Seventeen Years Old, a Student, a Professional Magical Girl

It's very good-looking😦, but there are too many scenes of good brothers. I hope it can be reduced a little bit in the future, so that it doesn't look really good, or the good brothers can be turned into good sisters, otherwise the foreshadowing will be in vain...

T0 is true in the new book of the male channel. The main plot is more daily. If you want to see a river of blood, you can go out and turn left. But as the saying goes, the plainness is the truth. The author's writing style is very good, each character's personality is very distinct, the dialogue is generally serious with a bit of humor, and does not make jokes (this really beats Tomato by 80%), and the rhythm is very steady. In the Magical Girl section, I finally saw a story that is not about a retired magical girl being discovered and busted. It is rare and gratifying. If it doesn't explode, it will definitely be rated 9. If there is a breakthrough point in the plot, it may be rated 9.5.

It's good to watch, and the interaction between the protagonist and Kyubey is very interesting, like a quarrel between old friends. The shortcoming is that the text has little tension, and there is a sense of sadness of being a social animal under the pressure of life. The character's words are very concise and not verbose, but they also lack a bit of human touch. Overall, the future is bright, author, cheers! !

The cross talk with Qiubi was very interesting and interesting, and the overall writing was very fluent. It was rated as good-looking. However, Jiang Ping, especially the arrangement of the chapters where his original identity left the country, those who knew he was writing about brothers, and those who didn't knew thought he was writing. . . ,👿

Support meow, it's rare to find a novel in which the relationship between men and women after transformation is normal (ps: maybe it's because I haven't read enough). It's really not easy to see such pure single-changing novels in this era when single-changing novels are dominated by skin-changing female videos. I have read less than 50 chapters so far. Finally, I hope this book will get better and better I don't read much and don't comment often. If there are any omissions or questions, please forgive me. The above is purely my personal opinion. If you don't like it, please don't comment.

The protagonist's arrogance is well known to everyone. But it's not like Japan's big opening and closing, which looks like a knife with a sharp mouth and a tofu heart. And also very comfortable getting along with other people. It is a high-quality daily article.

It's also a good food. Daily Wenxiancao, 4.5⭐. It doesn't get a perfect score because the combat aspect is really not very good. In urban daily life (Magical Girl + Transformer, protagonist Loli), the daily writing is very good, and the various daily dialogues are also very interesting. Just read it. But here are some people's poisonous points: before the protagonist actually became a woman, the protagonist's best friend (male) had a slightly larger role, but was hidden by the author later (some people don't want a male to be involved, although I don't really care, as long as I control that line)

Good writing style The conversation between humans and cats is still very interesting. In the end, just don't change your identity. This is what I want😋

When I opened this work, I was firmly attracted by its delicate narrative and full-bodied characters. The author uses plain but highly contagious words to build a vivid story world. There is no deliberate sensationalism, but the power to touch people's hearts is hidden everywhere. The characters in the book are vivid and three-dimensional. Their struggles, choices and growth are close to life and thought-provoking. It seems that you can see the shadows of yourself and the people around you. The plot is extravagant and relaxed, with ups and downs and gentle healing details. The logic is smooth and the aftertaste is long. The work not only tells a story, but also contains thoughts on human nature, emotions and life. It is immersive to read and you can't help but think about it after closing the book. It is a masterpiece worth reading carefully.

After reading Chapter 40, the previous plot is okay. I slowly change in my daily life and then fight monsters. The protagonist's personality is cold on the outside and warm on the inside, and a bit arrogant. The conversations and quarrels with Kyubey are very interesting, just like the feeling of being with a particularly good friend. But it may be personal reasons. After reading it, I feel that the protagonist has gradually changed in his life since he changed. It was just me and Kyubey who were indifferent to the people around me, and after the complete transformation in Chapter 40, the protagonist chose to hide it, the same old routine. Although the protagonist thought of confessing, the reasons for giving up the confession did not convince me. Inexplicably, I also didn't like being like this with my good brother. Overall, it was good. So far, five-star praise, farewell! [Salute]

