I Love Sleeping, but Hermione Is Paying Attention to Me

I am looking at the single female protagonist Hermione. The characters of Hermione and the male protagonist are both okay. Personally, I feel that the biggest shortcoming is that the writing style is too AI, as if the AI ​​ran it over and revised it again. The reading experience is slightly poor, but the single female protagonist Hermione makes up for this very well. There could be more emotional scenes, and the male protagonist is obviously already very strong, so we can design some highlight plots that are exclusive to him. Situations that are small highlights of the character, such as catching Rita, have been moved to the male protagonist too many times. The biggest shortcoming is that it is too AI and makes it tiring to watch. The advantage is that the characters are well designed. But I really didn't understand the meaning of the descriptions of Luna and Qiu Zhang in the middle. The sudden appearance of these two people in those chapters scared me to death, thinking that there would be more female protagonists. The main reason was that there was an inexplicable feeling that there was no connection between the plot and the plot. In the middle of Qiu Zhang, I felt like I had fallen in love with the male protagonist () But when I first saw the title of the book, I thought the male protagonist would be a story about a human library where Hermione learns knowledge from his brain ()

I finished reading it. I originally planned to finish it in a day and a half, but there were too many things to deal with, so I also forgot how many days to finish it. — Anyway, let's get to the point The author of this book has some inconveniences that need to be improved, but I can tolerate it. Although some people or even most people don't like it, I still hope that the author can improve it. I feel that the protagonist of this book is no longer a human being. He was well portrayed at the beginning, but later I felt... But the protagonist in the setting... Is relieved. He is a good boy, although his heart has grown up. Hermione is pretty good... I like it very much, but unfortunately I think there are a bit few emotional scenes, but I can only write about it when the children grow up... As for the reason for giving five stars, I have promised to help the author... What's more, the author can write... Right? — "Angelos" Volume 2: A different path against fate Chapter 47: Long time no see Angelos looked at Eton Fokray and bowed forward, full of sincerity. "I apologize to you Mr. Fookray, I shouldn't have questioned you..."

It's very interesting. I beg the author not to stop updating [laughs]

A very novel setting, "a boy imprisoned by knowledge". But I think there is one thing I want to say. I don't know if it was written with AI. The text lacks a sense of "humanity", or the characters' emotions are not revealed, and it feels very bland, but it's not bad.

The writing is very good and it is a novel worth reading.

The author has no experience writing novels for the first time, so there may be some problems. I hope you can bear with me. I will correct the problems I pointed out when I see them. I am deeply sorry if it brings you a bad experience. If you think it is okay, please leave a comment to support me. Thank you all.

Is it Hermione, the single heroine?

It's very beautiful. At least it ranks among the top Harry Potter fanfics I've read. I like the warm and plain style very much. I hope the author can continue to maintain it. I will keep reading it.

This book is so well written, it's a manly thing

I have read a lot of Harry Potter fanfics, and this one is considered to be relatively well-written. My suggestion is that it is best not to write long paragraphs without breaking them into paragraphs, as this will affect the reading experience.

A good book.

The writing is not bad. It would be better if the paragraphs were better divided. I feel a little tired of reading a long string of words. It would be better if it is divided into paragraphs.

Very pretty.

I'm curious why the first three chapters are in first person and then change to third person.