Survival Diary

It is a farming novel with an unexpectedly smooth plot and hook. The basic plot can be read without any problem. But there are still some problems: 1. There are words for disobeying women (similar to his mother) 2. In fact, the perspective is basically interchangeable between the male and female protagonists. I can accept the farming style. 3. The author may have been too busy and didn't check it very much. Some places are repeated, probably at least ten places. It is recommended that it be revised again. 4. Character issues. As of the latest chapter, the personalities of everyone in the mountains have basically converged. The uncle must be taciturn, the aunt must be open-minded and love to laugh, the half-year-old must be either expressionless or talkative, and the child must be naughty, which means that there are five skins shared by more than 20 people. What I can't understand the most is the few women and girls who were snatched away by bandits. Their stories are actually very capable if they are well written. It is touching. There is nothing wrong with a girl gradually getting out of PTSD, and a woman going from abandoning herself to living. This way of writing not only increases the readability, but also deepens and enriches the core of the characters. However, the best part of writing is taken away by the author. After entering the mountains, these women and girls seem to suddenly get rid of the shadow. The girls laugh and play, and the women chatter, completely losing the essence of the characters. It is a pity. Comprehensive 4 bar

I particularly like this kind of story about land reclamation, and the character setting is very reasonable. There are men, women, old and young, each performing their own duties. The common goal and pursuit is to survive. In order to survive, first seek wealth before seeking good. Take it step by step and slowly support the author.

Why is the rating so low? I think it is very well written. It touches on the hardships in the last years of the dynasty and the small blessings in life, and the characters are well created. In fact, I originally wanted to give it a 4. After all, it is an AI novel, but the rating is too low. I want to improve it.

I really enjoyed reading it, keep it up, and give five stars to the author, thank you for your hard work!

It's really beautiful, real and delicate, both bitter and sweet. Ordinary people without golden fingers, who are kind and lovely, help each other to survive, and will not hesitate to help others when they have enough energy. The author's writing skills are also good, and he talks eloquently. It's beautiful!

The plot has ups and downs, the characters are full of characters, it's a good book and worth reading!

The author's descriptions are very detailed and the pace of the book is also very good. If you like watching this type of movie, this is a good choice.

It feels like Peach Blossom Spring, the life in a humble house

This book lacks the plot of a novel and is more like a life essay. The author's writing style is good, the description details are meticulous, the atmosphere of fireworks is strong, the sense of substitution is strong, and the character creation is well controlled. Personally, I think it lacks the interest of the storyline.

He writes well but doesn't like to talk much. Will it become a small village and gradually grow in size? In the future, he will grow some food and Meng Qiao will become the village chief.