By Mistake, I Drank the Wine of Immortality

Is this creating a path to immortality? Why did Dao Ji pull out the big world and the big world of cultivating immortals?

Overall, it was good. In the middle part, I thought a harem was going to happen, but luckily I didn't bring up a harem (because I didn't like it). However, the chapter on Lu Yu's law of time and space is a little confusing, and it is a bit complicated to read, but it is quite exciting, and it also confirms the sentence "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world." However, I still have some doubts about Xiao Hui. Although Xiao Hui is not a human, she does not practice like Lu Yu or make breakthroughs in other ways, which is a bit abrupt. Moreover, her realm is almost the same as Lu Yu's. Maybe I don't feel receptive. Overall, it's pretty good. Keep up the good work (don't start a harem). You can also feel the sadness of lifespan theory by reading this book. Keep going, keep going, keep going. Just my personal opinion, don't comment if you don't like it. The gift will continue, and I hope the author will work hard. I thought it was going to be about the secular world, but I still have a little budget to go to the world of cultivating immortals.

It seems that the author was still affected by the comments. You used a lot of pen and ink to describe the two steps of the protagonist from nourishing Qi to building foundation and forming elixir. I give it a thumbs up. It was well written. Although the setting is immortality, the protagonist cannot create the Taoist tradition by himself, so he needs to travel around the world to confirm his Taoist tradition and start from there. It's a pity that after forming the elixir, the author seemed to have changed people, the plot changed rhythm, and it started to be like what the comment section wanted, and he suddenly became a loose immortal. This is actually denying his previous self. The setting of Xiao Hui after his transformation is not very pleasing to me. It seems arrogant and ignorant. This novel seems to be at an advanced stage, and there are still holes that may not be filled in. Why is Xiao Hui so fast as the protagonist, just because he ate the protagonist's red fruit dripping with blood? Not explained clearly. I guessed correctly that the Taoist Scriptures of Immortality should only reach the foundation building chapter. So how will the protagonist's Taoism be passed down?

The author must not be a eunuch. The beginning is a bit dull. After about twenty chapters, it starts to get better. It is a rare masterpiece on Tomato. I have read more than fifty chapters so far. The author must not be a eunuch.

It's not bad. The first few chapters are very similar to Yuan Ji's style. It's easy to read and very comfortable.

It's very well written, why doesn't anyone read it?

It's so good, I finished it in one go. Come on, author, just don't stop updating🥺

This is different from the fantasy novels I have read before. The author's writing style and logic are very good and it is worth reading.

Not bad, the protagonist is the one who leads the way and suspects that this non-existent system is actually a plug-in created by his future self.

Very well written, written with care, how can AI compare with it?