The Substitute Marriage at the Beginning Is 70: the Cold-Faced Officer Pinches the Waist and Favors Her

I feel that I am a somewhat picky reader. I have only given five-star reviews to three books on Tomato for so long, and this is the third one. I have been looking forward to seeing some high-quality novels on Tomato, not the kind of mindless novels-facial characters + routine conflicts, with logic and interest. I have only read a dozen chapters of this novel, and it has already met my expectations. Although there are no obvious fights, the author tries his best to ambush the struggle between the bad guy (maybe a spy?) And the male protagonist, while the female protagonist silently accumulates strength. The writing style of this article is very delicate. The current main line is that a mental patient is recovering bit by bit. It is quite professional, but it is actually a bit verbose. In many places, information that has already been explained is repeated, and the author may have forgotten it. The male protagonist first gave a preview of the future. The early stage is full of touching details. The female protagonist is very rational and a typical professional. It is very good [like]. I look forward to the subsequent plot...

A new direction for the military category has emerged! After reading all the female military videos, I was the first to stay away from the battlefield and get involved with the organization. She used all the dirty tricks to wake up the little girl who had watched too many silly and sweet videos. Understand the process and use the process. If someone crosses the rules and regulations, you must analyze the disadvantages of the violation and know how to expose it. Feel calm text.

The writing is so good! Not overly flashy, not childish or mediocre. Moreover, the author has written a lot of relevant knowledge in great detail, and there is no deliberate female competition in it. Both the heroine and the hero are great! I don't deliberately write about love. In the long flow, I can see that their relationship is gradually warming up. Only when you have a country can you have a family. The big love is wrapped in their little love. There is no explanation in many places... It can be seen that AI is used. Overall pretty good

This book looks very good, but it feels very touching, and the subject matter is also very good, heroes of the country and the country, and psychiatrists. The author's descriptions are amazing. Although the narrative is straightforward, it feels very powerful. There is a feeling that people are now trying to make up for the regrets of the past. How can I put it, it is obviously very daily life, but there are many things, that is, the characters are very full, and the only shortcoming is that it is not finished [face covering]

To be honest, this novel is really well written, and I feel that many of the issues related to post-traumatic stress in soldiers are very professionally written. Moreover, the rhythm of the whole book is very well grasped, and many plots fall into many small points, making the entire characters and events very three-dimensional. The details are also described very well. It's better than many chronicle novels, at least it's not too "rushed". I tied it in one go. Personally, I feel that this could be a drama about soldiers' post-traumatic stress reaction under the guidance of professionals. It's really good. Moreover, the emotional sources of the male and female protagonists are very specific, and you can clearly understand where they came from, not in a fast food style. At this time, it is really amazing to see such a novel. I feel like it can't just be called a novel.

This is a very high-level novel, as if the author is from the military area. It is written very professionally and vividly shows the good and evil of human nature. In that environment, the identity of the evil person is overwhelming. The male and female protagonists are in a difficult situation, but they are also very smart, fighting wits and courage, and fighting. The friendship between soldiers made me feel distressed when I watched it. The war was far more terrible than I imagined. It was too realistic. I felt uncomfortable watching it and felt very powerless. I didn't dare to be distracted. The heroine had just calmed down for a few minutes, and the next plan followed closely. It is a book worth reading! A book like this deserves full marks

I have read too many mindless articles, and I have to read the paragraphs and comments to understand the deeper meaning of this article. It can be seen that the author has a profound background in psychology, and what he wants to write about is the pain that has been ignored in that little-known history. I feel sad after reading it. It is so good, so good, so good, I hope the teacher can add more! !

It is really well written. It can be seen that the author has research and even attainments in psychology. He uses delicate and touching writing to describe how the heroine pulled a great soldier who also suffered huge psychological trauma from the "smog". This process is so professional that it makes people feel reassured and warm that makes people want to cry. The hero can be called The iron hero, despite being devastated by psychological trauma, still maintains his military character and kind-hearted life background. He struggles hard to save himself, which makes people almost cry. The novel's group portraits are also well described. Although the villain is hateful, there is also warmth around the protagonist. The old Zhou and his wife are straightforward and upright, and the timid and kind-hearted Xiao Sun... The author, please give me more encouragement!