In fact, I don't really like writing long reviews. The author's writing in this book is actually pretty good, and the writing is okay, and the bickering is actually quite interesting, so I'm willing to read on. But there are still some problems, so I give it four stars. 1. It feels like there are only a few supporting characters in one chapter, which is a bit inexplicably spacey and feels weird. 2. The daily routine does not need to be limited to bickering. For example, the protagonist's school can have a school sports meeting, or become a student representative based on test results, to guide the new students, etc., Or some opportunities can be introduced into daily live broadcasts, the audience can make fun of them, or something about the admission of new students. 2. However, the age of the protagonist is actually not easy to introduce. After all, the college entrance examination is coming soon. You can write something that will make you a blockbuster in the college entrance examination, a media interview with the number one scholar live broadcast, etc. After all, the previous protagonist can answer questions fluently without having to study. It is normal to write a score that will gradually increase. You can even introduce some representatives after the exam and go to college. 3. It's okay to introduce some passers-by, for daily fun, such as playing games, reading novels about gods like Shui Qun, etc. 4. The combat description and length are actually fine according to the author's current situation, and the look and feel are okay. After all, they are more daily oriented. In fact, the main thing is the feeling. For example, before Jiang Ping, I originally thought that the author wanted to describe the inspiration and opportunity to turn him into a magical girl. But in the beginning, there was a lot of description, and in the end, there was only the dialogue of the junior, and he almost didn't even appear. It felt very strange, but after writing it, it suddenly became marginal? In fact, it would be better to add supporting characters to the outline and add more dialogues between the characters. After all, after looking at the back, I feel like I have been following that person (it seems to be Blue Star) in daily life. It feels weird, but after all, it is actually not bad. To sum up, four stars is actually quite objective to me.

It's a very nice daily style, but the transition at the beginning is too slow, there are too many scenes with Lao Jiang, and later on there is no news about Lao Jiang at all, and I'm a bit worried about gains and losses. 🥚Overall, it's very good and worth watching [Like] In short Forgot the previous one Forgot the latter one When to use the space👿 (To be honest, this is much better than the author's previous book [laughs])

I have been reading novels for several years, but this is my first time writing a review. Originally I was leaning towards the literature department, but this novel was so unique that I stayed. Unlike the first half, the interactive posts in the second half made me feel the warmth. The writing is mundane, the interactions are fixed, but the emotions are delicate. Lingling is very similar to i person's thoughts. They always say that I am too heavy, but to me, I am the only one who cherishes me. Xing Lan is very lively, which neutralizes the damn social and animalistic taste in life, and regains sight of the purity of the past. Kyubey seems to be lacking, but in fact, he has taken the place of your brother, the sweet and aggressive person in your daily life, but he cares about you at critical moments from time to time. Isn't this a beautiful utopia? The difference is that these ordinary fights come from life, but life can never reach it [crying]

It's a good watch, but I haven't finished it yet. Although there were too many plots involving Jiang Wen in the beginning, which made it look like he was getting married, other people said that there was no such problem later on. But this Lin Xi has no sense of boundaries, and the protagonist's actions are directly led by her at this time. At least it seems too uncomfortable for me. After watching a little part of the plot, the Crimson King skipped her. Of course, this is Lin Xi's first plot. I don't know whether the rest of the story is good or not. I will continue to watch the rest.

This book describes the protagonist's journey of becoming a woman very well, absolutely at the top level of Tomato. It is also very thoughtful about the construction of the magic circle. It starts from the most basic elements. It is very friendly to readers like me who like magic. I highly recommend it!

It's a very interesting book, but some of the latest chapters are a bit too routine. Personally, I think Lin Xi is a bit too clingy and noisy. The interaction between the protagonist and Lin Xi in the latest chapter is too much, which gives me a feeling of change. It would be great if the heroine can continue to focus on the development of the magical girl. Anyway, it is still very interesting. Come on, author.

