They say rotten wood cannot be carved.
When Lu Chen was sixteen years old, everyone was watching in front of the soul-measuring monument.
The childhood sweetheart beside him glowed with purple light and his spiritual roots made the whole town rejoice.
When it was his turn, the monument was completely silent, not even the dimmest white light came on.
Waste spiritual roots.
His meridians were blocked and his spiritual energy could not enter his body. The world of immortality sentenced him to death for life.
My father didn't say a harsh word, but secretly struck a dagger that night.
He took the sword and embarked on a path that everyone said was impossible.
No one knew that there was a seed sleeping in his body that had not appeared for thousands of years.
It does not absorb spiritual energy, but it can be used in every fight,
Steal the most essential thing in the opponent's technique - Tao Yun.
What he cultivates is not the magic power, but the Tao itself.
But the Jiuzhou Immortal Realm hides a secret that no one knows:
Every time there is a breakthrough in a great realm, Heaven will demand a price from the monks.
It's not a spiritual stone, it's not a longevity element,
But it is the most precious thing you have at this moment.
The memory of first love. Father's longevity. Color in the eyes. The vitality of my hometown.
Do you think that the higher the realm of monks, the more they look like heartless people because they have cut off their mortal hearts?
No.
It's because every breakthrough strips away the "human" part of them.
Those powerful beings who ascended to immortality are nothing but empty shells that have been emptied of everything.
Lu Chen said: I can become stronger, but I don't accept this rule.
This is a story about a waste that reaches its peak step by step.
It is also a story about a man who tried his best to break an unfair path.
He will win.
But he has a lot to lose.
And what is lost will never come back.
Reader comments
After reading more than two hundred chapters, I felt that the descriptions were childish, novel, and just the right amount of youthful, without being too greasy or deliberate.
What touches me is the author's restrained writing style. It is very similar to Hemingway's zero-degree writing. The emotions are restrained and deep, which triggers the readers' imagination. It is a very good writing style.
Then there are the shortcomings. In the early stage, I felt that there was no outline. Some settings were messy and the timing was sometimes different. This is a small matter. However, the characters were relatively single. Maybe it was the author's preference. But this is not consistent with the actual situation. I hope the next book will improve.
Finally, I would like to praise the philosophy of the author's writing. Unlike other bad genres that either forcefully pretend to be convincing or repeat narratives, the philosophical sentences of this novel are quite relevant, and because of the restrained writing style, it leaves readers with almost a blank space (most of which is still acceptable).
Conclusion The work is not 99% perfect, but the author can look forward to it. I also hope the author will reply to the message! ! ! I want to talk about the plot with you! Stop being immersed in your own world!
(This is my first time writing a long review. If there is anything wrong, please let me know)
The writing is clear and comfortable to read. It is not a brainless article, which is relatively rare in Tomato. The description of the human world and the relationship between the characters is relatively immature and slightly flawed, which is a common problem in some novels. But since the platform is on Tomato and he is a new writer, he deserves full marks.
I've read about 100 chapters, and it's pretty good. It's a breath of fresh air among immortal cultivators. I enjoyed reading it. Although there are some minor flaws, it's nothing in Tomato. It's not a brainless article. The portrayal of people is impressive.
The content is vivid and the plot is novel. There are flaws in the details but it also leaves room for reading, writing and thinking.
The protagonist of the story who refuses to admit defeat and works hard is very full and vivid. I really like this kind of positive energy [like] [like] [like] This book is worth recommending [love] [love] [love]
It's too plain. I hope there's a better overall approach or that the writing style is less plain.
Nervous, beautiful and vivid! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Different Very different
Okay, it was explained very carefully.
Most of the novels about cultivating immortals are good at the beginning, but then they become unreliable at the end. I hope this one will always be as good as this one.
Very good, it interprets Chinese Kung Fu from another perspective!
The writing is good, the idea is novel, and it feels refreshing! I hope this feeling can keep me going...
The writing is smooth, the profile is rigorous, organized, and the IQ is online.
It's okay, it's a bit novel, you can watch it first [laughs]
The writing is fresh, without too many embellishments, and gives you an immersive feeling.
Delicate writing and good writing style👍👍👍
It feels like this master is in charge of management! [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]
It looks good from the front, but I haven't seen the back yet.
Storyline: New structure, unconventional and fascinating.
So far, the plot is okay, not so draggy, and the character development is okay.
After reading more than two hundred chapters, I felt that the descriptions were childish, novel, and just the right amount of youthful, without being too greasy or deliberate. What touches me is the author's restrained writing style. It is very similar to Hemingway's zero-degree writing. The emotions are restrained and deep, which triggers the readers' imagination. It is a very good writing style. Then there are the shortcomings. In the early stage, I felt that there was no outline. Some settings were messy and the timing was sometimes different. This is a small matter. However, the characters were relatively single. Maybe it was the author's preference. But this is not consistent with the actual situation. I hope the next book will improve. Finally, I would like to praise the philosophy of the author's writing. Unlike other bad genres that either forcefully pretend to be convincing or repeat narratives, the philosophical sentences of this novel are quite relevant, and because of the restrained writing style, it leaves readers with almost a blank space (most of which is still acceptable). Conclusion The work is not 99% perfect, but the author can look forward to it. I also hope the author will reply to the message! ! ! I want to talk about the plot with you! Stop being immersed in your own world! (This is my first time writing a long review. If there is anything wrong, please let me know)
The writing is clear and comfortable to read. It is not a brainless article, which is relatively rare in Tomato. The description of the human world and the relationship between the characters is relatively immature and slightly flawed, which is a common problem in some novels. But since the platform is on Tomato and he is a new writer, he deserves full marks.
I've read about 100 chapters, and it's pretty good. It's a breath of fresh air among immortal cultivators. I enjoyed reading it. Although there are some minor flaws, it's nothing in Tomato. It's not a brainless article. The portrayal of people is impressive.
The content is vivid and the plot is novel. There are flaws in the details but it also leaves room for reading, writing and thinking.
The protagonist of the story who refuses to admit defeat and works hard is very full and vivid. I really like this kind of positive energy [like] [like] [like] This book is worth recommending [love] [love] [love]
It's too plain. I hope there's a better overall approach or that the writing style is less plain.
Nervous, beautiful and vivid! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Different Very different
Okay, it was explained very carefully.
Most of the novels about cultivating immortals are good at the beginning, but then they become unreliable at the end. I hope this one will always be as good as this one.
Very good, it interprets Chinese Kung Fu from another perspective!
The writing is good, the idea is novel, and it feels refreshing! I hope this feeling can keep me going...
The writing is smooth, the profile is rigorous, organized, and the IQ is online.
It's okay, it's a bit novel, you can watch it first [laughs]
The writing is fresh, without too many embellishments, and gives you an immersive feeling.
Delicate writing and good writing style👍👍👍
It feels like this master is in charge of management! [Laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]
It looks good from the front, but I haven't seen the back yet.
Storyline: New structure, unconventional and fascinating.
So far, the plot is okay, not so draggy, and the character development is okay.