Okay, characterization, full marks. Full marks for plot. I don't know how to describe the environment specifically, but full marks. First, let's talk about the author's narrative style. Simple and straightforward, a psychological description with little emotional fluctuations, a minimalist doer. But there is never a shortage of moving words, and understanding their emotions is the gift the author gives us. One hundred points. Second, let's talk about the story. The mission of the heroine, who I don't like that much, is to save the hero. However, the male protagonist is worth it. A soldier who was born and died in the hail of bullets. He had fulfilled his duty in the past and stepped into the Palace of Hell due to the calculations of some people. His dead comrades became a shadow that lingered all day long. He suffered from war PTSD. His rare sobriety made him afraid to speak. He could only pretend to be crazy and act stupid in order to wait for the right time to get justice for his dead comrades. It seems that so much has happened in the short time since the heroine came. So how will the former warrior who was either really crazy or pretending to be crazy face those people? After he regained consciousness, he still chose to go to the battlefield. It was worth saving him. He never forgot his original intention and kept his mission in mind. One hundred points. Third, let's talk about the heroine. Professional, brave, calm and patriotic. One hundred percent 💯. I also like the supporting characters in it. These people can't kill the real gangsters, but Old Zhou will tell the heroine that I saw that person's shoes next to the gangster group. Sister Zhou told the heroine that I heard some voices. Comrade Song said that he saw a person. Sister-in-law Chen and her husband saw a document. There is also the old director who can write the case, the nurse Li Zhi who was pushed into the ditch, and the family members who sent cabbage and rice. One hundred percent 💯 In fact, at the beginning, I felt that the author's narrative was really backstage, but it was not so rigid, nor did it make any mistakes, and it was also very touching in terms of emotions. Not like a newbie.

I have seen the retelling of Huo's scene after the identification, and Huo finally woke up. But when I read it, I saw that the article was not finished yet. 😮‍💨I was just a little afraid that I would finish reading it all at once. Should I wait? Come on, author, it's so beautiful. I know why the score is low. The more I go on, the more I feel that there is a lot of text. I don't know whether it is intentional or because the writing style is limited. There are a lot of psychological activities and small action details in the middle of a sentence. The more I watch, the more tired I am. The plot is okay, but...

There are some places that are not explained, such as why the male protagonist went "crazy" and was placed in a camp instead of with his family, why the female protagonist was chosen to take care of him, and why the villain placed Liu Dongming under surveillance at a nearby post office instead of simply causing an accidental death and destroying witnesses... Except for some plots that make people confused, the writing style is generally calm, which is a breath of fresh air in the Tomato era.

The writing habits are too obvious. The sentence pattern "It's not... But..." Appears very frequently. It's fine at first, but as I read later, it becomes more and more repetitive and gives me a feeling of AI. I found that the author wants the work to be smooth and natural, and a very important point is not to have too many repeated sentence patterns. I wrote this comment as a record to remind myself, and to give the author some advice, because I think the topic selection, the description of some details, and the progression of the plot are very good. It is a pity to abandon the article due to my penmania (a word I invented randomly, haha, analogy to my mouth habit). The article needs various languages ​​​​and sentence patterns for different scenes. Relying too much on one description is like having only one kind of fish in the sea, which is boring and hurts the eyes. If you read this kind of sentence pattern too often, you will have a sense of "justification" and "emphasis." The repetition of descriptions will even bring about a sense of repetition of the plot. They may be two different things in the plot, but they give people the same feeling. I hope the author will write better and better, and good luck.

This is not a love story in the secular sense. The author writes about flesh-and-blood soldiers and doctors. When I read that he faced the pain of memories and clearly reported the names of his ten fallen comrades to Wen, I seemed to be being healed and walked out of the darkness where the hero was stabbed in the back. I can't help but read it to see if it is the finished novel. Unfortunately, it is still being serialized. I hope the author writes well and is impressed by your words.

The writing is very detailed, including the development process of the male protagonist recovering from severe PTSD to a normal person, the heroine's calmness and calmness in the face of complex changes after entering this world, to the tenderness that the hero gradually regains and relies on, the treacherous and complex politics of that era, the delicate emotional changes between the two, the male protagonist's dark belly and the female protagonist's shyness, vivid images, good-looking, good-looking!

I haven't finished reading it yet, so I can't help but leave a comment! I really think the heroine is so great and amazing! I admire you very much. The male protagonist is also great and has endured a lot! They have endured a lot from each other! I cried while watching it! [Crying] No matter what happens next, this book is very, very good to me! The heroine and hero are very charming, and the plot is very good! One word! Good! Bitter melons should be sweeter! [Almost crying] You two are really good to each other, very good. I hope it will get better and better in the future. [Crying] You deserve everything.

This novel's depiction of stress disorder is extremely professional, with rigorous details and reality, without any suspended fabrication or routine description. The emotions in the full text are sincere and delicate, and they progress layer by layer. The characters' psychological struggles and emotional changes are vividly described and have a strong sense of immersion. The overall writing style is solid and of high quality, and the text is gentle and powerful. It can withstand repeated reading and careful consideration. It is a high-quality work that is worth calming down and slowly pondering over.