You can consider writing it like a special photography unit drama A large branch plot, interspersed with a little crisis in daily life, showing some simple truths, reflecting the character arc of the character, plus a little bit of the protagonist's invincibility when saving the scene, and a happy ending. It will feel great 👍

Very beautiful, Chen De is the woman who can be my mother [laughs] If the author reduced Chen De's height from 1.8 Meters to 1.5 Meters, aren't you afraid that he will come out and elbow you one day? [Thinking] Also, Chen De is a tsundere magic girl with a hard mouth and a soft heart. Although it's nice to see Chen De always being manipulated, sometimes, I still want to see her stand up, so can the author strengthen Chen De a little bit🤔

I've finished reading Chapter 112, and I haven't updated it yet. This book is pretty good, and the plot is more of a daily series. Compared with other magical girl books, others are like the later period, and this one is like the early stage. There are not many monsters in this book, and the public does not know the existence of magical girls. The magical girl organization's control over magical girls is also relatively loose, and the plot does not have much excitement and is relatively dull. There are some puzzling points in this book. One is that the protagonist has become a magical girl. You can make a lot of money just by taking this profession. Later, the body begins to transform into the state after the transformation. In order to avoid being discovered by others, the protagonist does not drop out of school and plans to change his identity and continue school. The second point is that so far there is very little description of the Magical Girl Organization, as if it does not exist. The map is currently limited to the city where the protagonist is located, and the world view has not yet been developed.

It looks okay, the daily bickering is really interesting, but one thing is that it is acceptable to have a large proportion of daily life, but it cannot be all daily life, so when you look at it later, it will be a bit like a running account. Would it be better to insert one or two big events appropriately?

A very comfortable story, plain and simple, but very happy. The dialogue between the protagonist and the cat is really interesting - are you a cat? I am www when needed In short, as long as the author doesn't turn into a black man, he will keep chasing him~

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The main character and Qiubey do most of the crosstalk. Because the two of them said that cross talk accounts for about 80%, they said there is nothing to poison. I don't know if it's funny or not, but I can chew it when I'm bored. When the background sound can be heard, it's okay [Like]

It's light but depressing, the plot is funny but not laughable, and it gave me the feeling of being choked and unable to breathe. It has to be said that it is remarkable, but the feeling of being chased by something and having to work hard has overshadowed the original funny and lightheartedness.

After watching it for a while, I really like this way of bickering and giving information. It's very interesting. The protagonist's appearance of being honest is also very entertaining. The protagonist who is willing to do anything for money is quite real, isn't it? [Laughing]

I'm currently on Chapter 203. Personal opinion: The plot of this novel mainly uses the protagonist's quarrel with him as the main transition in each chapter. The content of each quarrel is not repeated, and it feels a bit like reality, which is not very understandable. This novel is mainly dull. As the title says, there are basically no battles, just some daily trivial matters. A high school student who accidentally became a magical girl opened up a new world after meeting her contract Scoopy. I have seen too many magical girls fighting life and death, so this is not bad. Here comes five stars!

It looks good, can there be less plot about good brothers?

It looks good, I like it, the interaction between the protagonist, his brother and the cat is very good, but I would like to ask the author when the brother's side will be exposed, or will the brother also become a magical girl? Looking at it now, the uncomfortable part is that Hakimi's behavior towards the protagonist is a bit too much. Personally, I thought it was a little bit poisonous, but it was good to make up for it for a specific reason later (no spoilers for the specifics). One more thing, it feels like the protagonist is often under a lot of pressure and is often chased by something. This kind of writing gives me a sense of urgency and can appropriately increase the protagonist's daily rest. (I can't tell you the specifics, the author just wants to enjoy it)

The plot and writing are both good, and the author is a veteran in this area. It just often feels like the main plot hole has been dug, but he just wants to write another thirty or forty chapters to whet your appetite. [Cover face]

It's a daily novel, but the protagonist's daily performance is very urgent... In each unit, the protagonist quarrels with Hadjimi Chubby and is defeated by the bounty. After a while, several new magical girls who have no apparent use were added. At present, it feels that the only role is to add an extra cup of milk tea every day...