, as for the picture that Chuangshi brother posted on the forum, the current Chuangshi brother posted a picture similar to that of a planet, and then the terrain of this planet seemed to have been artificially changed and created. So for netizens on the Internet, from a scientific point of view, it is that the creation brother on the Internet can change the landscape of a planet with great power. In addition, the pictures sent out can be infinitely magnified for observation. If the equipment can carry it, theoretically even the molecular structure can be seen. It has already exceeded the technology of Blue Star. It feels like the official will start to intervene at this time to guide public opinion and so on. Finally, I look forward to the follow-up plot development. The current word count is a bit short, not enough to read, eh eh eh (sudden illness). In short, if the author insists on updating, I will definitely keep following it. I hope I don't become an eunuch halfway. Come on, the author is great, I am optimistic about you👍

Objectively speaking, the author's writing is okay, but the focus is on the world created by the protagonist. What I want to see is the protagonist adjusting himself step by step to become a true ultimate creature, plus showing off on the earth.

It's a very good book, but I suggest you add more details to it. For example, why Tianya official posts @ under the forum like ordinary netizens, crying and selling miserably. This kind of classic content should be explained more. For example, the protagonist's ID does not exist and cannot be sent privately. The only way for the official to contact the protagonist is @ under the forum. This also explains why such a big thing, the government official There is no direct intervention, because it is impossible for government officials to @ below like forum officials, because no matter what the government officials say, they are endorsing it and telling netizens that the government has recognized its specialness in disguise. This is because the fuss is not big enough, so the government officials can only use other ordinary netizen accounts to make insinuations. This is my imagination of many classic plots in it, otherwise I can't watch 🤦

Come on, author, if you can bear to read it, it's really good and a real potential stock. Both the plot rhythm and the writing style are very comfortable, especially the forum section, which is really amazing (of course I can write more about this as much as possible). The author can write according to his own ideas. Come on 😠 give a 5-star review to support 😘