Highly recommended! I was almost put off by the title of the book. I didn't expect to see such a good work on Tomato. The author should have strong professional knowledge. Although there is a minor supporting character in the front whose behavioral logic is a bit strange, I completely forgot about her when I saw the main plot. It's really well written. It's rare to see this kind of work that focuses on soldiers' PTSD. I look forward to the subsequent plot.

I came across this book by chance on the recommendation page. The plot is fascinating at first, the pace is moderate, and the details are well described. However, after reading 300 chapters, there are still a lot of detailed descriptions. Every plot seems to be evenly divided, and the descriptions are extremely detailed. The pace is not as good as at the beginning. It takes too long to digest, and the eyes are tired and the heart is tired. The recently updated content uses several chapters to investigate and interrogate Qian Zhongbo. Is it too lengthy? For me, there are too many details, and the greed for big things and the pursuit of perfection makes my memory of this part even more blurry.

It's so good to watch. This kind of plot line and emotional line are both integrated. The plot is ups and downs, interlocking, and the logical chain is perfect. The treasure story simply stepped on the apex of my heart! ! ! ! There is no loss in investing, but the pit is too shallow [crying] [crying]

It is very well written and different from other period novels written by Tomato. This book is real, the plot is smooth, and the content is logically advanced. There is no halo of male or female protagonists. All the characters are three-dimensional, not just good guys and bad guys. The methods used in the healing process are also scientifically based. So far, it is a good novel.

The author uses calm, almost indifferent words, but he writes a heroine who is as tenacious as the wind, good at planning, delicate, and compassionate, and a male protagonist who is different from the usual routine. It is so beautiful. However, it seems that part of it is AI

The ai is very well adjusted, hh, you can still vaguely see the ai flavor. But the plot is okay

Niu13plus has a very good combination of psychology and Tianshuang online articles. It can be said that it uses the favorite way of a lazy person like me to subtly input psychological knowledge. It is really a rare and good work [Like]

This book uses classic cases to dismantle psychological concepts, explain in detail the definition of psychological emergency response, and also completely outlines the complete process of scientific intervention and guidance when facing such psychologically stressed people. The author's writing style is very delicate, and the characters' micro-expressions, inner struggles and subconscious activities are laid out in a large space. The whole text closely focuses on the analysis of psychological events. The atmosphere of the text is plain and warm, and the overall reading makes people feel a little depressed.

The novel is well written and the author has strong professional knowledge. The fictional history extended from the original historical background also includes professional knowledge of psychology and clinical medicine. . . . Surprise. . . . Except the title of the book really doesn't sound very good. The author is awesome!

A very special chronicle. The male and female protagonists do not fall in love right from the beginning, there is no golden finger, and they do not live a good life with plenty of food and fish to eat and drink every day. Some of them are very detailed characterizations, very real and alternative aspects of military relations of that era, and subtle emotional expressions between the male and female protagonists. It is currently being serialized, but after reading this, you can guess that the plot of the entire book revolves around the mystery: what exactly happened when the male protagonist went to the battlefield, who caused his death, the true identity of the female protagonist's parents and sister, and their relationship with that incident. The subsequent unwritten story is a bit too long, and there is no sense of surprise, so I don't want to continue reading it.

It's really great. I finished it in one day. It's not enough. The plot is not draggy at all, and it's not clumsy at all. As a long-time reader who has watched it for six or seven years, I really recommend it. I failed, and it became more and more ugly and stiff. I kept writing about medicinal materials. Also, wasn't my roommate very defensive at first? Then why did my roommate know everything? [Awkward laugh]

The writing is very detailed, and it also allows people who read this book to know about PTSD and those who have experienced war and endured trauma. It is very delicate and touching. I really hope that everyone in need can be lucky enough to meet a Wen Zhiyi who belongs to her.

I think it looks good! This book does not always emphasize how beautiful and handsome the heroine and hero are. Instead, it uses more professional psychological knowledge and uses delicate details to bring the relationship closer. I feel that after reading too many novels where a bunch of women compete for the male protagonist and a bunch of boys like the female protagonist as soon as they travel through time, this is a breath of fresh air. It is close to real life and the language is relatively beautiful. I think it's fine. Although the score is relatively low, it will definitely come up later~

So good quality! ! ! Doubts are intertwined, but the truth cannot be buried. Believe in the country, believe in the party, believe in justice✊ I'm so excited But it's so hard, and the price is still heavy. If you don't persist, no one will really give you justice. No one can walk out, speak out, or write down.